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Finally got around to finishing this off
killed the wings to make myself feel better ;w;
killed the wings to make myself feel better ;w;
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nice work, but glow stick, techno dance, raver gear+wicked wiccan enchanted sword= why? It's a strange concept to be sure as the elements don't really go together. makes me wonder if there is a story behind this piece to explain sort of the conflicting elements.
never the less, the art is solid man. cheers.
never the less, the art is solid man. cheers.
Actually Jazz is my character. And his colors here aren’t what they’re supposed to be, though it’s still beautiful. He’s a lyger. And a demon of sorts. Think similar to Dante from Devil May Cry. He has powers that he draws from the glowsticks, which flow through his sword. And the symbol is a mark of his tribe. Its branded onto his right bicep, and on his sword.
huh, ok, well, the commissioner did what was asked. Um, uhuh. gotta say, the "tribal symbol" is a wiccan pentagram, and gets power from glowsticks? Ok. that's...original >.> so is comparing him to the most bishy/badass/fanned over character of all time. I'm sorry to diss, but my comment was to the artist of the work. when you responded to me, I mistook you for the artist even.
If I was critiquing you I would say, your character writing needs some work. here: http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm run him through this and be honest and then maybe see what you can do to midigate the issues some?
Sorry, again, not to be rude, but I kinda hate it when I go to comment on art and the commissioner of said piece decends in to defend their baby. It really makes it a lame experience.
Sorry to be harsh. but yeah.
If I was critiquing you I would say, your character writing needs some work. here: http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm run him through this and be honest and then maybe see what you can do to midigate the issues some?
Sorry, again, not to be rude, but I kinda hate it when I go to comment on art and the commissioner of said piece decends in to defend their baby. It really makes it a lame experience.
Sorry to be harsh. but yeah.
Dude I wasn’t trying to attack you in any way, and I think its pretty shitty of you to be attacking me for MY character. I’m aware that it’s the wiccan symbol. it’s a part of his tribe thing. I havent FULLY developed him as a character yet because I haven’t rly had the time. And as far as I’M concerned, there are no “issues” with him. I’m sorry you see it that way, but I don’t really care, I didn’t make him to please other people. And I’m not trying to “defend my baby” AT ALL. I saw in your comment that you were confused about some of his aspects so I thought I’d be kind and explain him, since the person who drew him doesn’t have your answers because he’s not theirs. I didn’t think I was gonna get bitched out.
"and I think its pretty shitty of you to be attacking me for MY character."-- I love how you try to defuse it by claimiung you weren't attacking but then you claim that I was. Use the insight you expect others to use for you.
"I havent FULLY developed him as a character yet because I haven’t rly had the time."-- you fail to see the point. I critiqued the artist. when you swooped in, you made it your problem, so I offered you my thoughts so we could play on your field. Since you didn't draw it, I had only the concept to say anything about.
"And as far as I’M concerned, there are no “issues” with him."-- That's sad. I guess he's perfect and I just can't see his greatness. Ooooh that marry sue litmus test would love you XDDD
"I’m sorry you see it that way"-- no your not, your actually raging about it.
" but I don’t really care" LOL!!!! yes you do! you are bawwing about it! If you didn't care, then you would not have taken all the time here to write out your points, you would not have been upset my my crit, you would have been able to see where I was comming from about you defending a work that was not done by you, and further more, you wouldn't have been even contacting people on that basis in the first place, being fully comfortable to let the artist field their own critiques and you just be happy with your work and any issues are privately discuss with the artist. But as it stands, you do care. you care alot. And you've made me and what I said into an attack and turned me into the back guy because I dared to call your bullshit on your perceived hallowed ground.
"I didn’t make him to please other people." Then why does it burn you up so bad that I think he's not perfect and could use some work as a character? and before you go "I never said I wanted people to think he was perfect!!!" yes you did, judt not directly. no one says something like that directly because it's pompous and arrogant, but you can't take critique on him so obviously...yeah.
"And I’m not trying to “defend my baby” AT ALL. " Yes you are XD otherwise this conversation would have been much more amicable and friendly. You think you are actually making a good case here that I was mistaken and you were meaning something totally benign and friendly? LOL you are making me dead right and this was utterly predicted. Oh, I had hoped you'd proove me wrong and that I could just go "ok, sorry for the misunderstanding. Maybe you could just let the artist field their comments though?" and that could have been that. But no, sadly. LOL
"I saw in your comment that you were confused about some of his aspects so I thought I’d be kind and explain him" so this was really all you should have said, if infact all the other stuff you said before it was true. Except for one point. You said "you thought you'd be kind." which at this sentence holds in context, is not what you were doing. you were puppyguarding him and making sure I didn't get the wrong impression. had you only said this though, I wouldn't have thought that. I would have agreed that it was my misunderstanding.
