I hate to be picky... but don't get me wrong. for it to be easier on yourself, i do advice you close up any holes of the inking..
1. foot
2. the back leg where the "under" shirt comes in contact with the pant leg
3. Around the fingers of the hand on hip
4. Both arm pits
5 sleeve tuffs (shoulder thingys)
6. Yo-Yo and arm behind it.
7. Shoulders
8. Hair in the back falling behind the the shoulders

And it may be wise and cleaner coloring if you can get some of the pencil lines on the flowers, hair, eyes, and lips. though it those are there for a reason, so be it.
other than that. looks good. After a while things will become easier and smoother once you get use to it.

for colors umm... idk about orient... sorry

I cannot continue until she gives me some damn colors >:\

and also number 8. is not hair its a bandana like what ryu from street fighter wears

ah i see, my bad, its just you need complete lines is all im trying to say. cause when tou go to use magic wand to select an area to color it will select anything that that area is in contact with , so if there is a hole the selection ants will leak out

actually I don't have to close in any lines another artist just told me that ^^

hmm..

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4599000/

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