AN: Hi everyone. First off, let me say that I did not intend to be gone THIS long. I just reached another of those moments were I suffered burn-out. I sat down for ages and just couldn't write anything. But, now that's all in the past, and I've got the latest chapter out. Secondly, my time away has allowed me to organise the rest of the story. I've known since day one how the story was going to be laid out. What the beginning, middle and end would be. Now, I can tell you, The Odyssey will be concluding with Chapter 20. Yup, only three more chapters to go, and Jason's adventures will be over. So, let's get this show on the road. Let me know what you think in the comments section. As always, constructive criticism is wanted.
Again, I've put this through Grammarly, so I apologise for any spelling or grammar throughout the story.
SYNOPSIS:
Jason Sankowski did not expect to live an exciting life. Not even in a world where humans are considered a delicacy and hunted for food by the giants that roam the lands. Yet, upon arriving in a new city, to begin a new life, he is suddenly removed from his comfortable surroundings and thrust into a fight for survival.
The sun slowly rose above the horizon, bathing the city's skyline in a golden glow. A strong breeze whistled across the compound, sending fallen leaves spiralling into the air. However, the few Vulpes' outside performed their duties to their utmost despite the wind's antics.
Glitch stared out at the city beyond their walls from the third-story window. Atop her head, Jason sat between her two towering, fluffy ears. Even though Jason had a good perch, she was gentle when turning her head from side to side.
{Well, today is the day,} Glitch said, idly drumming her fingers on the window sill. {Are you ready?}
{As ready as I'm ever going to be,} Jason answered. His gaze swept the compound once more before settling on the Tower of Exousía. The colossal structure loomed above the entire city like a watchful guard. Its stern presence reminded everyone of the power it wielded.
There was a knock at the door, followed by a Vulpes servant asking if they were ready. From atop her head, Jason could feel the movement of Glitch's eyebrows as they rose, her eyes looking up at him. Jason affirmed the servants' question, and Glitch relayed the answer. The servant then informed them they were to assemble in the courtyard to begin their journey to the tower.
Glitch raised her open palm to her head, and Jason climbed into it. Carefully she lowered her hand to cup the both of them together before walking over to the table. Laying in its centre was a wooden box with a window cut into the front. Trix had a carpenter in the city construct it for her. It was to be his travel case. Glitch opened the lid and gently lowered Jason inside.
The interior was opulent, with silk lining the walls and floor and miniature cushions for him to sit down. The ever-relaxing presence of the surrexerunt petals eased his fears, along with the bars covering the window. They allowed him a view of the outside world but spaced apart just enough to prevent the giant, furry fingers of even the smallest mammalian from reaching within. Jason settled himself into a pile of cushions and looked up at Glitch, her face framed by the box's open roof.
{Let's go,} he said, and she closed the lid, and he listened with relief as she secured it shut. Then, from his position in the cushion pile, Jason watched as they passed the hallway, stairs and parlour before reaching the courtyard of Trix's villa.
The vulpes in question was already waiting with her entourage, who kept their distance as Glitch approached. She wore a white toga with a long, red sash covering her body's right side. Gold rings adorned her ears and jewels on her fingers, while a pearl collar around her neck completed the ensemble. Mahx stood proudly by Trix's side, decked out in new clothes and a new bronze shoulder guard, much bigger than the previous one. At his sides lay a bronze, short and long sword.
Everyone's fur had been immaculately cleaned and groomed. Even Glitch's fur was fluffier and shone with a brightness he'd never seen before. Then, of course, he'd been provided with his own bath, and Glitch had been polite enough to turn her back when he bathed. So now he too was decked out in a fine suit, provided from Trix's stockpile of sapien items, and cleaned up, ready to stand before every guild on the Middle Continent.
Jason looked upon the assembled vulpes'. {Where's Shique?} he asked.
{Never too far away,} came a cheerful reply before her smiling, gigantic grey face appeared before his window. She gave a small wave and giggled as he reciprocated. With everyone assembled, Mahx handed out hooded, woollen cloaks. It was to protect the identities of both Glitch and Shique. Mahx wasn't taking any chances that the other guilds could've spotted them from the moment they landed until he approached them in the marketplace.
{Now that we are ready, I suggest we leave,} Trix said, glancing up towards the sky. {The assembly is to begin within two hours.} The entire troop formed a protective circle around Glitch as they all marched towards the Villa's front entrance. Despite all the protection, Jason couldn't stop himself from tensing as they passed through the double gates and out into the open street.
It was the first time since Jason arrived in Megalopolis that he had been outside Trix's villa. At the time, he had no idea that the Guilds knew about Glitch, and now, he wondered who knew what. Did someone spy Glitch before they arrived at Trix's home? Were spies watching the compound for any signs of when Glitch would leave? Or was someone lying in wait to ambush the entire party so that they could make a snatch and grab?
Observing the other vulpes, Jason saw they, too, were tense as their eyes and ears roamed over the crowds they passed through. The masses themselves were tight but parted to allow the vulpes through. Interestingly, the lutrinae weren't the dominant species in sight. They only made up one-quarter of the crowd, as the majority were mixed species from the Middle Continent; while scattered here and there, he could see representatives from both the Amber and High Continent.
