Hi all.
This is a cropped piece from a drawing I am busy . I drew him about twice before but I would like to make an attempt to develope him more as a character.
Anyway the reason I have posted this up is because I would like a all your of opinions on him so far with regards to his looks.
Would you consider him to be cute, kinda cute, not cute at all?
I am trying to go for a character that would turn heads but is not a fully blown famboy.
So yea even if your just passing by please leave a comment. Even if its just something like "cute" or "kinda cute"
Thanks. : 3
(will move to scraps later.)
This is a cropped piece from a drawing I am busy . I drew him about twice before but I would like to make an attempt to develope him more as a character.
Anyway the reason I have posted this up is because I would like a all your of opinions on him so far with regards to his looks.
Would you consider him to be cute, kinda cute, not cute at all?
I am trying to go for a character that would turn heads but is not a fully blown famboy.
So yea even if your just passing by please leave a comment. Even if its just something like "cute" or "kinda cute"
Thanks. : 3
(will move to scraps later.)
Category All / General Furry Art
Species Feline (Other)
Size 1280 x 1217px
File Size 205 kB
Okay, here's a real comment:
I think the right eye is too close to the right ear and the left ear is too far into the face. Also to make him a bit cuter but not full throttle femboy give him a couple of piercings and maybe a little bell on that collar.
Very nice work on the shading. The hair looks natural and flowing.
I think the right eye is too close to the right ear and the left ear is too far into the face. Also to make him a bit cuter but not full throttle femboy give him a couple of piercings and maybe a little bell on that collar.
Very nice work on the shading. The hair looks natural and flowing.
Ooohhhh, A real comment. >:3
I am making those changes, I kinda noticed the ear thing but the right eye not so much. I will mess around and see what happens. Might add a piercing, I will mess around with that too.
Thanks for the comment. People who crit when asked are so rare on FA. : 3
I am making those changes, I kinda noticed the ear thing but the right eye not so much. I will mess around and see what happens. Might add a piercing, I will mess around with that too.
Thanks for the comment. People who crit when asked are so rare on FA. : 3
Something I noticed: The face doesn't quite seem symmeterical. The way the mohawk lays, combined with the angle of the head and positioning of the eyes, makes the centerline of the head appear to be shifted to the left.
The hair should be moved a little to the left (from your perspective, not anatomically) and the left side (anatomically) needs more of a curvature.
The hair should be moved a little to the left (from your perspective, not anatomically) and the left side (anatomically) needs more of a curvature.
Man I love your work. Yeah, he's cute as hell! Your ink weight control is directing attention well on his face, though you might want to tone down the fluff where it has lines almost has thick and heavy as his outline.
Here's some insight that results from thinking about characters' geometry all day: His left eye (our right) looks extremely flat, like it's a picture on a flat plane, and here's why: with both his eyes looking at us, the two irises should both be round. My lizard-brain is telling me that he's looking at me because of the centered iris/pupil, but it also thinks that his left eye is looking 45 degrees to his left because it's oval, so it can't build a consistent sense of space and it ends up looking flat.
The human nail + animal nail, posed as if he's showing it off to us, draws too much attention; I end up thinking "wait how does that work" instead of thinking about how pretty he is.
Costume and fur rendering look great. Can't wait to see the finish!
Here's some insight that results from thinking about characters' geometry all day: His left eye (our right) looks extremely flat, like it's a picture on a flat plane, and here's why: with both his eyes looking at us, the two irises should both be round. My lizard-brain is telling me that he's looking at me because of the centered iris/pupil, but it also thinks that his left eye is looking 45 degrees to his left because it's oval, so it can't build a consistent sense of space and it ends up looking flat.
The human nail + animal nail, posed as if he's showing it off to us, draws too much attention; I end up thinking "wait how does that work" instead of thinking about how pretty he is.
Costume and fur rendering look great. Can't wait to see the finish!
Hmmm they arnt round because I wanted to make cat eyes. But cat eyes can expand so maybe I can try drawing rounder ireses. The nail thing is less of an destraction in the full drawing. I think people will be looking elswere. >__< But I will try to make it more pleasing to the eye.
XD Thanks for commenting, glad ya like it so far.
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Hmmm they arnt round because I wanted to make cat eyes. But cat eyes can expand so maybe I can try drawing rounder ireses. The nail thing is less of an destraction in the full drawing. I think people will be looking elswere. >__< But I will try to make it more pleasing to the eye.
XD Thanks for commenting, glad ya like it so far.
XD Thanks for commenting, glad ya like it so far.
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