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The third part. Kyr continues his quest to find the secret of his town. But as he meets with Nalva a certain somebody barges in to stop them. But as Kyr chases after him/her he finds something much more than a wall in the forest.
Sorry if this seems late. If been rather distracted lately. I should be writing but I've been working one a new art pic and been busy with homework. Also I got GTA3 on my school laptop so thats been distracting. I mean how am I supposed to write when I could be carjacking people and running over hookers? XD
Anyway, I feel like Im moving too fast with the story. I might break this part in two and start making them shorter. What do you people think?
Sorry if this seems late. If been rather distracted lately. I should be writing but I've been working one a new art pic and been busy with homework. Also I got GTA3 on my school laptop so thats been distracting. I mean how am I supposed to write when I could be carjacking people and running over hookers? XD
Anyway, I feel like Im moving too fast with the story. I might break this part in two and start making them shorter. What do you people think?
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Man, I could recognize your ciffhangers anywhere :p
Very interesting story, I'm really looking forward to where you're going with this!
As for the length, I dunno for others, but what matters to me is if there's good content or no :p I can tell at the beginning you spend a lot of time writing that (man you write good! I feel like I'm missing so many expressions in english!), what with the quality of the work and the muzzles and all. The end doesn't sound rushed but it's a little short after all the descriptions in the beginning.
Apart from that, keep writing!
Very interesting story, I'm really looking forward to where you're going with this!
As for the length, I dunno for others, but what matters to me is if there's good content or no :p I can tell at the beginning you spend a lot of time writing that (man you write good! I feel like I'm missing so many expressions in english!), what with the quality of the work and the muzzles and all. The end doesn't sound rushed but it's a little short after all the descriptions in the beginning.
Apart from that, keep writing!
Oh posh. You should just write during all your college classes! Or at least the ones that you know you wont use in your adult life yet you pay hundreds of dollars for them!
Can you give me her number? I want to call her and say "STOP WASTING YOUR FURRY BOYFRIENDS TIME! He wants to write furry stories with lots and lots of sex, gay sex, trans-gender people and cave orgies!" XD
Can you give me her number? I want to call her and say "STOP WASTING YOUR FURRY BOYFRIENDS TIME! He wants to write furry stories with lots and lots of sex, gay sex, trans-gender people and cave orgies!" XD
Oh excuse me! Mr. Higher up person man! I dunno. SURE!
What? You dont your lady-mate's number by heart? Some boyfreind you are! Well I guess its gay sex only because you had two male furries tottally go at one another in a cave with *I quote* squishing sounds.
Well YOU wrote it! And is it better or worse than strange canuck?
What? You dont your lady-mate's number by heart? Some boyfreind you are! Well I guess its gay sex only because you had two male furries tottally go at one another in a cave with *I quote* squishing sounds.
Well YOU wrote it! And is it better or worse than strange canuck?
Not higher up. It's just I had to go there to get the courses I wanted. AND NO I WILL NOT FAIL!!!
I know eh? It makes her furious :p And is it really gay if they're intersexed? :p It would be more sort of les :p
It just makes me laugh, is all :p And canuck would be good too, so then people would know where I come from! :D
I know eh? It makes her furious :p And is it really gay if they're intersexed? :p It would be more sort of les :p
It just makes me laugh, is all :p And canuck would be good too, so then people would know where I come from! :D
Then why bother to correct me? Hm? DO IT! Just dont go to Japan! They have enough people there already!
We you call them males so I guess its gay. Why did you have to make this whole strange sex thing? Whats wrong with the basic two?
Well canuks are already strange so I guess it wasnt that much of a shift.
We you call them males so I guess its gay. Why did you have to make this whole strange sex thing? Whats wrong with the basic two?
Well canuks are already strange so I guess it wasnt that much of a shift.
I was thinking about it, but apparently I have to read kanji to go there, and people are somewhat unfriendly. I also heard they're all pretty much stiff pricks, so I want to go there and do random stuff just for the heck of it :p
It's gay, which you approve of :p As for the strange twisted sex thing, you'll see when I get up to chapter 6 or so :p
It's not that I'm a canuck, it's that I'm part dutchie! :p Anything compared to a dutchie is a downgrade in silliness :p
It's gay, which you approve of :p As for the strange twisted sex thing, you'll see when I get up to chapter 6 or so :p
It's not that I'm a canuck, it's that I'm part dutchie! :p Anything compared to a dutchie is a downgrade in silliness :p
Besides they'd called you a Gajin and make fun of you! I say just get all your electronics, sex robots, and manga from theree and thats it. And sushi.
Im pretty sure Ill be dead by then at the pace you're going.
Oh please. Dutch? No one cares about them ether! You're just trying to make a double negitave work! This is adding not multiplying!
Im pretty sure Ill be dead by then at the pace you're going.
Oh please. Dutch? No one cares about them ether! You're just trying to make a double negitave work! This is adding not multiplying!