They didn't walk far, as not long after leaving the villa behind, they reached a canal. Steps led down to a dock, stretching along the sides, with gondolas berthed at little piers. Everyone marched a few piers down from the stairs to a rather fancy-looking gondola containing a wooden roof and curtains. Everyone climbed into the boat and, after drawing the curtains, cast off and began its trek down the canal.
The curtains were of a light fabric that allowed the viewer to see outside while providing some privacy. The smooth ride reminded Jason of when he and Glitch had taken that boat out of Tribus City to the coast. The boat's crew were vulpes, not lutrinae, and observing many of the passing boats, Jason noted they weren't as skilled as lutrinae piloted crafts. Once, they nearly collided with another boat, and despite the vulpes clearly not being at fault, all lutrinae, and even some of their mammalian passengers, shouted obscenities at the vulpes.
As they left that unfortunate incident behind, Jason was aware of distant noise not too far ahead. It sounded like shouting. As they drew closer, he recognised the lutrinae's language. As they rounded a bend in the canal, Jason saw a large open pool, dominated by a pyramid-like stone platform, jutting out of the water. Atop it stood lutrinae in long, flowing robes. Positioned along the various levels of the pyramid, from the very top stood a lone lutrinae in fancy robes who shouted to a congregation of lutrinae, bobbing in the water. The crowd surrounded the platform, looking up at the speaker with reverence.
{That is the *,} Glitch answered when he inquired about it. {You know, where you pay homage to higher beings.}
So, they were worshipping their Gods. Jason scowled at this and turned away, not wishing to know anything more.
At this, Trix spoke up. {That reminds me, there is one thing I've been meaning to ask you; About your culture. I've noted your kind has many similarities in your society to Mammalians, but I've never found anything that could identify as a parallel to religion.} Jason scoffed.
{Sapiens don't have any deities,} he answered. {All forms of ancient Sapien cultures never did. After all, what God would be so cruel as to create us and give us this size?}
{But - what about, Pyh-mush?} Jason tilted his head before his eyes widened with recognition.
"Oh, you mean, Primus." He chuckled. {"Primus" isn't a God; it's a place. All forms of ancient Sapien culture say pretty much the same thing. "Primus" is an astral plane, the afterlife. If you've been good in your life, you return to "Primus."} Trix's ears flicked.
{Return?}
{"Primus" is said to be the birthplace of Sapien kind,} Jason answered. {It is where we came from. Although there are different versions, they all tell the same story. At the beginning of Sapien history, a catastrophe expelled us from "Primus." The earliest records of Sapien history that survived to this day emphasised returning to "Primus." So when you die, your soul goes home.}
{Are there any descriptions of Pyh-mush?}
{From what the old legends say, it's just like Earth, only everything is our size,} Jason answered. {The plants and animals are to us, as they are to you. No giants are trying to eat you; we live on the ground as Mammalians do. It's every Sapien's wish to return there when they die.}
Trix looked conflicted about something. Then slowly, she asked, {what if you haven't been good?}
{Then your soul stays behind on Earth for all eternity.}
{I can't understand how you can live your whole life without believing in a higher being,} Trix said. {All Mammalians believe in a supreme being, someone who created and watched over them.}
{The Neo Visions have *,} Shique said with pride. {The Goddess of invention.} The name sounded like someone sticking their tongue between their teeth and trying to spit. Like, Tith.
{The Oryctolagus worship *, the Goddess of speed,} Glitch chimed in with excitement. The name sounded like someone trying to blow air through closed lips. Like Phatt.
{And we vulpes worship *, the Goddess of cunning,} Trix boasted. The name sounded like someone trying to whistle with their mouth open. Like Wheet.
{I have noticed that all your Gods are female,} Jason said. Everyone in the gondola burst out laughing, even servants.
{Naturally,} Trix said. {Females give birth, and the Gods give birth to all life. How could they not be female?}
{I find it absurd that life can reproduce asexually,} Jason said. {Don't the Gods get lonely? Do they desire male company?}
{The Gods are above such mortal desires,} Trix said without emotion. Jason opened his mouth to ask another question, but Trix preempted him. {You seem hostile towards our religion.} It wasn't a question.
{As a Sapien, I'm uncomfortable with the idea of Gods,} Jason answered. {Where are the Sapien Gods?} His voice took on a harsh tone as he spoke. {Did they abandon us, casting us down onto the Earth? Some Sapien scholars speculate that they were the ones who exiled us from "Primus." If so, why? What did we do? Why has life been so hard for us since day one?} Jason threw his hands up into the air. "Who the hell cries for Sapien kind? No one, that's who!"
{I've noticed you use the word "Hell" quite a lot,} Trix said. Jason raised an eyebrow. During his journey, he'd seen that Mammalians had a tough time pronouncing Sapien words due to the shape of their muzzles. However, the word Hell was easy for them because it was short and didn't require using one's tongue as much.
{It's believed to be a place worse than Earth, but there have never been any mentions of your soul going there} Jason answered. {Our early records indicate as much, but sadly, no one knows anything about it. Hell terrified the first Sapiens so much that they hardly spoke of it, and some scholars theorise that it's not a place but probably an early metaphor for the vulpes'.} Trix didn't look offended. Instead, she appeared to be thinking hard about something.
