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critique please?? C8
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 570 x 1280px
File Size 94.3 kB
Oh man I've never critiqued something or you.. so here I go.
First, I can see huge improvement from your old stuff, so congrats!
The first thing I see, is the balance. He looks like he will fall on his nose any second. I've seen this in many of your pics, the solution.. just move one of the legs more to the right, even if the tail is there, it doesn't give a balance impression. Or, just make the body lean backward, rather than forward.
On the anatomy part, I cannot see many mistakes, the part you have to work on most is the torso and the shoulder region. Uhh so... as I said before, the body should lean backwards a bit, and the part of the torso, where the tits are should be a bit more pronounced, and the tits rounder. xD The hips should be, as big as that, or a bit smaller, if the body is more muscular in the torso area. The shoulder shouldn't be closed like that, where it meets the torso, even if there is fur, and a bit outer. The line.. umm, on the hip, I do not know how is it called, should be more to the sides... and that's about it, what I can see now. x3
I hope you understand all that stuff, and if you wish, I could do a redline, showing what I said there, and some other things that I can't explain (not big ones though).
Awesome coloring, and overall look! :3 Good job.
First, I can see huge improvement from your old stuff, so congrats!
The first thing I see, is the balance. He looks like he will fall on his nose any second. I've seen this in many of your pics, the solution.. just move one of the legs more to the right, even if the tail is there, it doesn't give a balance impression. Or, just make the body lean backward, rather than forward.
On the anatomy part, I cannot see many mistakes, the part you have to work on most is the torso and the shoulder region. Uhh so... as I said before, the body should lean backwards a bit, and the part of the torso, where the tits are should be a bit more pronounced, and the tits rounder. xD The hips should be, as big as that, or a bit smaller, if the body is more muscular in the torso area. The shoulder shouldn't be closed like that, where it meets the torso, even if there is fur, and a bit outer. The line.. umm, on the hip, I do not know how is it called, should be more to the sides... and that's about it, what I can see now. x3
I hope you understand all that stuff, and if you wish, I could do a redline, showing what I said there, and some other things that I can't explain (not big ones though).
Awesome coloring, and overall look! :3 Good job.
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