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Reference sheet of Ramuné, my fursuit furry dragon.
Excuse my poor English! Correction and suggestion are welcomed.
[10/24]corrected and replaced!
Excuse my poor English! Correction and suggestion are welcomed.
[10/24]corrected and replaced!
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 657 x 915px
File Size 536.8 kB
Gah, I love the colours you use :O They're always so bright and pretty~!
A master who gives delicious food and comfy room is more than available down here, of course, it's a long commute between Australia and Tokyo sadly DDD:
Just a question too, I know you speak German and English - is there one you would prefer to have your comments written in?
A master who gives delicious food and comfy room is more than available down here, of course, it's a long commute between Australia and Tokyo sadly DDD:
Just a question too, I know you speak German and English - is there one you would prefer to have your comments written in?
It's nice to see front and side profiles in a reference picture, with actual matching lines :>
Not many references do that, and admittedly in this one they were just a few smaller images. Then again an actual illustration reference is often pretty boring and it still needs those characteristic poses to go with it :>
Not many references do that, and admittedly in this one they were just a few smaller images. Then again an actual illustration reference is often pretty boring and it still needs those characteristic poses to go with it :>
Here are some more suggested corrections for the text in the image. I will write them in the following style:
-- What's written in the image right now --
## What I think the text should be changed to ##
[[ Explanation of my suggestions ]]
______________________________________________________________
-- goggles: gift from his master's trip to the US... but they don't fit. --
## goggles: a gift from his former master, bought on a trip to the US... but they don't fit. ##
[[ The [personality] description is unclear; does he have no master right now, or does he want a new master to replace his current one? If he does have a master right now, then you can skip the word 'former', but the other corrections can still be used. ]]
-- [spec] --
## [bio] OR [stats] ##
[[ [spec] is short for 'specifications', which is normally used in English to describe the features of mechanical objects like cars and computers. [bio] is short for 'biography', which is used for listing the detailed features of a [i]person (height, weight, family). [stats] is short for 'statistics', which can also be used to describe a person, but focuses on details like how fast they can run or how much magic they can use (you normally see it on a roleplay character sheet).[/i] ]]
-- birth: June 19 --
## born: June 19 OR d.o.b.: June 19 ##
[[ Small grammar problem; 'birth' is normally an event that is happening now or will happen in the future, but 'born' normally means a birth that happened in the past. 'D.o.B.' is short for 'Date of Birth', which is another way of saying the same thing. ]]
-- sweet and lonely furry-dragon boy, hiding inside is a mischievous brat. reluctantly looking for a job to pay his debt. new master who willingly gives delicious food and comfy room is now wanted! --
## a sweet and lonely furry-dragon boy who hides a mischievous and bratty side. he's reluctantly looking for a job so he can pay a debt. he's seeking a new master who will gladly give him delicious food and a comfy home! ##
[[ More grammar errors. Also, since we don't know who he owes a debt to or why, the description of the debt should sound mysterious. ]]
-- wings: doesn't start coming through yet. he will be able to realize them and fly hereafter. --
## wings: small, but slowly growing. he will be able to fly once they reach their full size. ##
[[ Rewrote the whole section because, honestly, it was a mess. ]]
-- fangs: not yet come, too --
## fangs: only has a few, but the rest will appear over time. ##
[[ Same reason as the previous one. ]]
-- I can use magic! he shouldn't have said, so currently studying it... --
## "I can use magic!" he once boasted; now he has to study it... ##
[[ abc ]]
-- What the heck is this cut? --
## ???????? ##
[[ I have no idea what the word 'cut' is meant to be describing or pointing out. Is this something that Ramuné is saying out loud? Is it talking about the yellow symbols on his shoulders and knees? You'll have to describe what you meant if we want to translate it correctly. ]]
-- Finger: four. claws pop in when angry. --
## hand: four digits. claws pop out when angry. ##
[[ Whoops! ]]
-- What's written in the image right now --
## What I think the text should be changed to ##
[[ Explanation of my suggestions ]]
______________________________________________________________
-- goggles: gift from his master's trip to the US... but they don't fit. --
## goggles: a gift from his former master, bought on a trip to the US... but they don't fit. ##
[[ The [personality] description is unclear; does he have no master right now, or does he want a new master to replace his current one? If he does have a master right now, then you can skip the word 'former', but the other corrections can still be used. ]]
-- [spec] --
## [bio] OR [stats] ##
[[ [spec] is short for 'specifications', which is normally used in English to describe the features of mechanical objects like cars and computers. [bio] is short for 'biography', which is used for listing the detailed features of a [i]person (height, weight, family). [stats] is short for 'statistics', which can also be used to describe a person, but focuses on details like how fast they can run or how much magic they can use (you normally see it on a roleplay character sheet).[/i] ]]
-- birth: June 19 --
## born: June 19 OR d.o.b.: June 19 ##
[[ Small grammar problem; 'birth' is normally an event that is happening now or will happen in the future, but 'born' normally means a birth that happened in the past. 'D.o.B.' is short for 'Date of Birth', which is another way of saying the same thing. ]]
-- sweet and lonely furry-dragon boy, hiding inside is a mischievous brat. reluctantly looking for a job to pay his debt. new master who willingly gives delicious food and comfy room is now wanted! --
## a sweet and lonely furry-dragon boy who hides a mischievous and bratty side. he's reluctantly looking for a job so he can pay a debt. he's seeking a new master who will gladly give him delicious food and a comfy home! ##
[[ More grammar errors. Also, since we don't know who he owes a debt to or why, the description of the debt should sound mysterious. ]]
-- wings: doesn't start coming through yet. he will be able to realize them and fly hereafter. --
## wings: small, but slowly growing. he will be able to fly once they reach their full size. ##
[[ Rewrote the whole section because, honestly, it was a mess. ]]
-- fangs: not yet come, too --
## fangs: only has a few, but the rest will appear over time. ##
[[ Same reason as the previous one. ]]
-- I can use magic! he shouldn't have said, so currently studying it... --
## "I can use magic!" he once boasted; now he has to study it... ##
[[ abc ]]
-- What the heck is this cut? --
## ???????? ##
[[ I have no idea what the word 'cut' is meant to be describing or pointing out. Is this something that Ramuné is saying out loud? Is it talking about the yellow symbols on his shoulders and knees? You'll have to describe what you meant if we want to translate it correctly. ]]
-- Finger: four. claws pop in when angry. --
## hand: four digits. claws pop out when angry. ##
[[ Whoops! ]]
Ramuné and his New Friend - Bridgie the Heligator, both loves to butt bumping
Bridgie the Heligator
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/22574564/
Bridgie the Heligator
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/22574564/
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