This was for my English 101 class, and I thought that you all might be interested in seeing what I did. I have one other comic that I am going to post a little later on... and I am strongly considering making this an ongoing comic strip. Let me know if you would be interested in seeing more. :3
Here is the commentary I wrote to go along with this:
Most people are familiar with the incarnation of Lilith that used to be in the Bible. Lilith was originally included in the Book of Genesis since it was based off a Sumerian/Babylonian creation story which had her created from the earth along with Adam. That portion of the creation story was removed in a later revision. There are several that argue it became excluded because the tale was no longer considered relevant.
I would personally like to think if Lilith were to hear about such a “big change” to the “records”, she would be a bit irked. I thought it would be amusing and more contemporary to make the tale be about the records of a club called the “Eden Gardening Club”.
Here is the commentary I wrote to go along with this:
Most people are familiar with the incarnation of Lilith that used to be in the Bible. Lilith was originally included in the Book of Genesis since it was based off a Sumerian/Babylonian creation story which had her created from the earth along with Adam. That portion of the creation story was removed in a later revision. There are several that argue it became excluded because the tale was no longer considered relevant.
I would personally like to think if Lilith were to hear about such a “big change” to the “records”, she would be a bit irked. I thought it would be amusing and more contemporary to make the tale be about the records of a club called the “Eden Gardening Club”.
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i do say you should keep it ongoing sounds like it could be interesting.
Poor Lilith...
But I LOVE these characters! They gave me quite a laugh and I'd love to see more of em! The humor is thought provoking and I love the modern spin. Inspires me. If you ever need help I'd be willing to do so with this comic. ^^
The characters are quite nice and it was a nice story, always can use more humor that also provokes thought at the same time.