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When You Wish Upon a Star Chapter 21
by madneko23
The Wetting Writer
4 years ago
Okay here is the Next chapter. As always there is more that I feel can be done to it. But here it is. I hope to have the next chapter sooner as there are two other furs that need to be checked in on. I decided however to break things upon into their own chapters.
As always please tell me what you think and if I was able to capture the moment that I wanted.
As always please tell me what you think and if I was able to capture the moment that I wanted.
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Also neat thing that Mary has had to help Jane through being little and everything that comes with that where Moe has to help him through gender identity. Can’t wait to see what happens as they learn to trust each other more.
I really love that you make us like Moe just as much as all the other characters. Even with all those tripping stones in the way of Janes and Moes relationship.
It kinda feels more weird with every chapter that the narrator still uses he/him pronouns for Jane, but I guess that reflects Janes view on herself.
And so sorry that I didn't reply in the notes as I said I would. I just couldn't find the time to read it again D:
Yeah it has been tricky when to change over the pronouns for Jane. I didn't want to go to soon and spoil things but certainly don't want to wait too much longer. I have a specific moment planed for the little gal and when it happens it will shift moving forward.