{I have noticed you use it as a curse,} Trix said, rubbing her chin. {Given your distaste for higher beings, is it possible that "Hell" is the name of the old Sapien God?} Trix suggested. Jason nodded.
{That theory has been speculated. Those who do believe it is our God, curse them willingly,} he spat. {They deserve to be cursed for all eternity for putting us in this position. Any God, who gives their creation such a handicap, doesn't deserve any love. Why would they create us to be preyed upon by beings who are God-like themselves? For Sapiens, there are no Gods on Earth or anywhere.} He folded his arms to show he didn't care what anyone thought of him for saying that. Everyone went silent.
{I was going to invite you to the shrine when I pay my respects to Wheet,} Trix said but didn't finish the rest of her sentence. Instead, she said, {politics and religion are indeed the two things one should never discuss in public.}
{Weren't you the one who is trying to protect me from the other Guilds?} Jason asked. Trix looked confused before shaking her head with a smile.
{Oh, the shrine isn't in the city; it's on my property,} she answered. {Mammalians don't allow any different species to set up their shrines within other species' cities; publicly.} Jason would've turned her down anyway. The thought of being in one room with every vulpes within Trix's compound was enough to send multiple shockwaves of terror down his spine. Still, the pause gave him time to reflect and calm down.
Jason sighed. {Please, Ms Trix,} he said. {I'm not trying to insult you or your beliefs, but as you no doubt can tell from our conversation, we sapiens are hostile to religion.} Trix's tail flicked.
{What about Pyh-mush? And Hell?}
{That's the afterlife, and a curse word,} Jason said. {Nothing religious about that.} Trix tilted her head slightly.
{Really.} Again, that wasn't a question. Jason just gave her a confused stare.
{Umm, hey!} Shique interrupted, her sizeable grey face appearing before his window. {This is getting awkward. How about we move on?}
{Yeah, let's talk about something else,} Glitch agreed.
Jason was about to reply when he paused. Off to their far left, the canal was blocked. Guards stood atop what was once a double wooden gate that was now permanently sealed. Yet, even from this distance, he could see their scowling faces aimed at the unseen sight on the other side. Curiosity took hold of him, and he asked about it.
{That leads to the Sinking Slums on the city's east coast,} Trix answered. {It's home to the city's destitute, invalids and outcasts. It's the place disgraced lutrinae often go to start a new life.}
One eyebrow rose. {The east coast, right?} When Trix confirmed, Jason asked, {so isn't that the outlet for the central sewer system?}
{Yes, and I wouldn't advise you to go in the water either.} All the vulpes chuckled, and Jason didn't need that answered.
{What's wrong with them?} Jason asked as he eyed the soldiers. {I mean, why is it barricaded from the rest of the city?}
{Aside from the obvious, they represent a massive problem for the city officials. They created the area as a refugee camp over ninety years ago during an economical and natural disaster. They weren't supposed to be a permanent solution, as they were assembled only to be a stop-gap measure to deal with the massive influx of refugees. However, the aftermath of the natural and economic crisis left the city with very little money to spend. So, the refugee camps became permanent homes. Over time, they grew according to need rather than planning, and the area was a mess.}
{If the lutrinae built them, how are they sinking?}
{When constructing in the water, the lutrinae lay foundations before laying down their buildings, which takes time. At the time of the camp's construction, they needed lots of housing fast. No foundations were laid because, at the time, no one believed they would be permanent. With so much weight and no stability, whole sections of the slums are sinking into the sea, as the name implies. Houses that were above water fifty years ago are now submerged. *, it's not uncommon to wake up one day and hear that an entire building collapsed into the water.}
{So how do they deal with it?}
{They just build new structures atop the old ones.} Jason raised an eyebrow at the idea of multi-story shanty towns. While Sapiens did have poverty and unemployment, they lived in government housing complexes. Little more than one-room apartments with the bare necessities kept them off the streets until they could improve their situation.
It amused some sapiens and confirmed to many that mammalians were savages since they didn't look after those who couldn't fend for themselves. He'd seen spies' photographs of mammalian cities' slums and shanty towns. It was a hive of criminal activity and unsanitary conditions filled with junk, broken furniture, and rotting food. So it surprised no one that sapien spies avoided those areas as much as possible.
By now, they had moved past, and while Jason could no longer see the gate, Trix still spoke. {Every passing year, the population of the sinking slums grows. Nowadays, not just lutrinae, but rejects from all over the world call it home.} That grabbed Jason's attention.
{Really? I thought mammalians don't mix.} From outside, Jason heard Glitch's grip tighten on his travel case.
{They don't,} Trix answered. {They have little communities and keep to themselves, but they still buy, sell, and trade. Like in any other city that has foreign nationals living within its walls.} Jason paused as he recalled Glitch's life before they met.
That was the only odd sight Jason saw. About forty-five minutes later, the gondola pilot announced they were entering the Central District. The canal gave way to a purpose-built lake. Where houses and buildings had been on either side, they now sat in the water like exposed rocks. It was a strange sight as they travelled further into the district, giving the illusion that this section of the city had flooded.
