That looks so cool! Nice work!

This piece is pretty decent in my opinion. The figure and perspective does synergize well, keeping the tail close and using it have some guidance or create a stronger focal point was a nice touch. The details on the character does give that eastern and stylized 'manga' feel to him. However I do feel like mask could've used a different color like gold to draw in viewers gaze to him and would create more diversity.

I think the setting is fine but a little though not really sure where he's at if like in a underworld which I can assume those colored balls suppose to be spirits? I think could've made it bit more darker so the light sources would stand out more. Personally I would've used different colors for the spirits to add more diversity in color and maybe more around the lantern and or tail.

A nice touch to make the piece a bit more interesting I would believe to have mist break up the figure and give a more of him sense of him traversing and that it's a bit difficult or something like that.

Again it's not a bad piece but could've used more refinement I think and thanks for sharing. :3

Also just to note, that tail looks like glowing penis head. lol

I know you probably didn't mean to, but this comes off as pretty rude - unsolicited critique, particularly on commission pieces where the artist may not have full creative control, is a bit of a faux pas.

I think your the one that comes off rude, considering this a public a forum where you can have the freedom post anything you want, with in policy of course and you do not speak for the artist.

I have taken into account that artist may not have control but doesn’t mean I won’t critique and maybe he didn’t think of any refinements and thought it was fine which I have stated doesn’t make this a bad piece and just a different way he could’ve done it.

Third of all I at least put more thought and analysis in his art then anybody else because I actually give a fuck and it helps me with my own thought process when I make my own pieces.

If you don’t agree that’s fine but no need to attack me for actually giving constructive criticism and how about you just with commenting how pretty it is, kid. :3

I'll try again.
Your critique is flawed from both a composition and colour theory perspective, and wouldn't improve the piece. Download a copy and make the changes yourself if you want to see the result.
Analysing pieces like this one is a great way to learn, but presenting your opinions as though you are a better artist comes off as arrogant (even if you are a better artist, it's still pretty rude).

I'm not speaking for vu06 here - I work in a profession where I get this sort of commentary, and I can guarantee you it never comes off well.

You're entirely welcome to post what you like, but there are much more constructive ways of achieving what you're aiming for.

Now you're critiquing my critique? For someone who claims to have knowledge of the field and share such strong opinions it seems that you are quite the hypocrite for saying that mines is incorrect since it's subjective to begin with.

Also I have stated that nothing is inherently wrong with the piece if you were to bother to actually read and think before responding with your immature barbaric words.

On top of that wouldn't that be plagiarism and even greater insult for me to download a copy of his work and edit without his permission? Such simple mindedness is reason why I will not further any conversation because you are clearly intimidated and projecting your own flaws on someone much more superior then you.

Have a good one. :3

Wow

That looks amazing, I'd love to see more of that!

Awesome colors