A Date to Remember (Final)
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Actually in the original draft of the story, that wasn't too far off the mark as it was supposed to be a BNW story with Don, Lilac, and Giddy. However the story morphed into the current PG one, making it a much better story though I may reuse parts of the original draft in a follow-up story in BNW 11.
So, not an orgy, but perhaps a very friendly 'group hug' after dinner.
Besides, it seems impolite to *ahem* your date, your date's BFF, AND two other ladies you just hooked up with on the first date.
Now, on the second date, assuming all four are invited from the start, seems more appropriate. It also gives the gals a chance to compare notes about the goodnight kiss before they all decide whether to toss their dresses onto the same pile, so to speak.
Besides, it seems impolite to *ahem* your date, your date's BFF, AND two other ladies you just hooked up with on the first date.
Now, on the second date, assuming all four are invited from the start, seems more appropriate. It also gives the gals a chance to compare notes about the goodnight kiss before they all decide whether to toss their dresses onto the same pile, so to speak.
If there was going to be sex, it certainly wasn't going to be with the whole gang.
Lucy and Mariko were just tagging along for the free meal and a little payback towards their dates for the whole mess those two snooks cooked up. All very friendly but that's about the size of it.
Lucy and Mariko were just tagging along for the free meal and a little payback towards their dates for the whole mess those two snooks cooked up. All very friendly but that's about the size of it.
Corrected:
"Tell you what, ladies. While there isn't enough here for more than a couple of steak dinners, I do know of a little rus shish-kabob place that also does real meat and I can afford to pay for five plus some drinks if you want to join Lilac and me!"
(He forgot to add, "That is, if it's okay with you, Lilac.")
"Tell you what, ladies. While there isn't enough here for more than a couple of steak dinners, I do know of a little rus shish-kabob place that also does real meat and I can afford to pay for five plus some drinks if you want to join Lilac and me!"
(He forgot to add, "That is, if it's okay with you, Lilac.")
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