What was even stranger were the large stone skyways connecting the buildings, reminding Jason of the skyways that connected tree communities back home. As they drew closer, Jason could see that while the lutrinae lived in the buildings, they had a market and business stalls within those skyways. Even from his travel case, Jason could see they were cramped. The booths lined both sides, leaving just enough room in the middle for the mammalians to pass side by side. The sounds and smells that wafted down reminded him of the marketplace they visited when they first arrived.
Here, the mammalians were all lutrinae and appeared to be working class. The large buildings were apartments, while the traders, merchants and hawkers who resided in the skyways didn't have the quality of merchandise he'd seen back in the open-air marketplace. Beneath the surface, they swam to and fro, exiting and entering buildings through doorways built under the water. At the water line, buildings had doors, and tiny piers, whose purpose was to allow goods in and out of the buildings.
The entire district looked fancy and old but rundown as if maintenance wasn't a priority. According to Trix, these buildings represented the original city of Megalopolis. As the city grew to encompass the surrounding islands, the more affluent residents relocated closer to the economic heart of Megalopolis, leaving the workers and lesser merchants to move in.
Then without warning, the buildings opened up to a large lagoon. A massive island dominated the area, of which Jason could see but a fraction. It climbed high into the sky, high above the buildings of the Central District. Then, atop sat the large, looming structure that was the Tower of Exousía. Once again, Jason heard Glitch's fingers tighten on his travel case.
When they reached the island, they berthed their gondola at the numerous piers that ringed the shoreline. The entire party climbed out of the boat and, again, formed a protective circle around Glitch as they headed to a set of long, wide and very steep stairs. The journey up the stairs took some time, for everyone paused to catch their breath when they finally reached the top. The cumbersome hooded cloaks added to everyone's discomfort. Even then, they still had a long way to walk. The path they took was a paved road, which occasionally held vehicle traffic. However, the carts contained supplies and foodstuffs rather than passengers. It took them twenty-five minutes before, at long last, they stood before the massive double doors of the Tower of Exousía.
It was the largest mammalian building Jason had ever seen. He'd never seen any structure pass three stories in height throughout his journey. The tower easily topped five. The way it was structured reminded Jason of cake towers, each level smaller than the one underneath, while giant columns ringed the outside of each floor. The first floor was the largest, containing two other structures, an east and west wing. Steps led up to the front entrance, which held four massive pillars supporting a frieze larger than the one he'd seen for the Lupus library. Lutrinae guards stood on duty by the doors and opened them for the approaching vulpes'. Jason noted that those who weren't guild members had to present a pass. Much like admittance to Hark's palace, mammalians gave different coloured tokens to the guards, and just like Hark's palace, the guards granted them entrance regardless of their colour.
Beyond the door was a bare-bones parlour. Just benches along the walls, while three tight hallways lay ahead. Different mammalian species waited, while now and then, a pristinely dressed lutrinae would beacon them to follow. If Jason worried about their group looking conspicuous, he needn't worry. There were a group of four mammalians sitting together, their identities hidden by the heavy cloaks they wore. He saw one shift and exposed their hand, which only had two fingers. The rest was a mess of burnt fur and mangled flesh. Jason's group quickly moved past those waiting and took the middle of the three hallways.
As they neared their destination, Jason took the time to go over in his mind everything Trix had taught him about the guilds. As sapiens knew, the guilds had risen to prominence during the Unification Wars due to their autocratic rulers turning to them to develop better technologies, ideas and skills over their opponents. Over time, as each war grew increasingly desperate, more privileges and rights were granted to them, so by the time of the war's conclusion, they had become a power unto themselves. In the years following the peace, the ruling nobility of each species stood down one by one as the guilds took control, as all agreed that a collective of minds, rather than a single one, could best see their people through to a brighter future. How that transition occurred and whether the nobility themselves agreed with it, Trix never revealed.
Their government was a mixed model, combining monarchy in the chairman, aristocracy in the senate, merchant families in the major council, and democracy in the form of allowing the free citizens of the capitol to vote for the chairman. The chairman, when elected, ruled for life, ruling alongside what was called the minor council. Six councillors from the senate who acted as advisors formed the central body of the government. The ruling guild members were an oligarchy of merchants, aristocrats and skilled artisans. The major council served as regional governments, while the free citizens who could vote had to belong to a guild. Different species, slaves, and non-guild members couldn't.
Jason reflected on his time in the Middle Continent and what Tac had told him. The other species had judged the guild's form of ruling based on concepts they understood within their society. Even though the chairman was technically a monarch, they didn't recognise them because they received their position through an election rather than inheritance or taking the position through strength.
It wasn't very long before they emerged into a vast room. It reminded Jason of an amphitheatre cut in half. Semi-circular in layout, with sloping seating. Stone benches with cushions made up the seating in the gallery. At the same time, on the stage below sat five thrones, arranged in a half circle facing the audience. Behind them sat five long wooden benches with cushions, positioned behind their respective thrones, situated before a massive bandshell. Jason also noted those thrones were the only seats in the arena to have desks.
{The assembly is due to start in forty minutes,} Trix announced to the group. {Let us take our seats.} They descended the stairs towards the stage below and walked over to the last throne on the right. Trix sat down on the throne while Mahx took a position just behind her to the left. Everyone else sat down at the bench strategically located behind Trix's throne.
