Nick looking leg in top frame, I like the visible bone between the muscles. Subtle but still detailed foot looks positioned well. Breasts look nice and full with broad shoulders. Her right hand looks strange with the lower arm not fitting the arm correctly in the middle frame.

Very nice nut shot. He'll feel THAT in the morning. The hair stranding on her head looks good. They flow in believable directions instead of all going one way.

I like G's head bending so long in the bottom frame. Looks like he's banging his forehead on her leg, willingly or not.

Good job.

thanks for the expert critics.
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