Oooo I like, especially the beginning. Very nicely done and I am honored that my drawing inspired you to write something! :) If you want I can send you the colored version of the pic to use as a thumbnail.

Thank you for letting me write this and I'm happy you enjoyed it. It would be great if you sent me a color version I could use for the tile.

You're very welcome and thank you for writing it! :) I did enjoy it was pretty interesting to see how different you went as far as story line. :) Sure thing I will do so when I get home.

Just read your story and I got to say you did a great job with it! I loved the way you made a strong background story, personalities, character and emotions in it. Very well done. And all from just one picture, that is the mark of a talented writer. I would love to see this as a short series, the continuing adventures of Jander and Regnaras. And to see what other sticky situations they get into^^

Thank you for the praise. Glad you enjoyed it. These little exercises help keep my writing skills sharp.

I very much so enjoied it^^ And sharp they are 0.o *takes notes* ^^

I clicked on the link and got a "fatal error" message

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4953651/ the original picture was the sketch of this comic page. Two different stories, one picture. :)