As they settled down, Jason saw that more and more mammalians were arriving. Representatives of every species on the Middle Continent filled the arena. Jason noticed they took up the bottom row as they took their seats. The other seats appeared to be taken up by spectators, assistants, or those wishing to seek an audience with the guilds. Noise was everywhere, and it echoed through the large room as mammalians all spoke among themselves in their native tongues.
More and more, the room started to fill. Some took up residence in the front row, and many more occupied the back seats, while a select few sat down on the thrones. When the room was packed, Jason took stock of everyone. Sitting on the five thrones were the cervidae, the vulpes, the ursidae and the bison, while the lutrinae representative occupied the middle. The rest of the guild representatives sat on the front row benches—the meles, rattus, oryctolagus, procyon, geomyidae, capra, cricetinae, erinaceus, musculus, gulo and mustela.
Jason's gaze turned to the other four thrones. Trix had explained to him that these five species represented the Grand Council. The five most influential mammalians on the Middle Continent. Whenever the assembled mammalians discussed laws or actions of great significance, the Grand Council voted on the matter. For any law or action to pass, it needed a three-fourths majority. It turned out that the lutrinae weren't allowed to vote. Instead, their position was to act as one part arbitrator, one part judge. Only if the vote was tied could they pass one.
It did lead to Jason asking Trix if the other species so despised the vulpes, why were they on the Council? All the wealth they had accumulated during the Unification Wars had given them much-needed clout among the other less powerful mammalians. Trix had also pointed out the hypocrisy of the mammalians wanting their influence and wealth to the vulpes' face while envying and ridiculing it behind their backs.
Jason eyed the other three mammalians. The cervidae, the ursidae and the bison. Trix was already on his side, so he would need to win over at least two of them to kill the motion to exterminate all sapiens successfully. First, he eyed the cervidae representative. He was tall, with caramel fur and white spots. The underside of his muzzle, neck and front of his torso were also white. Two towering antlers reached above his head like a fancy crown. He wore a deep blue gown over two leather straps that crossed his bulky chest. A short dress of sky blue that ended at his knees was held in place by a thick, leather belt with a gold buckle. Leather bracers covered his forearms and legs. His guild did wish to organise trade, so it would be possible to win him over.
His gaze then fell on the other two. The bisons' size was halfway between the cervidae and the ursidae. He wore a long, flowing dark green robe with long sleeves that hung around the cuffs. A headband adorned with numerous diamond shapes ran around his head, just above his horns. His face was thick and squat, the fur around his muzzle, neck and chest was a dark brown, and the rest was lighter, just like the rest of his body. The fur on his chin created the illusion of a forked beard.
Jason didn't know much about the bison, as their tribe was on the far side of the Middle Continent. Sapiens knew they were similar in culture to the cervidae, so maybe there was something. He'd still have to be careful and play it by ear.
Jason then turned his gaze to the ursidae. She was the biggest mammalian in the room, and her throne barely contained her massive frame. Judging her size, he couldn't tell if a Leo was the taller of the two. Her fur was jet-black, save for her muzzle and her chest, which was white. She wore a bright red headscarf wrapped around her neck and a huge, red cloak over a deep blue slip dress with two thick straps around her shoulders. She also was the first mammalian Jason had seen to sport footwear. They looked like someone had made a compromise between sandals and boots. Made of leather, they had no front, exposing her toes, but they did cover the ankles and halfway to her knees.
She would be the wild card in this game, as they were a closed society. Sapiens did know the ursidae had the largest army on the Middle Continent. While it would be possible to arrange technology trade between sapiens and mammalians, they might want to keep a monopoly on their military prowess. While sapiens might trade technology, they would never sell weapons technology to mammalians, let alone mammalian predators.
The room quietened as the lutrinae on the throne rose to her feet. Jason noted the two circular sound blocks at the end of each armrest. She was a small female with dark brown fur and a strip of light brown running down the middle of her chin. She wore a purple sash around her torso, over a toga of white, with red borders. She carried a baton made of bronze in her right hand. Her whiskers were long and numerous, the most predominant feature of her face. Her fur was light brown, while the underside of her muzzle, down to her chest, was a honey-blond.
{Honoured guild members,} she began. {I need to give no reason for the assembly today, for you all know why we are here.} A low murmur ran through the assembled crowd, but interestingly, not from the gathered guild members, who just sat in stony-faced silence. {We have never taken the sapien threat seriously; until now. We are all aware of the sapiens flying machines, but they have always kept to the planes and forests. They have never dared fly into our towns or cities; thus, we grew complacent.} She paused. When she continued, her voice took on a deep, serious tone. {We have never experienced such destruction, carnage or terror unleashed on the innocent citizens of Baile an Chósta.}
Jason furrowed his brow from within his box but quickly brushed it aside. Now was not the time for blame games. He needed to focus.
{The destructive power the sapiens have demonstrated is too great to ignore. At any given point, they can bypass our strongest forts and largest armies to deliver a crushing blow to the very core of our civilisation.} Again, she paused to sweep her stern gaze around the room. {How do we fight against an enemy like that?}
{No army is invincible,} a rattus called out from her seat. {And neither are the sapiens. The trick of a smaller opponent taking down the larger one is to find their weak spot, then strike with everything you have.}
{And what is their weakness?} Jason couldn't see who asked that.
