Ok, so for the muzzle flash, you can add one if you want, but I'd say, make her aim just a bit higher. Maybe like aiming at the word "Muzzle"; or 3/8 inch (1cm) up. but also, if you look at the perspective of her right arm, the gun seems to have shift perspective, as if she's holding the gun in a weird manner. Maybe put the tip of the gun somewhere at the same vertical has Cynth's arm; or 3/4 inch(2cm) on the right. And I think drawing the gun from that point might help get the right perspective. The arm is good where it is.

To be honest, I haven't played any Left 4 Dead cause I have no 360 and my PC would never run L4D (I want to play it though D:). So I'm just guessing that the hunter is the one with the hoodie? That one is fine, at least it's not a Tank (if I remember correctly, that's the big guy which it would be weird to uppercut).

The extra characters are fine. She can work with others and she knows that teamwork is better even if she won't say it.

You can give Morgan a more "intense" look. I'm not going for a character that as a stone cold hard look on their face even when they're live are in danger. So you can give her more emotion. I think you forgot the scar she has on her own muzzle. Her ears look slightly goofy. I quickly looked at your other stuff and I know you can make them look better.

Btw lol we suck at gamez. :P

Looks like it's going in a good direction. I like it. I might check it again later when I have more time but you can still update it if you want.

well, since it is in its earliest stages, is there perhaps a different theme you would want them to be a part of?

perhaps a less-specific zombie invasion or an alien attack?

No no, Left 4 Dead is fine. I mean, like I said, I never played it. But somehow, I still like it. Like I see gameplay videos, it looks great. I hear quotes and think that the writing is good and those character seems likable, etc. This theme is fine and I thought your idea of keeping it Valve themed was good.

ok, great. im actually working on it right now, so stay tuned. do you have an AIM, Y!m, or MSN through which we can chat in real time?

Yeah, I had some problems with my email accounts/address that I've been putting off but I think I can clear them out. I'll note you when I succeed, or reply here if I miserably fail.

righto. while we're here, what kind of facial expression did you have in mind? would she be scared, maniacal, angry, or what?

Well, it would be something like "angry" but I'd also say "determined" The closest look I've drawn in my pics would be kinda that look my persona has in 'The Craziness About Fur'. So maybe something like that. Like she's focused, but she uses a certain amount of rage to kill zombies or whatever. I dunno if I'm explaining it right.

That leg wound is a nice touch.

For the colors, pretty much everything looks fine, except maybe Morgan's colors. That might be my fault since the only reference I posted was shaded, but she's actually grayer. In your pic she's brown. I'm gonna make a re-upload of her sketch with a color palette that I used. Then you can make what you will with that cause I also noticed (or it's in my mind) that you did use a different palette than usual.

I do like that my persona seems paler though. Since my blood is all over the floor. :)

Ok so, if you refresh here http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4289105/ you should be able to see it now.

yeah, it was my intention to make this style a bit darker and grittier to kinda match the way the game looks.