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~Angel~
What color is his fur BTW? Or his loincloth and tribal tattoos for that matter?
And now I can understand what you meant by 'wall of text' X) Actually, it's a nice way to show the 'starting point' of the story but it also takes away the fun of learning about the world in small pieces)
1. The cryptic way, which is yours.
2. The talking head way, which takes many pages.
3. The wall-o-text way, which helps get EVERYTHING down so that the story can go on.
I'mma wall of text guy, which is apparent in these first few pages, unfortunately. But they'll vanish soon, I promise.
I kinda can't.
When drawing a picture, it must always have some form of expression. Whether it be happy, sad, angry.
Here, I can sense he is a proud, confident wolf. But the expression on his face says a bit otherwise.
All in all, good job on the details, but work a bit more at expressions, put feeling into it. (: