Too Much Trouble for One Day - Colson's contest winning entr
by PepperCoyote
Musician
15 years ago
Here's something that I wrote to a guitar track that
sweetleaves provided
The strumming you hear is what he gave us as a prompt. Everything else was done by myself. Do you like? So did he! I've been featured as one of the top 3 submitted entries and now I'm on the album. Check it out here! http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4719122
Lyrics:
if you find it, gotta let it go
for cheap containment, I can barely swallow
if you want it, let it grow
for my entertainment, put me on your show
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
it breeds from this,
faith shatters on the solid walls
expressions of a learned helplessness
the pain scraped from bliss,
another empty metaphor surrounds
a frightened soul expressionless
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
oh
this is the part where everything starts, can I find another rhyme to keep emotion moving closer can I stop, go, lemme know, does it make your heart glow, find it then you rip then you never let it out no.
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
sweetleaves providedThe strumming you hear is what he gave us as a prompt. Everything else was done by myself. Do you like? So did he! I've been featured as one of the top 3 submitted entries and now I'm on the album. Check it out here! http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4719122
Lyrics:
if you find it, gotta let it go
for cheap containment, I can barely swallow
if you want it, let it grow
for my entertainment, put me on your show
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
it breeds from this,
faith shatters on the solid walls
expressions of a learned helplessness
the pain scraped from bliss,
another empty metaphor surrounds
a frightened soul expressionless
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
oh
this is the part where everything starts, can I find another rhyme to keep emotion moving closer can I stop, go, lemme know, does it make your heart glow, find it then you rip then you never let it out no.
acidic liquid on his skin
won’t melt away the shroud of anger
one made of wood, one salty grin
we have to let him know that it was
too much trouble for one day
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and yeah I hope so
thank you very much!
I like the really fast part
That's totally what i'm going for and what I like!
and now I like you. thank you
The biggest thing that I miss about old school country and bluegrass is the harmonies. Those tight, close chords just make me smile.
see "The statler brothers"
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And I like your evaluations.
I whipped this thing out in a day and was shocked that I was among the chosen to be on the album. Made me pretty happy ^^