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An excellent comic thus far, brimming with the potential for more to come.
Having read the rest of the pages, I know this not to be the case, but I figured that kick could have lead to some possible brain damage and/or amnesia of sorts, perhaps going further into wolf mode for Lance over here with those blue outlines of his. Still, it does show Lance to be a resilent wolf if nothing else.
Out of curiosity though, will Lance’s more human side come to influence the pack in some way? Shot in the dark here, but I figure if there any pups, perhaps he could take them under his wing so to speak to educate them about the world in a fashion that the others cannot, perhaps leading to further conflict and other story opportunistic down the path. Seems you already have this story pretty figured out, so probably not, but it’s nice to think about going deeper into this comic.
Speaking of which, keep up the pace you have. I lust for more, but don’t burn yourself out if you can. Seen way too many web comic artists burn themselves out over the years to hope for a completed web comic, but I am hoping yours will be one of the few exceptions to that rule. If you haven’t already, could you post this story to a place like Comic Fury? It may be a hassle, but it helps to keep track of these web comics a bit easier since they are consolidated in one place, plus the layout is friendly and familiar to that of the late Smack Jeeves. If not, that’s fine.
Anyway, keep up the good work mate, you’re doing well here.
Having read the rest of the pages, I know this not to be the case, but I figured that kick could have lead to some possible brain damage and/or amnesia of sorts, perhaps going further into wolf mode for Lance over here with those blue outlines of his. Still, it does show Lance to be a resilent wolf if nothing else.
Out of curiosity though, will Lance’s more human side come to influence the pack in some way? Shot in the dark here, but I figure if there any pups, perhaps he could take them under his wing so to speak to educate them about the world in a fashion that the others cannot, perhaps leading to further conflict and other story opportunistic down the path. Seems you already have this story pretty figured out, so probably not, but it’s nice to think about going deeper into this comic.
Speaking of which, keep up the pace you have. I lust for more, but don’t burn yourself out if you can. Seen way too many web comic artists burn themselves out over the years to hope for a completed web comic, but I am hoping yours will be one of the few exceptions to that rule. If you haven’t already, could you post this story to a place like Comic Fury? It may be a hassle, but it helps to keep track of these web comics a bit easier since they are consolidated in one place, plus the layout is friendly and familiar to that of the late Smack Jeeves. If not, that’s fine.
Anyway, keep up the good work mate, you’re doing well here.
Karkland, thank you so much for the good feedback.
Yeah Vance is a far more resilient wolf than he realizes, that could be due to him being a werewolf over a normal wolf.
As for the human side to influence, there will be spurts but also keep an eye on Akela, he is also going to have influence in the pack for sure. =^.^=
And yes we are planning to keep the pace to avoid burnout. We keep about a 10-15 page buffer at all times of pages to post so in case something happens we (UrbanVixen and I) can take a breather. We have the entire script written out and ready to go for the comic, so no matter what there will be a conclusion to the story. ^.^
As for hosting it on a server thats not a bad idea actually, I might look into doing that. If you have any questions please feel free to reach out to either of us.
Many MANY thanks for the feedback
MAU!
Yeah Vance is a far more resilient wolf than he realizes, that could be due to him being a werewolf over a normal wolf.
As for the human side to influence, there will be spurts but also keep an eye on Akela, he is also going to have influence in the pack for sure. =^.^=
And yes we are planning to keep the pace to avoid burnout. We keep about a 10-15 page buffer at all times of pages to post so in case something happens we (UrbanVixen and I) can take a breather. We have the entire script written out and ready to go for the comic, so no matter what there will be a conclusion to the story. ^.^
As for hosting it on a server thats not a bad idea actually, I might look into doing that. If you have any questions please feel free to reach out to either of us.
Many MANY thanks for the feedback
MAU!
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