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Cheick and Kaiden on a summer tour!
P.S. I couldn't come up with a working solution to "fixate" sunglasses on Cheick's muzzle, so let's leave it as is for now xD
P.S. I couldn't come up with a working solution to "fixate" sunglasses on Cheick's muzzle, so let's leave it as is for now xD
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Hyena
Size 1280 x 960px
File Size 1.1 MB
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Tight nose pads should be sufficient to keep sunglasses from slipping off the muzzle. Or maybe hidden bridge piercing + tiny neodymium magnets on sunglasses bridge.
P.S. There's something wrong with Cheick's right arm and shadow from the surfboard, but I can't figure out what exactly...
P.S. There's something wrong with Cheick's right arm and shadow from the surfboard, but I can't figure out what exactly...
Piercing is not an option just to wear sunglasses :) Nose pads keep glasses from slipping due to friction with curved arms keeping them from falling down when you tilt head.
A simple strap would probably do the thing, but it would look less elegant than pince-nez-like glasses xD
Regarding Cheick's right arm I guess it's because of his shoulder. The arm is hidden behind the board and is bent at an elbow, which means his shoulder should be rotated slightly away from us, while it looks like as if his arm is relaxed. And it makes a false impression his arm is weirdly short.
Board shadow is indeed incorrect, because I'm still trying to find the way to make shadows look interesting. The shadow contour should be blurred in the area away from the board, specifically on Cheick's belly and underwear.
A simple strap would probably do the thing, but it would look less elegant than pince-nez-like glasses xD
Regarding Cheick's right arm I guess it's because of his shoulder. The arm is hidden behind the board and is bent at an elbow, which means his shoulder should be rotated slightly away from us, while it looks like as if his arm is relaxed. And it makes a false impression his arm is weirdly short.
Board shadow is indeed incorrect, because I'm still trying to find the way to make shadows look interesting. The shadow contour should be blurred in the area away from the board, specifically on Cheick's belly and underwear.
The shoulder itself mostly seems fine, at least when you view the upper part of the picture cropped at the level of the boys' navels. I believe that the palm position is not quite correct. Probably it's the grabbing angle and visibility of peeking thumb & index finger.
Hope you're OK with constructive criticism from random non-artists. Have been watching you on FA for almost a decade, and you always have great ideas and kinks in your art
Do you have any plans to upload lineart and maybe... um... alts?
Hope you're OK with constructive criticism from random non-artists. Have been watching you on FA for almost a decade, and you always have great ideas and kinks in your art
Do you have any plans to upload lineart and maybe... um... alts?
It totally fine! Any feedback is always welcome, and I appreciate that :)
Next time I should probably construct all parts even if they're invisible or behind something - I haven't done it this time, and maybe that's the thing.
There was no lineart, but a rough sketch and the several layers with all paintings. Don't have any plans to add alternative versions either. It's better to start working on another one instead! There is also another piece I started long time ago, but left it unfinished (not hyenas).
Next time I should probably construct all parts even if they're invisible or behind something - I haven't done it this time, and maybe that's the thing.
There was no lineart, but a rough sketch and the several layers with all paintings. Don't have any plans to add alternative versions either. It's better to start working on another one instead! There is also another piece I started long time ago, but left it unfinished (not hyenas).
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