Her left forearm seems too long, but thta's all I can notice from an anatomy perspective. More importantly, I'm not getting a very "gundam" feel from her. Her helmet design comes off much more like a "Samurai Pizza Cats" character than a gundam one. Nearly all Gundams share some signature features, and without incorporating them into the design she's just going to look like a generic robot girl. I'd look up some Gundams for reference, but off the top of my head she's missing the signature golden "V" on her helmet that pretty much every main character Gundam has.

Oh your right. I forgot entirely about the V (I thought it was on some of the gundams as well as the helmets).

I might as well scrap the helmet Idea that is up on here and make one that shows her face entirely too. (since I might have played overkill on the idea.
But Yeah I will try and fix the arm perspective if possible.

Or, I could scrap this and remake, since I am seeing a lot of things that will be a problem later on.
It might be more Gundam 00, Except I want to try and keep it from making it exactly like the gundam thrones or celestial Beings gundam.

Well if you want it to be more Gundam 00, you still need to try and fit the "style" of those gundams, which basically means:
--You're going to need at least one GN Drive somewhere on the armor for propulsion
--You'll probably need to decide whether your girl is a melee type or ranged type, and add the apropriate shield bits and/or sword dispensers
--00 was notable for having pretty obvious shoulder armor on all their units
--Although you want her to have breasts, it might be worth having a "center unit" between them to emphasize the robotic nature.

See the following as a reference:
http://www.animeultima.tv/uploads/a.....umbnailpic.jpg

Usually the GN drive is on the back of the gundam. (Yes I know the pilots armor does have some sort of propulsion system on there backs too)

I was aiming for just the cockpit. But now I guess I better make the entire gundam. T_T

I did not notice all mobile suits at the shouldered armors. (I thought all gundams had that)

The female does have breasts. (the problem is, I made them too flat or something). Also, I wasn't trying to make her look like a cyborg either. But in such a way I made that happen by accident.

I guess I better try making the Gundam 00 fan art before I try making the idea possible. (so I can at least know what I am getting into.)

dont scrap this... instead rename it to Metroid samus suit wolf? Thats the vibe im getting from here.... it looks almost like a zero suit.

How does this look like a samus suit wolf?

well, anatomicaly I see her chest a little smaller than it should be... the chest and the boob should come in line with the neck line. She needs shoulders too, you drew the shape in the basic skeletos sketch but totally forgot about them at placing the lines...
Thats what I see about it ^^
I see you´re saying you´re gonna scrap this, if it upsets you, then do it and draw it again, but I think this drawing has a lot of potencial ^^

Yeah. I don't always add the major details yet. Well the reason why I want to scrap this is because of how it does not at all look like a female inside a gundam cockpit. Even so far I know three people (including you) don't want me to scrap this. So what should I just do then?

sorry for my ignorance, but what is a gundam cockpit?
I just think the drawing has a lot of potential and I think you can get a great picture out of it ^^

I don't think it's ignorance, but just not knowing is all.

http://www.mahq.net/mecha/gundam/cc.....93-cockpit.jpg

Look at the arm on the left... it may be long but add an arm cannon itd look about right. also the face part has a view ort very similiar to that of samus's suit. as for why? samus is known to sleep in her armor.

This is extremely cool, and I love all the angles and the fact you really are painting a convincing scene. I really love all the little details going on, and the complex set up. =) However, there are a few things I noticed:

Here are some Redlines for you!! =) http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/.....-OmegaWolf.jpg

~The arms are a little long, and don't match each other. Especially her left arm (viewer's right).
~Her shoulder angles don't make too much sense. If she's resting comfortably, she shouldn't be slanted like that.
~The 'ribcage' part of the bot doesn't match and looks slanted, you should really give it an upside V look at her solar plexis.
~Her face angle is good but her muzzle looks a little slanted.
~I don't really understand the thing between her legs/the chair/table she's laying/sitting on, but I tried to put her in a sitting position.

I really hope you don't scrap this, and just try to rework the small things. =) I know you can do it!

Well with what you brought up I still am planning to remake. but to make better then the last.

Sounds awesome, I'm looking forward to it. =)

Thanks.

Even though for now I am gonna be busy with two other projects.

No worries, you'll get to it eventually. =)