PLEASE NO INAPPROPRIATE COMMENTS. This is a commission and this particular commissioner has expressed that they do not want inappropriate or sexual commentary about their characters. <3 Thank you all in advance for your respectfulness.
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John had spent weeks covering up the changes happening to his body. For a while he was able to ignore the zagging, feminine stripe that laced the sides of his feline body, but it wasn’t long he was finding a covering powder in an attempt to hide it. His hair grew at a rapid pace, something he took care of with a bandana he had on hand around his apartment. He felt….
Frumpy.
Uncomfortable in the tight sports bra he ordered online to further hide what was happening to his body, he opted finally go to to the mall to get more powder and other essentials as he was out. If he just kept his head down, nobody would give him a second look, right?
Two steps in the cosmetics store, and he was greeted by confetti and the shout of an excited woman. “Congratulations to the lucky LADY, you’re our ten thousandth customer! You’ve won an absolutely, all expenses paid free spa and makeover! What is your name?”
“Jo- … Joan?”
“We are so happy to have you here, Joan! Step right in and let us work our magic!”
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Flushing with embarrassed delight, Joan clutched her new purse to her side as she strode through the mall with her new look, unable to stop the excited swish of her tail behind her. Who would have thought the transformation has already progressed so much? A new, well fitting bra, a shaping haircut and new clothes and she was unable to see even a trace of the old John in the mirror. His long lost sister, perhaps. Better yet, there were no strange looks thrown her way. She was just another pretty girl in the crowd on a lovely shopping trip. In fact, the only eyes on her was that of a male clerk standing beside a novelty stuffed animal kiosk, his glances furtive and almost shy. And his masculine stripes across his shoulders… instead of feeling envy that her own had been lost in place of her ventral stripe, her cheeks flushed with appreciation at his appearance.
Woah now, girl. One step at a time. Perhaps she should wait to be slipping her phone number to kiosk boys on the NEXT shopping trip.
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John had spent weeks covering up the changes happening to his body. For a while he was able to ignore the zagging, feminine stripe that laced the sides of his feline body, but it wasn’t long he was finding a covering powder in an attempt to hide it. His hair grew at a rapid pace, something he took care of with a bandana he had on hand around his apartment. He felt….
Frumpy.
Uncomfortable in the tight sports bra he ordered online to further hide what was happening to his body, he opted finally go to to the mall to get more powder and other essentials as he was out. If he just kept his head down, nobody would give him a second look, right?
Two steps in the cosmetics store, and he was greeted by confetti and the shout of an excited woman. “Congratulations to the lucky LADY, you’re our ten thousandth customer! You’ve won an absolutely, all expenses paid free spa and makeover! What is your name?”
“Jo- … Joan?”
“We are so happy to have you here, Joan! Step right in and let us work our magic!”
——
Flushing with embarrassed delight, Joan clutched her new purse to her side as she strode through the mall with her new look, unable to stop the excited swish of her tail behind her. Who would have thought the transformation has already progressed so much? A new, well fitting bra, a shaping haircut and new clothes and she was unable to see even a trace of the old John in the mirror. His long lost sister, perhaps. Better yet, there were no strange looks thrown her way. She was just another pretty girl in the crowd on a lovely shopping trip. In fact, the only eyes on her was that of a male clerk standing beside a novelty stuffed animal kiosk, his glances furtive and almost shy. And his masculine stripes across his shoulders… instead of feeling envy that her own had been lost in place of her ventral stripe, her cheeks flushed with appreciation at his appearance.
Woah now, girl. One step at a time. Perhaps she should wait to be slipping her phone number to kiosk boys on the NEXT shopping trip.
Category Artwork (Digital) / TF / TG
Species Taur (Other)
Size 853 x 1280px
File Size 132.3 kB
I know, right? I find myself always constructing a lot of the lead-up in my head. The only reason I don’t do much of those is either it’s in written form which I’m not always the best at following through with, or comic form which is like x20 even more work than writing it, haha! I keep saying one of these days I’ll do it though.
It's what sells it, for me. It's easy (and fun!) to write/draw any kind of wild-ass transformation you can imagine, but what turns it into a story is how the subject (and the people around them) thinks and feels about it, how that changes over time as they adjust, and how they finally end up relating to their new self and the changes they've undergone.
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