"I didn’t think I was gonna get bitched out." and that's the final sad point. I didn't "bitch you out." I told you some things I didn't like in what I percieved you were doing. If I was simply wrong about that, you could have just explained and I would have been like "oh, i'm an idiot, I'm sorry." Also, I gave you a fair crit that you could respond to because I can't comment on the art to you. There was no rudeness or anger or spite. I was genuinely trying to be helpful. That litmus test, I run my characters through it! It's a good test. It's helps. a lot.
Bottom line, you have acted very immature here. That's shameful, but it's shame on you, mate. Not me. So many times what could have been a simple miscommunication gets blown up by reactionary people. Shame that.
I'll be going now. If you reeeeaaaaallly feel you must respond and continue this bs further into the ground, do it in a note, please and respect this fine artists. ok. Cheers and better days. here's hoping you find five more people to love your characters and make you forget about me >.>
"I havent FULLY developed him as a character yet because I haven’t rly had the time."-- you fail to see the point. I critiqued the artist. when you swooped in, you made it your problem, so I offered you my thoughts so we could play on your field. Since you didn't draw it, I had only the concept to say anything about.
"And as far as I’M concerned, there are no “issues” with him."-- That's sad. I guess he's perfect and I just can't see his greatness. Ooooh that marry sue litmus test would love you XDDD
"I’m sorry you see it that way"-- no your not, your actually raging about it.
" but I don’t really care" LOL!!!! yes you do! you are bawwing about it! If you didn't care, then you would not have taken all the time here to write out your points, you would not have been upset my my crit, you would have been able to see where I was comming from about you defending a work that was not done by you, and further more, you wouldn't have been even contacting people on that basis in the first place, being fully comfortable to let the artist field their own critiques and you just be happy with your work and any issues are privately discuss with the artist. But as it stands, you do care. you care alot. And you've made me and what I said into an attack and turned me into the back guy because I dared to call your bullshit on your perceived hallowed ground.
"I didn’t make him to please other people." Then why does it burn you up so bad that I think he's not perfect and could use some work as a character? and before you go "I never said I wanted people to think he was perfect!!!" yes you did, judt not directly. no one says something like that directly because it's pompous and arrogant, but you can't take critique on him so obviously...yeah.
"And I’m not trying to “defend my baby” AT ALL. " Yes you are XD otherwise this conversation would have been much more amicable and friendly. You think you are actually making a good case here that I was mistaken and you were meaning something totally benign and friendly? LOL you are making me dead right and this was utterly predicted. Oh, I had hoped you'd proove me wrong and that I could just go "ok, sorry for the misunderstanding. Maybe you could just let the artist field their comments though?" and that could have been that. But no, sadly. LOL
"I saw in your comment that you were confused about some of his aspects so I thought I’d be kind and explain him" so this was really all you should have said, if infact all the other stuff you said before it was true. Except for one point. You said "you thought you'd be kind." which at this sentence holds in context, is not what you were doing. you were puppyguarding him and making sure I didn't get the wrong impression. had you only said this though, I wouldn't have thought that. I would have agreed that it was my misunderstanding.
"I didn’t think I was gonna get bitched out." and that's the final sad point. I didn't "bitch you out." I told you some things I didn't like in what I percieved you were doing. If I was simply wrong about that, you could have just explained and I would have been like "oh, i'm an idiot, I'm sorry." Also, I gave you a fair crit that you could respond to because I can't comment on the art to you. There was no rudeness or anger or spite. I was genuinely trying to be helpful. That litmus test, I run my characters through it! It's a good test. It's helps. a lot.
Bottom line, you have acted very immature here. That's shameful, but it's shame on you, mate. Not me. So many times what could have been a simple miscommunication gets blown up by reactionary people. Shame that.
I'll be going now. If you reeeeaaaaallly feel you must respond and continue this bs further into the ground, do it in a note, please and respect this fine artists. ok. Cheers and better days. here's hoping you find five more people to love your characters and make you forget about me >.>
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