{Does that question need answering?} The female ursidae rolled a free hand. {We might not know much about sapiens, but we do know that our hearing, eyesight and smell are greater than theirs. They are tiny compared to us. Their only advantage appears to be their ability to create new technologies faster than ours.}
{That doesn't answer the question,} the rattus' tone took on an annoyed edge. {We know their weaknesses but don't know how to exploit them; that's the question.} Her fellow rattus nodded in agreement.
Jason's brow furrowed. Wouldn't the rattus guild know about the secret little project they were running back in Baile an Chósta? Then he rubbed his chin in thought. Considering what happened there and its secrecy, the rattus guild was likely going for plausible deniability. The ursidae, on the other hand, gave an irritated frown, obviously annoyed that the rattus needed the answer spelled out for her.
{Numbers,} she answered. {History has shown that no matter how strong your opponent is, they can not fight everywhere at once.}
{Which is why we are here today,} the lutrinae cut in, rising to her feet. {To propose something that has never been thought possible. For all mammalians to put aside their differences, grudges and ideologies. To band together and end the sapien menace before they do it to us.} Again, another low murmuring ran through the audience.
Someone out of Jason's field of vision asked, {Will the entirety of the Middle Continent be enough to finish off those tiny furless ones?}
{We can ask for help from the great powers of the Amber and High continents,} the lutrinae said. {For when we exterminate the sapiens, their secrets will be ours for the taking.} She paused as her gaze swept the room. No doubt, that was the carrot now dangled before the others. {I highly doubt they would want us to gain all the spoils.}
{Can we be sure of that?} a grevyi called out. He rose as he spoke, folding his arms as he glared down at the lutrinae. {If we are to provide our assistance, what guarantee can you provide that you won't back out of our agreement once the sapiens are gone?}
{That is what we are here to discuss,} the lutrinae answered. {First, we need to agree on an alliance, then work out the finer details.} Sporadic laughter filled the audience. From what little Jason could see, it came from those who weren't natives of the Middle Continent.
{Work out the details later?} the grevyi barked. {No one is going to agree to anything without knowing the details. Especially since the guild chooses not to show any respect to traditions, ideologies and the ruling governments of our lands.}
{That's because you chose your governments through brawn, not brain!} a rattus snapped.
{And what is wrong with that?} a lupus demanded before pointing at the rattus. {The only difference between the guilds and our Prime Alphas is with you, your people vote first and take orders later. With us, we don't waste our time voting.}
{Then why aren't the lupus united under a single Prime Alpha? United we stand, divided you fall.}
{Silence, please!} the lutrinae bellowed and smacked her baton down hard on the sound block to her left. The audience settled down. {Now, since the representatives of both the Amber and High Continents have made their case, we shall work out details regarding their concerns.}
Trix chose that moment to speak. {Before we begin negotiations on the proposed alliance, I want to make an announcement.} She turned and motioned to Glitch. The oryctolagus girl rose on shaky legs and came to Trix's side. {I wish to sponsor a guest for an audience before the Grand Council.}
While everyone's eyes were on Glitch, Jason noted the lutraines' weren't. When she spoke, her words were slow. {Who does the Vulpes Guild wish to sponsor?} Trix motioned to one of her staff, who hastily produced a red cushion. She promptly passed it to Glitch, who tucked it under her arm. She took a few steps forward, gently placed the carry case down and opened the latch.
Jason watched as she carefully reached into the box and closed her fingers around him. Then, she lifted him out and placed him in the centre of the cushion before standing back up. Jason sat cross-legged and looked around.
Bewilderment was the predominant expression that greeted him. Despite all his preparations, he couldn't control the shiver that ran up his spine as every predator species in the room bent forward ever so slightly, their noses twitching. Finally, he swallowed the nervous lump in his throat and spoke.
{Greetings, honoured guest. My name is "Jason Sankowski." I am here today to present myself before the Grand Council as the unofficial representative of the "Confederation of the Sixteen Tribes." That is the official title of the lands ruled by the sapien people.} No one responded.
Jason's gaze swept the gathered assembly. Just then, something caught his eye. Without tilting his head, he cast his eyes towards the ceiling. He stared up there for a few moments before raising his hand to his head and tapping his ear three times. Then, finally, the cervidae spoke.
{You wish to ask us to spare your race.} It wasn't a question.
{Why should we listen to you,} the lutrinae asked. {You said it yourself; you aren't even an official diplomat.} She pointed the baton at him accusingly. {Your government doesn't even know you're here, nor what you are attempting to do.} There was no point lying.
{That is correct,} Jason confessed. {But what I am trying to do has its merits among my people's government. We want peaceful coexistence-} His words were cut off by a roar of noise, and Jason slammed his hands over his ears to cut it out. Throughout the din, he recognised Trix's voice demanding calm. Finally, the lutrinae ended the noise, repeatedly slamming her baton on the sound block until the room was silent.
{Now that we have some order, let's organise the responses to your ludicrous claim.} She pointed the baton into the crowd, and Jason turned to see a heavily built lupus glaring daggers at him. From what he could see, the male wore leather bracers around his wrist and a dark blue vest. His fur was blue-grey, save for the underside of his muzzle, neck and chest, which was white. {The chair recognises * of the Low-Mountains Pack.} His name sounded like she was snarling the word, 'sir' through closed teeth, like Saar.
