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1) One afternoon after school,Tommy decided to go for a shortcut to his house.Believing it was a shorter route,he decided to go out there.But he went deeper and deeper into the forest,he was in a place that he didn't know.
2)Tommy:"Where am I?I don't know this place!"
3)Then little Tommy sat down and a great sadness and fear reached his heart.
4)Little Tommy began to cry...
5)Time passed and the sun was almost hidden in the shadows.Little Tommy lost in the woods.But suddenly behind some bushes, someone was called him!
"OH MY SON!" shouted Father Bear!
6)Tommy turned to see who was calling him and his little heart was filled with great joy!
Just then,Tommy got up and ran into the open arms of his father!
7)Father and son joined in a hug!
Father Bear:"What happened my son?"
Tommy:"I took a shortcut and I was lost.I'm sorry daddy"
Tears ran down for his little face.
Father Bear:"Do not worry, my son, the important thing here is you are with me"
Father Bear began to cry!
The only thing that was heard in the forest that afternoon was a cry of joy and peace!
THE END
2)Tommy:"Where am I?I don't know this place!"
3)Then little Tommy sat down and a great sadness and fear reached his heart.
4)Little Tommy began to cry...
5)Time passed and the sun was almost hidden in the shadows.Little Tommy lost in the woods.But suddenly behind some bushes, someone was called him!
"OH MY SON!" shouted Father Bear!
6)Tommy turned to see who was calling him and his little heart was filled with great joy!
Just then,Tommy got up and ran into the open arms of his father!
7)Father and son joined in a hug!
Father Bear:"What happened my son?"
Tommy:"I took a shortcut and I was lost.I'm sorry daddy"
Tears ran down for his little face.
Father Bear:"Do not worry, my son, the important thing here is you are with me"
Father Bear began to cry!
The only thing that was heard in the forest that afternoon was a cry of joy and peace!
THE END
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Bear (Other)
Size 689 x 700px
File Size 471.6 kB
Poor Tommie. Glad his father found him! Looks like he would've had a nervous breakdown!
What a "crybaby"!
I can find my way around....... Except for my first day of middle school!
Tyrone: I'm cool! I never get lost!
Cruz: Yeah sure! When you walked into Mrs. Matthew's class,you looked like you were crying!
Tyrone: Ok! So i got lost and cried a little! Biiiiiiig deal! I was under lot of stress!
Cruz: !
My friends have a annoying habit of bringing up "goof ups" I did in the past!
What a "crybaby"!
I can find my way around....... Except for my first day of middle school!
Tyrone: I'm cool! I never get lost!
Cruz: Yeah sure! When you walked into Mrs. Matthew's class,you looked like you were crying!
Tyrone: Ok! So i got lost and cried a little! Biiiiiiig deal! I was under lot of stress!
Cruz: !
My friends have a annoying habit of bringing up "goof ups" I did in the past!
Ouuuch!
I always got spanked when I stayed gone too long! Usually because I tagged along with my older brother. He would always get us both in trouble! He was a hazard to my health! Today he still is! But my sister is more dangerous!
My family had the thanksgiving diner at her house! I DID NOT GO! Everybody wanted me to come over there! I wanted to,but I like to keep what little self esteem I have left! She cooks really good too! I was so sad!
I always got spanked when I stayed gone too long! Usually because I tagged along with my older brother. He would always get us both in trouble! He was a hazard to my health! Today he still is! But my sister is more dangerous!
My family had the thanksgiving diner at her house! I DID NOT GO! Everybody wanted me to come over there! I wanted to,but I like to keep what little self esteem I have left! She cooks really good too! I was so sad!
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