Cute story hehe ^.=.^

That was a fun read! Definitely an experience Sorren won't be forgetting anytime soon. And with Axel's reactions, I want to know what they did to that poor Lucario to make him react so. ;)

Oh you'll find out soon~.

I may be a good 45 months late to this, but I did feel like it'd be a crime not to give this some well-deserved praise~ <3
May or may not be privy to most, but I do love alot of these tickle-related stories that have a fun premise behind them to serve the fateful entertainment that's to come~
This one does that very well~

Can't tell if its because I've really grown to adore this chocolate-toed bun or if its all thanks to your fantabulous writing but, suffice to say this was a story I found myself really enjoying!

One great hallmark about alot of the stories you write is just how lively every character present feels.~
Whether they're just tackling some tasks, casually chatting or even reading, with the descriptions you carry in tow, there's always a certain feel you can get for everyone and I really enjoy that charisma to 'em all~
And speaking of, there's alot charisma in detail as well, and it shows you had some fun fleshing out the rest of the world and environment that they inhabit!
The various Pokemon themed foods and drinks, with that Altaria one sounding pretty great actually~
The cafe's name, with '108' being so out-of-the-norm of a number that it just works here really, the overall background to many of the patrons present, and I gotta give some credit to including the detail of the upper floor, with it not being used in several months.~
Sure, small.. But, I think its alot of those smaller details that overall give more character to the surroundings that can often light up a scenario the best~
And of course one extra lovely bit of approval to the maid outfit, being "designed after the cafe’s dark red themes." I admittedly love not only the implication that there had been previous uses of it, but to also set up combatting Sorren's blushy self with it~
You definitely had me with that one~ x3

As for the main cast and premise, they're as fun as I expected, no letdowns here!
I was all in for the sequel to ruining Sorren's edgy 'n brash image, and what better way to do it then to put him in the most embarrassing situation he could be in, squirming under all those prying eyes and being as red as a Cheri berry~
No doubt this was the greatest foil to his persona yet, and boy was it fun to see him have to comply in hopes of lessening any future punishments that involved his greatest weakness.. <3
All the monologues he has are adorable, and add so much charm to the way he handles things.. Even if he's basically slave to the situation anyhow, if the outfit he dawns for most of this doesn't make it obvious~
But every tease they make him stumble, stammer, even shudder in so many ways, and I wouldn't imagine what hell he'd have to go through if that platter made its way to the floor...
The rest of the cast is also a fun highlight! And I can see myself loving all of them as a matter of fact~ :3
And Enya putting him on for a little maid-job, being loose with her words juuust enough to set Sorren up for some well-deserved tickling upon request has me bouncy.~ x3

The way things pan out from here is also a treat~
From the nimble swipe Haru throws out to 'Sorren's exposed underarm, getting the Raboot to leave those arms suspended and that foot stretched out towards Mocha, hooooooh this was a fun play..~
Then getting double-teamed not only on both underarms, but both feet~
And I really cannot do your descriptions for the reactions that sprout from the Raboot enough, same goes for where the two girls targeted with each new area to go for, wonderful wonderful stuff~
Suffice to say, the gang-tickling on both of those soft feet Sorren had strikes a chord, make of that what you might,,,

And how could I gloss over the underdog?
Axel is precious. Like, suuuper precious.~

I might have a slight Lucario-bias.. And that may influence my appreciation a tad, but the moment the spotlight was on him I knew he'd be a great part of this story~
Burying himself in his book once the suggestion of that tickling was on the table, knowing the relationship the two- Or, three rather had with it, his defensive bark towards the two once that tease came towards him, and not the mess of a Raboot that was being dealt with..

Getting all blushy once eyes were on him with Haru's threat, and by far my favorite little detail, curling those toes upon the thought and familiar feeling of that "fun" the two were having~
These three were a blast to have around, and i'd gladly take the chance to see them featured again in any capacity! More on that in a bit..

From what I know of Pokemon stories like this, I feel that there's always something to love about having different Pokemon getting into situations like this, and finding their way out of it one way or another, but the way its handled is always different, as different writers have their own feel around it as they take up the mantle..
Yours? Yours is definitely taking up top shelf, no doubt~
I feel like you capture that cartoony feel of the characters very well, and if I ever saw these events showing up in say...a PMD anime of sorts, I have no doubts that this is how i'd love to see it! Feels sorta like a little filler episode for people taking a breather from the action~ <3

And as far as sequels go, someone did point out perhaps seeing what Axel had gone through before the events that transpired in this story, and I dunno, I think i'd enjoy seeing a little prequel to tie up some loose ends.. Just sayin.~ :3c

Suffice to say, i'm really looking forward to seeing you do some more story stuff if you can find the time!
Seems you've nabbed yourself a regular! uwu

Goodness! Thank you for the review~!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! By the way, big fan of your art. :3 I think you might like what I will put out next if you like Lucarios~.

And yes, tormenting my edgy boy is a great pleasure of mine, he'll be getting some more love soon as well! Thank you again!