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Lion's Pride 2: Serengeti Samba (DIRECTOR'S CUT)
**UPDATE**
[I have re-written a few parts of the story, c;leaned it up a bit and added a lot more inflationey content as well as 'filled out' the third ending! Tell me what you think!]
My half of a trade with the one, the only Captain Squeak! http://www.furaffinity.net/user/capnsqueaks/
In return for this fine piece of literature he wrote for me http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4587892 I have presented him with a sequel at his request to his debut story, the gripping tale, 'Lion's Pride' http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4530150/
This tale picks up with the self-exiled Fley after having been bested by her sister, Blaas, who assumed the throne.
This story assumes the events of the first ending occurred and true to the original, this tale features three radically different endings!
I considered marking it mature only on account of a few cases of flying bone, of mild intimacy and the like, but honestly, if a kid gets traumatized by this, they need to move out from their cave.
So sit back, relax and enjoy this tale I've spun on behalf of one of the best writers on FA, much less to tackle the challenge of writing about Aries Passadar.
Captain, this one's for you!
[I have re-written a few parts of the story, c;leaned it up a bit and added a lot more inflationey content as well as 'filled out' the third ending! Tell me what you think!]
My half of a trade with the one, the only Captain Squeak! http://www.furaffinity.net/user/capnsqueaks/
In return for this fine piece of literature he wrote for me http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4587892 I have presented him with a sequel at his request to his debut story, the gripping tale, 'Lion's Pride' http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4530150/
This tale picks up with the self-exiled Fley after having been bested by her sister, Blaas, who assumed the throne.
This story assumes the events of the first ending occurred and true to the original, this tale features three radically different endings!
I considered marking it mature only on account of a few cases of flying bone, of mild intimacy and the like, but honestly, if a kid gets traumatized by this, they need to move out from their cave.
So sit back, relax and enjoy this tale I've spun on behalf of one of the best writers on FA, much less to tackle the challenge of writing about Aries Passadar.
Captain, this one's for you!
Category Story / Inflation
Species Lion
Size 119 x 120px
File Size 95 kB
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Very nice; stories in which the main character is a machiavellian psychotic person are always hard to do, but this is very good. I think the inflation scenes could stand to be longer, but I can't complain.
I also like how the relationship between Fley and Naiobi was less princess/handmaiden and more vampire/familiar. It just shows how evil she is, I guess.
Very nice; stories in which the main character is a machiavellian psychotic person are always hard to do, but this is very good. I think the inflation scenes could stand to be longer, but I can't complain.
I also like how the relationship between Fley and Naiobi was less princess/handmaiden and more vampire/familiar. It just shows how evil she is, I guess.
:D Ol'Squeaks is doing a fine jig in anticip...ation of this fantastic work!
He's pleased as punch and flattered as hell (especially seeing as YE are the one saying such kind things) that you'd be so gracious. And Fley no less! This is going to be good ^_^
He'll return with a longer glowing review when he has time. In the meanwhile, thanks fer such a gift and such kind support. Its always a pleasure to have the permission to work in tandem with a legend, mate.
This one's to ye! (raised overtopped glass and drains in one gulp)
He's pleased as punch and flattered as hell (especially seeing as YE are the one saying such kind things) that you'd be so gracious. And Fley no less! This is going to be good ^_^
He'll return with a longer glowing review when he has time. In the meanwhile, thanks fer such a gift and such kind support. Its always a pleasure to have the permission to work in tandem with a legend, mate.
This one's to ye! (raised overtopped glass and drains in one gulp)
O_O
The Capn's hat is off to ye and no mistake! I loved your expansion (no pun intended) of Fley as a fully fleshed out villainess in her own right, the zebra Naiobi (I love the interactions between the two and her covert subterfuge), the descriptions, the pacing, the endings...FLAWLESS VICTORY!
Ye have taken what I barely scraped up and broadened it into something grand. Thank you!
And ifn' ye need any other requests of Ol'Squeaks send up a holler! He can never pay ye back for this'n :)
The Capn's hat is off to ye and no mistake! I loved your expansion (no pun intended) of Fley as a fully fleshed out villainess in her own right, the zebra Naiobi (I love the interactions between the two and her covert subterfuge), the descriptions, the pacing, the endings...FLAWLESS VICTORY!
Ye have taken what I barely scraped up and broadened it into something grand. Thank you!
And ifn' ye need any other requests of Ol'Squeaks send up a holler! He can never pay ye back for this'n :)
Ol'Squeaks likes the additions and change ups! Making Fley resourceful in her final moments was very effecting and the way Naiobi handled her was a fine call back to the first time the duo met! Likewise Naiobi's alternate ending is very indicative of that special kind of cracked their relationship was XD
Fantastic work and again thanks mate! The Capn' needs to put in double efforts know fer your own tale which he looks forward to doin' ^^
Fantastic work and again thanks mate! The Capn' needs to put in double efforts know fer your own tale which he looks forward to doin' ^^
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