
Bounty at Shark Fin Port - A Goblin Visual Novel (Part 1)
You arrive at the goblin town of Shark Fin Port, where you're offered a bounty for a group of vicious vileboar in the nearby wilderness. You'll need to recruit some capable travelling companions if you're to stand a chance at claiming the bounty! On the way there, you'll be able to learn more about your new goblin friends, and maybe even form some deep connections...
Read it here: https://cloudnovel.net/MakoTheGobli.....shark-fin-port
This is part 1 of a visual novel/dating sim I've been working on for the past couple of years. I'm super excited to share it and hope you enjoy it. If you do read it, please let me know what you think!
Read it here: https://cloudnovel.net/MakoTheGobli.....shark-fin-port
This is part 1 of a visual novel/dating sim I've been working on for the past couple of years. I'm super excited to share it and hope you enjoy it. If you do read it, please let me know what you think!
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That was awesome! What a good start, I've been looking forward to this for a long time since seeing the initial character concepts. I got a lil review!
Mikey and Krax are the faves
but, hot, chest hair
Krax has THIGHS for days
The introduction of each character was nice, pleasantly surprised that people weren't cookie-cutter archetypes and there was some color and character added to each of them, such as Mikey
clearly working himself towards a burnout, him opening up that he's struggled to find
companions and finds reaching out difficult.
The hints at something more going on with Vellok and his dad.
The hints at a traumatic past related to fire with Bucko, the nuance of a cheerful character actually standing up for themselves when they need to, that was a pleasant change.
Whatever Krax's deal is, he's so incredibly grumpy I've just gotta figure out what's making him tick and hey, absolutely going down his 'route'. After Mikey of course! Dad bod <3
I did notice some quiet sections with no ambience or music. One example is attempting to make dinner with Mikey.
I was really impressed with all the varied expressions!
All in all what a great journey so far and I've only gone down Mikey's side so far! I'll get to more soon,you're doing great! I may or may not be trying my damndest to top Mikey in the future
Mikey and Krax are the faves
but, hot, chest hair
Krax has THIGHS for days
The introduction of each character was nice, pleasantly surprised that people weren't cookie-cutter archetypes and there was some color and character added to each of them, such as Mikey
clearly working himself towards a burnout, him opening up that he's struggled to find
companions and finds reaching out difficult.
The hints at something more going on with Vellok and his dad.
The hints at a traumatic past related to fire with Bucko, the nuance of a cheerful character actually standing up for themselves when they need to, that was a pleasant change.
Whatever Krax's deal is, he's so incredibly grumpy I've just gotta figure out what's making him tick and hey, absolutely going down his 'route'. After Mikey of course! Dad bod <3
I did notice some quiet sections with no ambience or music. One example is attempting to make dinner with Mikey.
I was really impressed with all the varied expressions!
All in all what a great journey so far and I've only gone down Mikey's side so far! I'll get to more soon,you're doing great! I may or may not be trying my damndest to top Mikey in the future
aw, thank you so much dude! it means so much to me that you checked it out. i remembered you asking about them and i was hoping you would read it so im thrilled that you were waiting for this!
thanks so much for the feedback. im really glad you like it! the thing i was most fascinated to see was the different characters everyone gravitated towards -- im glad you like mikey so much! <3
i'll look into the audio issues too, thanks for letting me know. i can't wait to hear what you think of the rest of part 1! thanks again man ☺
thanks so much for the feedback. im really glad you like it! the thing i was most fascinated to see was the different characters everyone gravitated towards -- im glad you like mikey so much! <3
i'll look into the audio issues too, thanks for letting me know. i can't wait to hear what you think of the rest of part 1! thanks again man ☺
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