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snackmouse! Interesting POV on this one; I rarely have the occasion to write in 2nd person.
If you've been out on a long, exhausting trek through the wilds of the Half-Life verse, you should be so lucky to have someone who can help massage away those aches and pains. Doubly so if they happen to be a Vortigaunt. Extra hands, healy zap zaps... You can't go wrong. If you're especially in luck, they might even know how to cook broccoli.
Broccolizard out.
Word count: 1700.
snackmouse! Interesting POV on this one; I rarely have the occasion to write in 2nd person.If you've been out on a long, exhausting trek through the wilds of the Half-Life verse, you should be so lucky to have someone who can help massage away those aches and pains. Doubly so if they happen to be a Vortigaunt. Extra hands, healy zap zaps... You can't go wrong. If you're especially in luck, they might even know how to cook broccoli.
Broccolizard out.
Word count: 1700.
Category Story / All
Species Alien (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 99.2 kB
I really do enjoy the second person perspective, it really helps to get one immersed in a story and really feel what's going on.
Vortigaunts are also a rather rare treat, and you did a good job capturing that overly polite and slightly awkward nature of these nice alien friends and that was a pleasant little read showing some sweet character interaction.
as always, thank you for the broccoli!
Vortigaunts are also a rather rare treat, and you did a good job capturing that overly polite and slightly awkward nature of these nice alien friends and that was a pleasant little read showing some sweet character interaction.
as always, thank you for the broccoli!
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