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I'm thinking of either Razzle/Raz or Rasputin for his name.
I'm thinking of either Razzle/Raz or Rasputin for his name.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Rat
Size 600 x 1000px
File Size 366.1 kB
Didnt want to give my normal generic "awesome job" so here goes... I see youre always wanting critique on your stuff. Seeing that you are far more advanced artistically than I am, its hard for me to spot where improvement is needed. On your little ratatastic fellow here, I would have to brutally nitpick him to death to find anything at all that needs fixing. Ive got an idea or two, but where one may see a need for something different, that might just be a characteristic of your particular style. I hope you dont take any offense to any of this, like I said, you blow me away when it comes to talent, just trying to help out a fellow artist.
Ill start on your shading. The top one is dead on to me, I see no need for improvement there. But on the one below, I see on his torso, nothing really wrong, but with the skills you have, ill bet you could manipulate the shades a little bit better to match his bone structure, even fur contours. What is there is epic by all means, but I think that you could perhaps try this approach.
Furs next. For the style you have, I dont see any need for improvement on the way you draw fur. I do think if you wanted to get more detailed, you could probably pull it off very easily by using shades like i described above. This guy, or even screech (if he has fur) would be a good candidate for this idea.
Up for the eyes. I do think you could make his eyes a little more lifelike, they dont seem shiney enough to me. I always picture these little guys with deep dark black eyes, with a very good reflection of their surroundings. Other than that, great job!
As far as color goes, your imagination is beyond measure, Im actually envious of the ideas you come up with...
I really cant see anything else that I would change. I love the way you have the finished rendering over your original sketch. Dont know why, I just think its cool to see bits and pieces of the original.
I doubt any of my ramblings will be of any good use, but eh, I tried. I truly do know how you feel when you ask for critique and everyone says good job. Ive pretty much begged people to pull my stuff apart, be brutal, point things out, but to no avail. Your stuff is very awesome by all means, and I hope this doesnt rub you the wrong way, just trying to give a suggestion here or there when I know you really want some input.
Oh yea... Awesome job, like, totally epic and stuff!!!
Ill start on your shading. The top one is dead on to me, I see no need for improvement there. But on the one below, I see on his torso, nothing really wrong, but with the skills you have, ill bet you could manipulate the shades a little bit better to match his bone structure, even fur contours. What is there is epic by all means, but I think that you could perhaps try this approach.
Furs next. For the style you have, I dont see any need for improvement on the way you draw fur. I do think if you wanted to get more detailed, you could probably pull it off very easily by using shades like i described above. This guy, or even screech (if he has fur) would be a good candidate for this idea.
Up for the eyes. I do think you could make his eyes a little more lifelike, they dont seem shiney enough to me. I always picture these little guys with deep dark black eyes, with a very good reflection of their surroundings. Other than that, great job!
As far as color goes, your imagination is beyond measure, Im actually envious of the ideas you come up with...
I really cant see anything else that I would change. I love the way you have the finished rendering over your original sketch. Dont know why, I just think its cool to see bits and pieces of the original.
I doubt any of my ramblings will be of any good use, but eh, I tried. I truly do know how you feel when you ask for critique and everyone says good job. Ive pretty much begged people to pull my stuff apart, be brutal, point things out, but to no avail. Your stuff is very awesome by all means, and I hope this doesnt rub you the wrong way, just trying to give a suggestion here or there when I know you really want some input.
Oh yea... Awesome job, like, totally epic and stuff!!!
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