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i wrote this about going back to live with my dad.
Category Poetry / All
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Size 120 x 90px
File Size 853 B
Dad's suck and everything, I can understand but you contradict yourself in this poem right away. After everything line you say the opposite thing to what you just said. It kind of seems to me you were looking to just rhyme and not really write. Don't get me wrong its good to express yourself I'm just giving my opinion on the poem not your personal life.
yeah i get what your saying but you see i didnt really know what i wanted. my mom wanted to move halfway across country and i didnt want to so i would hav to stay with my dad. its that i wanted to go to his house to stay here but i hate the idea of living with him. im not 18 so i have to be with a parent
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