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ok well ummy i had this idea as a story so i wrote up a litle of it tell me what you think please no its not baby fur its more for adults but not porn
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One should be able to sum up anything in a single sentence, for this it would seem...
"Man loses his son in a shooting and kills the guy who shot him."
...which REALLY doesn't sound very interesting when you step back and look at it. It's a relatively bland idea which has been done time and time and TIME again. What is so different in your story from all the others already turned into cinema movies?
you have to ask yourself... What is the audience your writing for? Who is going to read this and why should they read it? What I read was not an idea for a story, it was a scene by itself. It seems you did what a lot of other people did and devise a scene of emotional power which has been played out several times already with the goal of just bringing that same evoked feeling for whatever purpose.
You have made a scene, a point of climax, and a struggle without purpose, and now you try to write a story around it which is a complicated and almost always unsuccessful way of doing it. One needs a reason to tell a story, a story needs to have a reason to be told to someone, someone needs to be able to learn something from the story which might change them in some way rather than just making them feel sad for random literature who's established context's purpose is to evoke those emotions alone with nothing else gained for the reader.
substance, reason, conflict, solution, origin, purpose, gain, loss. I'd suggest coming up with more original and possibly more creative and better written ideas for stories before dedicating so much time and effort towards something... only a few people might care to skim through.
"Man loses his son in a shooting and kills the guy who shot him."
...which REALLY doesn't sound very interesting when you step back and look at it. It's a relatively bland idea which has been done time and time and TIME again. What is so different in your story from all the others already turned into cinema movies?
you have to ask yourself... What is the audience your writing for? Who is going to read this and why should they read it? What I read was not an idea for a story, it was a scene by itself. It seems you did what a lot of other people did and devise a scene of emotional power which has been played out several times already with the goal of just bringing that same evoked feeling for whatever purpose.
You have made a scene, a point of climax, and a struggle without purpose, and now you try to write a story around it which is a complicated and almost always unsuccessful way of doing it. One needs a reason to tell a story, a story needs to have a reason to be told to someone, someone needs to be able to learn something from the story which might change them in some way rather than just making them feel sad for random literature who's established context's purpose is to evoke those emotions alone with nothing else gained for the reader.
substance, reason, conflict, solution, origin, purpose, gain, loss. I'd suggest coming up with more original and possibly more creative and better written ideas for stories before dedicating so much time and effort towards something... only a few people might care to skim through.
It worked for The Punisher, gore.
Nox, I will admit that the idea has been done, but then again, most good ideas HAVE been done. If you desire to continue with this, I don't blame you. However, don't focus too heavily on getting the bastard, or you run the risk of making this drab.
Keep your chin up, puppy. *pets you*
Nox, I will admit that the idea has been done, but then again, most good ideas HAVE been done. If you desire to continue with this, I don't blame you. However, don't focus too heavily on getting the bastard, or you run the risk of making this drab.
Keep your chin up, puppy. *pets you*
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