Redraw Of this drawing from 2019. Changed it up a little, so I’m struggling to actually sit on chair after transforming.
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Category All / Transformation
Species Taur (Other)
Size 1280 x 1042px
File Size 251.5 kB
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I like the pic! The pose is fun and shows the awkwardness of dealing with the change. Nice work with it =3
Two things I noticed that I feel would help with some conveyance of the image:
1. Simple, but if the word bubble were filled in, the text wouldn't be fighting with the lines in the background and would be easier to read.
2. Usually, with art, line weight is something that helps sell a picture. Putting it simply, things in the foreground should have heavier, thicker lines while background objects have thinner lines. It doesn't have to be a HUGE difference, but it can help separate the characters from the background and make things easier to see.
I like the pic! The pose is fun and shows the awkwardness of dealing with the change. Nice work with it =3
Two things I noticed that I feel would help with some conveyance of the image:
1. Simple, but if the word bubble were filled in, the text wouldn't be fighting with the lines in the background and would be easier to read.
2. Usually, with art, line weight is something that helps sell a picture. Putting it simply, things in the foreground should have heavier, thicker lines while background objects have thinner lines. It doesn't have to be a HUGE difference, but it can help separate the characters from the background and make things easier to see.
Teacher: "Again? I swear, we can't keep getting you new desks every time you are cursed, or drink something suspicious, or fall into a strange pool of glowing liquid. We have a budget, you know."
Lol. Great work and Trevor above me has some great tips that are super helpful 😉
Lol. Great work and Trevor above me has some great tips that are super helpful 😉
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