{You say that after attacking the innocent lupus of Baile an Chósta?} Saar demanded. {They had families who had nothing to do with your quarrels with the mammalians of the Middle Continent. Yet you attacked them.}
{They were unfortunately collateral damage,} Jason said with a heavy heart. {But I ask you, why did we attack Baile an Chósta?} He then pointed at the rattus'. {Because the rattus guild was making a poison that could kill our surrexerunt flowers.}
{Lies!} the leader of the rattus delegation yelled. Jason ignored her.
{They were already planning to wipe us out.} Jason pointed at Saar. {I can tell, sir, that you are a soldier, and any soldier can tell you that the best defence is a good offence.} Without waiting for a reply, Jason swung his finger back to the rattus'. {I know about the rattus, because I was in Baile an Chósta when my people attacked it. Hark, the Prime Alpha, asked me to spy on the rattus guild. That's how I know.}
All around the room, ears and tails twitched, albeit briefly. {Can you prove this?} the lutrinae asked. Jason gritted his teeth. Tac could vouch for him, but he was on the other side of the Middle Continent, and Hark…
{You only have my word,} Jason confessed before turning hopeful eyes to the crowd. {Unless any high-ranking Stone-Claw Pack members are in the hall?} Saar glared at him before folding his arms as he shook his head.
{The Stone-Claw Pack and their allies are preoccupied at the moment, along with a hefty majority of the High Continent,} he said. {Hark's strength kept a lasting peace on the High Continent. With his death, Hark's eldest son is fighting off many of his father's enemies, eager to settle old scores.} Jason's lips tightened at the memory of Hark's son wanting to get Tac and himself out of his lands quickly. Now it made sense. His father was a legend on the High Continent, undefeated in battle. So now that he was gone, it made sense that all his enemies would move quickly to take advantage of the situation. Maybe they even hoped his son wasn't the warrior his father was.
He knew he'd have to face a multi-front war, so the last thing he wanted to deal with, right in the heart of his empire, would be guilds and sapiens. Saar continued. {And it's not just the Stone-Claw Pack and their allies. With all the major powers of the lupus territories engaged in war, there is no one to keep the rest of the mammalian species in check. Other species are attempting to snatch lands from their neighbours across the High Continent. Lands containing valuable deposits of tin.}
Jason had to fight the urge to sweat with fear. He only hoped that all this fighting would spare Tac and his village. Indeed, tin was valuable to the mammalians as it helped fuel the creation of bronze. It gave Jason pause as he thought over his strategy. If the mammalians were willing to fight over tin, what else would they be eager to fight for, or more importantly, to protect? He could dangle the carrot of trade, but someone would demand technology. And what would that lead to; Iron? What would that do to the economy of the High Continent? Would some advancement in technology threaten the livelihood of some other tribe?
And what would they be willing to do to protect it?
The head of the rattus delegation rose to her feet. {So, you wish to level accusations at the rattus guild, based solely on your word alone?} Jason nodded. {Then the rattus guild denies your claims.}
The lutrinae spoke, drawing Jason's attention. {Is there no evidence you can produce? No witnesses you can call?} Jason shook his head. {Then it is simply your word against theirs.} With that, the lutrinae turned and struck out with her baton, striking the sound block on the right side of her throne. The rattus guild members all smiled. Trix had gone over this procedure with him. When the chairman struck the sound block on the right side of her throne, it meant the conclusion of the discussion.
Any more mention of the rattus guild's accursed poison, and he would have his audience before the Grand Council forfeited. However, Jason's expression remained stone-faced as his eyes scanned the assembly. He'd believed this outcome would occur. His goal was simply to put the story out there. Everyone knew the rattus were insanely secretive. How many in the audience did not trust them? He might be a sapien, but who among the mammalians would be wondering if his words were valid? He'd noticed the distrust the other two continents displayed when the meeting began. If the mammalians were to unite against the sapiens, the fewer species that did, the greater his race's chances of survival were.
Jason hoped it wouldn't come to that, but he'd be a fool not to prepare for the worst.
{Jay-sun? That is how you say your name?} Jason turned to see the cervidae. {If you are here to argue against the extermination of your race, does that mean you're willing to offer something in return?} He stapled his fingers together. {Something that would entice mammalians? For example, a change in your species' foreign policy?}
{Yes,} the bison agreed. {Sapien foreign policy tends to attack first and never ask questions.} One side of Jason's mouth rose. He had hoped someone would raise this subject. He originally planned to do it, should none of the mammalians have offered.
{On that subject, I think we can help each other out,} Jason said. What he had in mind was something he thought could work. {I believe my people would be more than willing to keep their flying machines away from your urban areas if you can arrange to end sapien raids.}
{Actually, I was thinking along the lines of trade,} the cervidae said. {If you were to share some of your technology with mammalians, I'm sure that would go a long way to convincing the other tribes that you are sincere on the concept of peaceful coexistence.}
Before Jason could respond, the lutrinae pointed her baton towards the audience. {The chair recognises the honourable * from the Procyon guild branch in High-Wind city.} The name sounded like someone exaggerating, flicking their tongue out, like Flek. From the front row, a large procyon rose to his feet. He was big for his kind, with a short, pure white muzzle. The rest of his fur was a dark silver, while the black mask around his eyes stood out. His entire body lay obscured beneath a fancy white toga embroidered with gold trimmings.
