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Ive had this idea for some time and I though Id give it a try. This is just a quick 6 page beginning to a series I might or might not make. Plus this is a chance to play around with a VERY new writing style. I think it matches with the tone of the story.
The plot is that a young adult can create anything just by dreaming it. But he cant control his dreams so random things start to come into the real world and start to change it. So now he has to try and destroy all the things he dreamed and are now running around the world.
PLEASE tell me what you think!
Warning: There is some 'inappropriate language' but not too much.
The plot is that a young adult can create anything just by dreaming it. But he cant control his dreams so random things start to come into the real world and start to change it. So now he has to try and destroy all the things he dreamed and are now running around the world.
PLEASE tell me what you think!
Warning: There is some 'inappropriate language' but not too much.
Category Story / Miscellaneous
Species Housecat
Size 120 x 64px
File Size 255 kB
I dunno. Probably >.>
I KNOWS! While at the furcon some guy in a fursuit gives you 10000000000000000 pounds! You can buy a house and never have to work again!
The uniform for soccer playes? BTW: As a Brit, would you be offended if I put the picture of a centaur on my jersey? If the centuars body is a loin and the top is Queen Elizabeth?
I KNOWS! While at the furcon some guy in a fursuit gives you 10000000000000000 pounds! You can buy a house and never have to work again!
The uniform for soccer playes? BTW: As a Brit, would you be offended if I put the picture of a centaur on my jersey? If the centuars body is a loin and the top is Queen Elizabeth?
Hey you're the one who disdnt know why I wanted a sandwich!
Its all part of the plan!
Insult me all you want you bloody bloke!
Oh, well our school is a little different. Somehow we were meant to learn about the british colonies by planning an interesting game of soccer.
Then it should be feetball!
Its all part of the plan!
Insult me all you want you bloody bloke!
Oh, well our school is a little different. Somehow we were meant to learn about the british colonies by planning an interesting game of soccer.
Then it should be feetball!
I told you! Its part of your training!
... Do fairies eat cheese? Anyway. I dear me I seem to of misplaced a letter in the word that I etched down!
TWO TO RUN! You do more running than kicking!
Ah yes bicycle repair man.An somewhat odd sketch from the gang but still funny none the less.
... Do fairies eat cheese? Anyway. I dear me I seem to of misplaced a letter in the word that I etched down!
TWO TO RUN! You do more running than kicking!
Ah yes bicycle repair man.An somewhat odd sketch from the gang but still funny none the less.
I would never do that. Maybe.
Sense that does make,
I was speaking like a proper gentleman! Something an uncultured person like you would never understand!
But you can score if you just stand around the field! Then it would be boring! But running doesnt have a ball and excitement now does it?
I actually saw him live in his last tour thingie. Pretty funny.
Sense that does make,
I was speaking like a proper gentleman! Something an uncultured person like you would never understand!
But you can score if you just stand around the field! Then it would be boring! But running doesnt have a ball and excitement now does it?
I actually saw him live in his last tour thingie. Pretty funny.
Im not excatly sure. I cant predict the future you know.
I am all wise with the force! And the force is telling me that you need to take a shower.
Weren't you already doing that? Oh dear me you disheveled man, you have neglected what you were even doing!
But how do you get to the ball so that you can kick it? Not by kicking!
Like last year or something.
I am all wise with the force! And the force is telling me that you need to take a shower.
Weren't you already doing that? Oh dear me you disheveled man, you have neglected what you were even doing!
But how do you get to the ball so that you can kick it? Not by kicking!
Like last year or something.
but I cant control my own fate!
Now you're talking like a brit. Oh sure! First you all complain that we never enter any wars but when we start our own you complain all the time!
I dont know if you play soccer standing perfectly still but over here we move around with our feet!
Now you're talking like a brit. Oh sure! First you all complain that we never enter any wars but when we start our own you complain all the time!
I dont know if you play soccer standing perfectly still but over here we move around with our feet!
But what if its my fate to do something unpredictable?!
Hey! Well maybe we shouldnt have anymore wars! That means you'll be screwed the next to germany comes to kick yer arses!
But you use you hands for everything else so if we followed your rules basketball would be handball! Which is already a sport!
Hey! Well maybe we shouldnt have anymore wars! That means you'll be screwed the next to germany comes to kick yer arses!
But you use you hands for everything else so if we followed your rules basketball would be handball! Which is already a sport!
That's a very interesting and new take on writing! But I just want to point out (the little nitpicker in me likes to do that :p) that with the sort of lazy grammar sentence structure wise and all the different effects heaped on sort of randomly, it looks a bit like a kid discovering all he can do on Word. No offence, but it doesn't look too "professional", if you see what I mean.
On the other hand, putting bits and pieces of those effects here and there in a story at key points would really add to the realism and 'cool' factor of a story! If you really developed this, you could make an awesome story even with just average material, simply because you 'spiced it up' so to speak :p I'm really looking forward to see what you're going to do next! :p
On the other hand, putting bits and pieces of those effects here and there in a story at key points would really add to the realism and 'cool' factor of a story! If you really developed this, you could make an awesome story even with just average material, simply because you 'spiced it up' so to speak :p I'm really looking forward to see what you're going to do next! :p
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