The evil eye! And someone might just throw you a cursed ofuda too!
Nyah nyah! I'm not THAT slow! And now that I don't have to worry too much about the exams, Imma focus on my stories now!
But mathematically, -useful does not equal lame, therefore the answer should have been WIN - useful = So-what-don't-care-it's-win-anyways
Nyah nyah! I'm not THAT slow! And now that I don't have to worry too much about the exams, Imma focus on my stories now!
But mathematically, -useful does not equal lame, therefore the answer should have been WIN - useful = So-what-don't-care-it's-win-anyways
Ofuda! Japanese spells you write o a paper to ward off the evil eye, or call it upon your enemies! :p
Motivation. That which I deeply lack :(
But it was Dutch times Canadian divided by the square root of ignored times ten at the power of awesomness
Therefore even if Dutch * Canadian = - useful, it does not apply! :p
Motivation. That which I deeply lack :(
But it was Dutch times Canadian divided by the square root of ignored times ten at the power of awesomness
Therefore even if Dutch * Canadian = - useful, it does not apply! :p
oooo!!! Teach me how! I has the enimies that deserve the eye of evilness!
Go drink a bunch of energy drinks. That way youll have so much energy that youll have no choice but to burn energy and write!
............................. Dutch + Canuck = LAME!!!! I dont know how it works it just does!... Like magnets,
Damn it i just lost the game.
Go drink a bunch of energy drinks. That way youll have so much energy that youll have no choice but to burn energy and write!
............................. Dutch + Canuck = LAME!!!! I dont know how it works it just does!... Like magnets,
Damn it i just lost the game.
I do not know, however I'm sure if you go to Japan, buddhist monks will be happy to teach you some basic warding and bad luck spells! :p
Or I could burn my energy by running around screaming, ripping my hair out and banging my head on a wall :p
Yeah! It works, just like creationism works because God said so! :p
randomly inserted in a comment You just lost the game! :p
Or I could burn my energy by running around screaming, ripping my hair out and banging my head on a wall :p
Yeah! It works, just like creationism works because God said so! :p
randomly inserted in a comment You just lost the game! :p
It shall be a perfect world! But only under my rule!
Okay here it is, why vampires cant have sex. See in the origonal Dracula it says that vampires dont have blood. And since an erection is blood flowing into the male reproductive organ. So in short, vampires cant get hards ons.
Its odd at first but you get used to it. Or at least Im used to most of it
Okay here it is, why vampires cant have sex. See in the origonal Dracula it says that vampires dont have blood. And since an erection is blood flowing into the male reproductive organ. So in short, vampires cant get hards ons.
Its odd at first but you get used to it. Or at least Im used to most of it
Dont worry. In my new world order all furries shall be safe and become a higher class! But the disney channel shall be destroyed! Not Disney itself, just the disney channel.
A friend told it to me. I guess they breed through bitting.... So every time they bite someone its both eating and sex.... Eeeww.
Naw, Im just used to the dirty things on FA. *mostly >.>* World domination will come later and I cant be a vampire! Ima werewolf!
A friend told it to me. I guess they breed through bitting.... So every time they bite someone its both eating and sex.... Eeeww.
Naw, Im just used to the dirty things on FA. *mostly >.>* World domination will come later and I cant be a vampire! Ima werewolf!
I was mostly thinking about the live action """"comedies""" they have on there. I shall place the Jonas Brothers so far under ground they will pray to see the sky! And while Im at it I want all the live action things on cartoon network to be destroyed as well...
I dont read twilight, I dont really have anything against the book itself its just the uber crazy fan girls that want to date vampires. And all the new vampire spin offs. But as a werewolf I guess Im automatically on team Jacob.
Dont worry. Soon the yiff virus will to your brain and youll like it. You can fight it like I did but it still got me. I think werewolves can kill all vampires.
I dont read twilight, I dont really have anything against the book itself its just the uber crazy fan girls that want to date vampires. And all the new vampire spin offs. But as a werewolf I guess Im automatically on team Jacob.
Dont worry. Soon the yiff virus will to your brain and youll like it. You can fight it like I did but it still got me. I think werewolves can kill all vampires.
They're also tring to bring back game shows. Which I think we be a GIANT failure of epic proportions. But I guess its a place for young actors to get noticed.
*GASP* Two movies!? As in one more than one?! You poor thing! Thank god you stopped at two! You might of died if you saw another!
I guess I should tell you this if youre a furry. Yiff = furry porn. The adult blocker should protect you from most but theres always a few that slip by..... And some things that are plain wrong *Shudder* Oh god... the horror.
*GASP* Two movies!? As in one more than one?! You poor thing! Thank god you stopped at two! You might of died if you saw another!
I guess I should tell you this if youre a furry. Yiff = furry porn. The adult blocker should protect you from most but theres always a few that slip by..... And some things that are plain wrong *Shudder* Oh god... the horror.
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