
Valko wanders into an area where free samples are by companies trying to sell you products by letting you taste their samples, finding one he falls in love with the taste but it seems to have a bubbly effect from drinking it.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Inflation
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Size 997 x 1280px
File Size 256.3 kB
Heh those free drinks always seem to have those unexpected catches to them ;D That only makes them all the more enjoyable to drink.
You created a nice sense of progress for the plot in this. It has a rather prefect sense of speed that it doesn't feel too rushed, but at the same time it conveys everything needed for what is to come :) Nice design choice as well for the bottles of the drink, they remind me of a couple bottles I've seen at stores here. Plus makes them feel that much mroe unique in their effects ;)
Nice job with using various body poses throughout the scenes to help convey his expressions and feelings. It makes the story feel more lively and enjoyable instead of seeing stoik or stiff characters. Also you did really well in making sure his wings are that and not arms. A lot of people sometimes make Lugia's wings bend like arms, so excellent job with that. Nice job with the final frame too with the body angle. It makes a nice squish feel with how his tail lies, but also shows a nice level of depth to his frame. Plus he actually looks relaxed like that.
Just thought I'd comment on the beginning of this comic too ^.^ It is really well done and designed!
You created a nice sense of progress for the plot in this. It has a rather prefect sense of speed that it doesn't feel too rushed, but at the same time it conveys everything needed for what is to come :) Nice design choice as well for the bottles of the drink, they remind me of a couple bottles I've seen at stores here. Plus makes them feel that much mroe unique in their effects ;)
Nice job with using various body poses throughout the scenes to help convey his expressions and feelings. It makes the story feel more lively and enjoyable instead of seeing stoik or stiff characters. Also you did really well in making sure his wings are that and not arms. A lot of people sometimes make Lugia's wings bend like arms, so excellent job with that. Nice job with the final frame too with the body angle. It makes a nice squish feel with how his tail lies, but also shows a nice level of depth to his frame. Plus he actually looks relaxed like that.
Just thought I'd comment on the beginning of this comic too ^.^ It is really well done and designed!
Thanks Daryl ^_^, wanted to have a setup page what it's all about, doing the expressions was a bit tricky since I've never drawn a lugia, the bottle design popped into my head since they blow out bubbles after drink so i figured why not a bubble bottle design ^_^, the wings oh him I kind of drew like a mix mostly on how it can move but tried to keep it with lugias original form the best I can, hehe thanks for the final frame, I wanted him too look like he's resting against the wall, slumped back feeling bloated ^_^
Thanks again for you kind words about my artwork, it's not the best but I try.
Thanks again for you kind words about my artwork, it's not the best but I try.
For a first time drawing Lugia you should feel proud for how it came out. I wouldn't have guessed it was your first time ^_^ Yeah the bottles do even resemble bubbles so that's a neat little design quirk too ^.^ Yeah that pose I have found always reflects the best relaxed and bloated feeling. The wings over his belly really adds to the statement too I feel ^_^
Thanks for sharing your artwork too. You shouldn't beat your work down because it looks very smooth and holds a fair amount of details.
Thanks for sharing your artwork too. You shouldn't beat your work down because it looks very smooth and holds a fair amount of details.
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