Hey there, I remember you said you wanted feedback on your character bio but I wasn't really able to think of much to say. Seems like you've got a very relaxed character :3

I also took a look at your other story; good work on setting the scene up! It might be worth writing a bit more for each upload, so you have more of a story for people to read. It might also be an idea to upload .txt files of your stories, that way they'll appear on the page instead of people having to click the download pdf option.

Hope that helps, excited to see another writer on here, best of luck in your writing journey ^^