it's probably just me, but I think the shoulders are a bit high up... But I'm no expert at anatomy, and aside from that, I really like the picture.

The account creator: Great Idea! I hope this goes well!

sad to not be able to see your art here, but do what you want on order to help better yourself. One thing that id suggest is to start a ustream or another computer style video transponder/chat thing and have the peole you trust that will help you out watch as you draw what you want. I also suggest that you pick up a few tricks by tracing a favorite artist. You are a good artist, i know you will ultimately succeed, once your minds been set.

Ah yeah, even though i am not planning to try streaming again, since last time I tried, it didn't work for me.

But still, the idea has been done before which I did had fun with. Thanks though.

I think the head is fine, really. :) The tails though, can you some work. The one in her lap is too small comparitively to the others, which are all a bit thin. I did a bit of redline for you. I'll send them to you via email, as I don't want to upload them here as my own art, even in scraps and I don't have photobucket.

Thanks, Ah now I see what you mean, yeah I Still have to learn about drawing tails too.

That's fine. :) I still have alot to learn myself. I'd suggest studying wildlife photoes and the work of other artists you admire to see how they work tails, legs, etc into their drawings, since sometimes we try to draw things we can't reference in real life. My personal favorites are Goldenwolf and DarkNatasha. They are both very awesome at Anthro and Feral anatomy. I even think DarkNatasha has some Kitsune. :)

Golden: http://goldenwolf.deviantart.com/

DarkNatasha: http://www.furaffinity.net/user/darknatasha/

I heard about Dark Natasha. ( I too like her work)

Yeah that's true about needing to draw animals and humans in ref's to get it right.

what's wrong?

I don't know if you could tell me about this?

tell you about what?

this whole shit thing about this dumb H2I

It's about other artists taking a look at your art, to see what is wrong and to see how it can be fixed for the next art.

....really?!?

Well yeah. But also commenting how good it is too or something.

ok, I just wanted a tip on those nine tails...

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Please do not leave unnecessary comments like this. If you have a problem with the group, please note us so we can talk, not commenting on someone else's work.

Thank you!

~ muddy

I think the biggest problem is really just a lack of understanding the form in space. Or rather, perspective. The legs are falling out at us and the tails don't look like they are behind her but look like they are in the same place.

I don't know what your process was like, but draw a sketch first that blocks out the big shapes in a way that allows you to deal with them in space. So you might draw the rib cage and pelvis as some boxes and the spine as a collection of cylinders. Constructing like this helps solidify both the pose and the anatomy.

Think about proportions too, her legs don't quite look like the could support the rest of her. If it helps, a good way to check proportions is to ask yourself weather the length of the lower body from the bottom of the foot to the pubic bone is the same length as the pubic bone to the top of the head.
This measurement is almost always true for most people though it does vary like all things do.

Moving back to grounding the figure, if you have to draw a perspective grid. If that's a little too labor intensive, draw a box moving back in space under your character.

http://postimage.org/image/2q4rc9l2c/

The shoulders in this pose are a little extreme; relax them.
Try to think about the anatomy as you draw. What are the muscles doing? Where are the bones? What's a comfortable position to hold?
Think of breasts like water balloons. They're just sacks of fat in the end. They hang on the chest over the pectoral muscle and hang there until something moves them. The look a bit like hard balls right now, and this is because the arms are not pushed forward in such a way that would squish them together.

http://postimage.org/image/2q5cu93hg/


Hope that helped!

Hmm I don't how I can try to reply on this one, but I remember about the breasts as water balloons. (which I still have trouble making it look like that).

As for grounding the legs, thats some thing I have tried but not ready for.