I'm working on a trade with someone... who seeing this will know it's them. However, I would love some tips and redlines on this sketch because seriously I'm proud of it but... the artist it's for I admire like you don't know so I want it to be freaking perfect guys.
Help me make it perfect.
Demon beast creature thing... doing undemon beast creature like things... you know watching birds and playing with lizards.
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This is proof I am drawing... just slowly lol.
Help me make it perfect.
Demon beast creature thing... doing undemon beast creature like things... you know watching birds and playing with lizards.
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This is proof I am drawing... just slowly lol.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 900 x 710px
File Size 391.2 kB
most hooved things have narrow lower legs. the entire lower leg is actually more of an elongated foot then a lower leg.
Proportions look good on all the limb lengths, fingers are in correct positions (no reversed thumbs or anything)
the pinky on the right hand (one with the lizard) seems to come down really far, not sure if that is just appearances due to the markings or intentional anatomy. Also the random background seems... off. it's like a poster on an invisible wall. if it is meant to be a window then the view angle is all wrong. The coastline slope is too steep, and the ducks don't scale down for perspective enough to make it appear as a distance.
Consider changing the scale, or altering the view of the demon at a downward angle to match. I assume the ducks are the other person's work. If that is supposed to be a poster and not a window, then perhaps adding a wall to go with it, or at least suggestion of a wall.
Proportions look good on all the limb lengths, fingers are in correct positions (no reversed thumbs or anything)
the pinky on the right hand (one with the lizard) seems to come down really far, not sure if that is just appearances due to the markings or intentional anatomy. Also the random background seems... off. it's like a poster on an invisible wall. if it is meant to be a window then the view angle is all wrong. The coastline slope is too steep, and the ducks don't scale down for perspective enough to make it appear as a distance.
Consider changing the scale, or altering the view of the demon at a downward angle to match. I assume the ducks are the other person's work. If that is supposed to be a poster and not a window, then perhaps adding a wall to go with it, or at least suggestion of a wall.
I do weird square boxes with partial backgrounds in most my full colored pictures... it keeps me from getting angry at a picture and giving up like I usually do when I attempt full backgrounds.
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It's actual Loons in a lake behind him. I color the ground to match the background usually.
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It's actual Loons in a lake behind him. I color the ground to match the background usually.
I think the only thing I notice is that his femurs should be longer... but I don't really know how to pull that off XD so I leave you this:
helptoimprove :3 I haven't used them yet, but it sounds like an awesome idea to me. He looks pretty fucking awesome though!
helptoimprove :3 I haven't used them yet, but it sounds like an awesome idea to me. He looks pretty fucking awesome though!
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