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posted 15 years ago Ambience Recorder

I got really inspired by my gf earlier, it amounted to me frantically sribbling this off in the last 4 minutes of my lunch break. its the first bit of poetry ive done in a long while, and im proud of it. what do you think? i want some critique >:3

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Tonin ~tonin

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15 years ago

Your poems always seem to have a great sense of flow to them. Nicely done! ^.^

Dorian Rabbit ~vakranov

Ambience Recorder

15 years ago

its because i have ocd XD thanks though

Helix Teller of Tales ~helixthefallen

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15 years ago

Its hard to critique poems as they often are thoughts, ideas, and emotion in pure form. Flow has always been a strength for you and this poem has it. Subject is lost for diadic action description, but its poetry and the purpose is still conveyed.

Dorian Rabbit ~vakranov

Ambience Recorder

15 years ago

Im glad you're still with me. with all the music and requests ive been posting, its refreshing to have your critique in my comments once again :)

Helix Teller of Tales ~helixthefallen

Storyteller

15 years ago

Yes, your poetry contains some intreseting ideals, and fun motiffs at times. Now, if I only can convince you to Braven a little and poke that feline muzzle into some of my writing in recicrocity.
[Speech 20/25]

Dorian Rabbit ~vakranov

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15 years ago

if you're asking for me to read some of your stuff, then sure, but it will have to wait a bit, cuz im a bit busy (just note me tomorrow some time and i'll read it if im on) :)

Helix Teller of Tales ~helixthefallen

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15 years ago

Alright, thank you.

Dorian Rabbit ~vakranov

Ambience Recorder

15 years ago

*purrs*

GrandDragoon ~granddragoon

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15 years ago

That's sweet.

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