I drew this comic. So read it.

What actually happened here is that I got a wild hair to do a drawn ending to a roleplay. (Yes, me= huge nerd. Shut up)

This actually turned out... Sorta okay. Legs and arms in every panel make we cringe, and I purty near faint with disgust every time I see panels 2 and four (Especially two..)

The rest didn't come out all too bad. Panel one, in fact, I kinda like.

Most of the mistakes are immediately noticeable, really. Just look for them. Keep searching, you'll find it.

Some other notes:
- Why is it that I actually do better at inking with a cheap ballpoint than I do with a f***ing expensive art pen? The hell?
- I really need to practice my comic assembly...This was just kinda patched together in MS paint. It doesn't look too bad, but I think I can do better work.
- Now, I'm not trying to toot my own horn here, so to speak, but I kinda like this style. I don't know what it is, but the scratchy feel and whatnot just rubs me the right way. I shall have to continue doing this.

Victy "Ripper Roo" Danch and Lyra belong to  rainwhisker , used with permission.
Tavi is mine.
So is the art, meathead.

Oh, and the roleplaying site I go to is http://twilightus.net/feila/

Later, furballs!