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Well I've was told it would help my writing a little if I wrote up a Bio on my character so here's on of Razul. For now just a clean on, maybe later I type on up that will go over sexual info but for now this should work. I'll likely end up writing on for all my character at some point.
Category Story / All
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 20.5 kB
Not bad, but could use a lot more.
Describe him in detail. What colors does he have, what patterns... give us enough details that we can imagine the character clearly.
Also, give him some faults. So far, you've only given his skills, a very brief overview of his likes, but none of his dislikes and none of his faults. NO BODY is perfect, after all. To make a believable character, he has to have something not completly right. You said he's self-taught in both martial arts and magick, that's a tough order to fill. Most people, even with training, knows either one or the other, both are very intensive disciplines. How did he manage to train them both without formal training? You had a brief mention of a past life in the story, but didn't include it in your Bio, which is definately something to include. He's got to have challenges or the story becomes boring. Leave some things for character development.
Describe him in detail. What colors does he have, what patterns... give us enough details that we can imagine the character clearly.
Also, give him some faults. So far, you've only given his skills, a very brief overview of his likes, but none of his dislikes and none of his faults. NO BODY is perfect, after all. To make a believable character, he has to have something not completly right. You said he's self-taught in both martial arts and magick, that's a tough order to fill. Most people, even with training, knows either one or the other, both are very intensive disciplines. How did he manage to train them both without formal training? You had a brief mention of a past life in the story, but didn't include it in your Bio, which is definately something to include. He's got to have challenges or the story becomes boring. Leave some things for character development.
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