its not my final submission for the FA thing.. just a wip of sorts im doing sketch after sketch of a simplified looking ferrox in the style of the vault boy from fallout for this contest thing

http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/1794676/

so what do ya think.. aside from the technical errors ie.. one arm being slightly bigger, hand sizes.. those kinds of blarring faults.. am i on the right track?

*flicks my vault boy bobbel head* inspire me you... inspire me dammit..

this was done in flash for the vectory feel.. but i think ill stick to my photoshop.. i fail less hard on that program