It is very pretty though. :)

I could hear "Around the World" by Daft Punk to this song for some reason when it hits out of the light section. Would think it would be cool if it was. Lol.

this could be a pretty nice song I think :3

This is hella rad. Awesome direction, great progression. DON'T STOP SIR!

This sounds really great.. love it so far ^^

Would love to hear a finished version of this ^^

where it fades out, lead into another section with a short drum roll.

melody 1- a piano or electronic instrument of like quality plays:
[[measure one]] four notes from La to Re (assuming key of C Maj, A down to D) as 16th notes, then Ti-Do-Ti-Do as 8th notes.
[[measure two]] repeat the above.
[[measure three]] as dotted quarter notes, Ti-Do-Re-Mi... then fill in the rest with a few jumps or skips. that'd get you halfway through the fourth measure, at least. hopefully, some sort of melody or whatever would pop into your head after that.

ps. my timing might be slightly off, but i'm just trying to hurry and say it before i forget what i imagined.

pss. or if you're using fls, i can look at the file and show you what i mean.

You need the sickest drop that has ever been dropped in the history of sick drops!

Put some wibbles and some wobbles and grind it all up with a little dirt.

http://soundcloud.com/lazy-rich/fla.....d-robb-g-remix

Instead of fading out, cut the bass and build it up again, but this time in a different way!

I like it D:

lol, what you could do is build the song using a voice clip of a person saying "ohayo gozaimasu, maybe like a flight attendant or just a regular person, maybe even get the sample from Google translate, whatever you do bro is up to you, I know you can do it.