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Well, here's another page. Hope you guys like it :3
And don't be fooled, I have only the vaguest of idea of where this semi-plot is going. It's much more fun to do that way. C:
Edit: Sorry it's so hard to see, guys. FA resized it so the detail all went kaput. I'll ink it soon as I can :[
And don't be fooled, I have only the vaguest of idea of where this semi-plot is going. It's much more fun to do that way. C:
Edit: Sorry it's so hard to see, guys. FA resized it so the detail all went kaput. I'll ink it soon as I can :[
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 828 x 1280px
File Size 182.6 kB
I wonder if I wrote this uber-long comment if you would read it.
Personally... I dunno why, but I like how this comic is going so far. Interesting characters, nice double entendre in the end, he also has a real personality with some humor, and it's well drawn.
I think though, that maybe you should add your own type of flare to it, so you should start reading lots of Sunday comics. I would recommend Walt Kelly's "Pogo" for speech impediments, and how speech forms a character, and George Herriman's "Krazy Kat" for panel design, and layout.
Both of these comics have been an inspiration to Bill Watterson, the creator of "Calvin and Hobbes". I dunno, if you just read lots of comics, you might get cool ideas to try out and whatnot.
And personally, I like the sexual innuendos behind it too. I notice Griggle has a nice fat bulge, but what's more impressive is that you're fleshing him out, so you're drawing him in different poses, and emotions.
I really, really like that in a comic strip, where a character's proportions are the same, and they look really real as to how you flesh them out in a comic. Plus I also think you have good perspective in it as well (Both literary and visually).
I like your plot so far, but I'm hoping that you can take this further or something... Maybe.
I can't motivate or force anyone to do anything, because I'm not you.
This is really good... I encourage you to do more!
Maybe if you need help or some ideas with the plot, uh, could I make or show you ideas if you would like?
Personally... I dunno why, but I like how this comic is going so far. Interesting characters, nice double entendre in the end, he also has a real personality with some humor, and it's well drawn.
I think though, that maybe you should add your own type of flare to it, so you should start reading lots of Sunday comics. I would recommend Walt Kelly's "Pogo" for speech impediments, and how speech forms a character, and George Herriman's "Krazy Kat" for panel design, and layout.
Both of these comics have been an inspiration to Bill Watterson, the creator of "Calvin and Hobbes". I dunno, if you just read lots of comics, you might get cool ideas to try out and whatnot.
And personally, I like the sexual innuendos behind it too. I notice Griggle has a nice fat bulge, but what's more impressive is that you're fleshing him out, so you're drawing him in different poses, and emotions.
I really, really like that in a comic strip, where a character's proportions are the same, and they look really real as to how you flesh them out in a comic. Plus I also think you have good perspective in it as well (Both literary and visually).
I like your plot so far, but I'm hoping that you can take this further or something... Maybe.
I can't motivate or force anyone to do anything, because I'm not you.
This is really good... I encourage you to do more!
Maybe if you need help or some ideas with the plot, uh, could I make or show you ideas if you would like?
Suh-weet... Bill Watterson was actually an artist that I had to write a seven page paper and make a presentation about. He was my American Artist Project this year, and I learned a whole -ton- about his style, and how he draws, and how he makes his amazing landscapes in the newspaper.
Reason why I chose him is because I have read every single one of his comics, and he just fascinated me that no one ever really knew how he looked like, or where he would appear in the public after his retirement to paint oil paintings.
So that's why I recommended the two guys for you. I really like your style of how you draw your characters and hair and body. It's unique and nifty cool!
Reason why I chose him is because I have read every single one of his comics, and he just fascinated me that no one ever really knew how he looked like, or where he would appear in the public after his retirement to paint oil paintings.
So that's why I recommended the two guys for you. I really like your style of how you draw your characters and hair and body. It's unique and nifty cool!
"...media swarming the place! ... goverment facility ..."
We should not forget the rich eccentrics looking for a new pet, other mad scientists who are after your genes and -of course- the "Vatican Tactical Aberration Response Squad"... believe me they are the worst you can encounter...
...uhm... Keep going! ^^
We should not forget the rich eccentrics looking for a new pet, other mad scientists who are after your genes and -of course- the "Vatican Tactical Aberration Response Squad"... believe me they are the worst you can encounter...
...uhm... Keep going! ^^
Well for a semi-plot you're still keeping attention which is important, we're all curious to see where this goes as much as you do, Keep it up... I love the interaction between your big buff character and the short skinny guy X3 it's just cute seeing them together for some reason.
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