
Nope, it's not adult
*Watches large crowd of people storm out of the room in anger*
o_____o
Well I wrote this a few weeks back, but the first 4 pages were...well they were crap, to be honest. So I finally put aside some time to re-write them, and now it's ready for submission.
This details the life of Nexus and Keisha and how they met Yin, the third member of my team.
I hope those of you who don't mind non-adult stories get some enjoyment from this. And I hope you can sift through the pages, it's kinda long =/
Part one is here, if you're interested.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/246439/
[Dragon Nexus, Keisha, Keitoshi and Yin are copyright to me]
*Watches large crowd of people storm out of the room in anger*
o_____o
Well I wrote this a few weeks back, but the first 4 pages were...well they were crap, to be honest. So I finally put aside some time to re-write them, and now it's ready for submission.
This details the life of Nexus and Keisha and how they met Yin, the third member of my team.
I hope those of you who don't mind non-adult stories get some enjoyment from this. And I hope you can sift through the pages, it's kinda long =/
Part one is here, if you're interested.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/246439/
[Dragon Nexus, Keisha, Keitoshi and Yin are copyright to me]
Category Story / Sonic
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 115 x 120px
File Size 72 kB
Well, being totally honest, i haven't read the whole thing yet, been running around the house cleaning and having a bit too -much- fun.
But as much as i read, you've once again proven your great skills of writting. Your with it and you make it incredible detailed as i mentioned before. If you have a good imagination, i'm not in a single doubt you can see the whole thing happening before your eyes, which is basicly how any good writer would write.
I'm getting the sense of Nexus is bit of an ass hole and the kinda cold darkish type, yet not gothic or emo of any kind, just a tough alone strong guy, whom prefer having things his way and only way he feels that things will be so, would be by doing it himself. I sense he some what kinda doubts in those, whom are not having some sort of skill or experince when it comes to mobians, fighting and generaly war, a simple friendship isnt just good enough for him at this point.
Am i getting this right?
Any way, great work DN. Your general writting work is brilliant!
But as much as i read, you've once again proven your great skills of writting. Your with it and you make it incredible detailed as i mentioned before. If you have a good imagination, i'm not in a single doubt you can see the whole thing happening before your eyes, which is basicly how any good writer would write.
I'm getting the sense of Nexus is bit of an ass hole and the kinda cold darkish type, yet not gothic or emo of any kind, just a tough alone strong guy, whom prefer having things his way and only way he feels that things will be so, would be by doing it himself. I sense he some what kinda doubts in those, whom are not having some sort of skill or experince when it comes to mobians, fighting and generaly war, a simple friendship isnt just good enough for him at this point.
Am i getting this right?
Any way, great work DN. Your general writting work is brilliant!
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