Typo in the title.

The belly looks a little weird, like the belly button is way too large and indented too far. The fingers look to me to be too long. The suggested sheath is probably a bit short. Also, the claws should be black. White claws is a dog thing (or an Arctic Wolf thing).

And strictly my opinion: digitigrade doesn't work, it makes the creature vulnerable to falling down and just isn't practical. Yeah, it does look good, but only because we've seen it on the screen as such.

It's really a nice effort. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks for the long comment and suggestions. I appreciate it, The sheath is actually it's testicles XDD
Yes, my shadowing sucks, that's why the rest isn't that visible.
*notes down the rest*
Hmm, maybe I should really redo the shadowing, seems to mess up the most of the pic

Thanks again for the long and good comment and all the suggestions

You're welcome.


As for the sheath, I was referring to what appears to me to be the suggestion of it, not the testicles below. If it isn't meant to be a suggestion of a sheath, take another look and either eliminate the shadow that suggests the sheath, or move it up.

Personally, I like the suggested sheath.

*gets dictionary*
Lol, now I see what you mean. Sorry, sometimes my english can suck so hard -___-
But okay, i will give it a shot as soon as possible ^^

No worries. I understand completely. But at least you're open and honest about it and willing to learn.

English is one of the most difficult languages to learn and master. So don't take it too hard. But don't stop learning either. Mastering English, which I have yet to do by the way, can result in a great ability to create art from just words. Wordsmithing is what I call it, and I long for that skill.