{When the cervidae guild speaks of trade between sapiens and mammalians, do they mean all mammalians, or will the cervidae receive special privileges?} The cervidae opened his mouth, but Flek cut him off. {You are Jay-sun San-Cow-Key? That was the name of the talking sapien captured in Tribus City. After the riots in Tribus City, an oryctolagus girl avoided a cervidae patrol by producing a medallion. The kind that guilds give to represent them.} He then turned his scrutinising gaze on Glitch.
Jason froze, unsure how to proceed. He did not want to anger the cervidae guild, as he desperately needed their vote. But, on the other hand, if he wanted to avoid a war between sapiens and mammalians, he would have to put aside grudges and grievances.
{I stole that medallion,} Glitch answered before he could speak. {It was the only way I could get out of the city.}
{So, you stole him?}
{May I remind you that the oryctolagus guild doesn't have a chapter, nor any representatives anywhere near Tribus City,} Glitch replied. {So I wasn't under any orders from my guild. I stole him because I wanted more than just a pet I could talk to; I wanted a friend.}
{So!} All heads turned as one of the assistants to the lutrinae approached her, producing parchment of papyrus paper. The lutrinae judge read from the parchment. {Is the vulpes guild willing to accept the cervidae guild's claims that the vulpes were responsible for starting the riots in Tribus City?} All eyes then turned to Trix.
Although she controlled herself professionally, Jason could see the anger seething through her. Behind her, her entourage fumed silently. Jason turned to the cervidae guild member. Although calm and collected, he could see the nervousness in his trembling ears.
{Yes,} Trix said sharply after what felt like an eternity.
{Then you are willing to accept the fines and repro-}
{Yes!} Trix snapped. Jason let out the breath he'd been holding. So, like himself, Trix understood they needed the cervidae vote to kill the motion to exterminate the sapiens. He turned to look at her. What would be the repercussions for the vulpes guild?
The lutrinae didn't seem surprised. Instead, she pointed to the audience. {The chair recognises * of the rattus guild.} The name sounded like someone sucking in the air quickly, like Yehk.
{Our people were present in Tribus city on the day of the riot. And they reported that a large group of children were responsible for pickpocketing the patrons of the marketplace.} She gave Glitch a knowing smile {and indeed saw an oryctolagus girl in their company. After which, the children were escorted out of the city by cervidae guards.} Before anyone could respond, the lutrinae pointed to someone else.
{The chair recognises Flek from the Procyon guild branch in the city of High-Wind.}
{We had our citizens in Tribus City that day,} he said. {They reported the same thing as well.}
The lutrinae then turned to the cervidae. {*,} she said. His name sounded like someone clicking their tongue against their teeth while exhaling, Like Ti-Kah. {The cervidae guild has been under suspicion for starting the riot with the sole intention of stealing the talking sapien so that you can gain access to their technology first.} To his credit, Ti-Kah showed no fear as she kept talking. {These witnesses today prove those suspicions correct.} She pointed her baton at him.
{The cervidae guild has broken the law of trade, and as such, you know the punishment.} Ti-Kah was still for ten seconds before he gave a single nod. {Your vote will be excluded when the Grand Council has its final vote.} Then, she slammed the baton down on the right sound block.
Jason was stunned. The cervidae, the one guild, aside from the vulpes that he could get a yes vote from, was now disqualified from voting. He turned back to the council. That left Trix, the bison and the ursidae, two mammalians' Jason had no idea how they would, and even if he convinced one, who's to say Trix wouldn't lose her vote. Damn it, what were thoes repercussions? If that happened, the vote would be tied, meaning the final vote would fall to the lutrinae judge. And from the hostility she displayed, there was no doubt in Jason's mind that she would vote yes.
"Well… shit," was all Jason said.
Again, I've put this through Grammarly, so I apologise for any spelling or grammar throughout the story.
First Chapter: Act I
Previous Chapter: Act XVI***SYNOPSIS:
Jason Sankowski did not expect to live an exciting life. Not even in a world where humans are considered a delicacy and hunted for food by the giants that roam the lands. Yet, upon arriving in a new city, to begin a new life, he is suddenly removed from his comfortable surroundings and thrust into a fight for survival.
***“The Odyssey”
By MrNelg
Act: XVIIThe sun slowly rose above the horizon, bathing the city's skyline in a golden glow. A strong breeze whistled across the compound, sending fallen leaves spiralling into the air. However, the few Vulpes' outside performed their duties to their utmost despite the wind's antics.
Glitch stared out at the city beyond their walls from the third-story window. Atop her head, Jason sat between her two towering, fluffy ears. Even though Jason had a good perch, she was gentle when turning her head from side to side.
{Well, today is the day,} Glitch said, idly drumming her fingers on the window sill. {Are you ready?}
{As ready as I'm ever going to be,} Jason answered. His gaze swept the compound once more before settling on the Tower of Exousía. The colossal structure loomed above the entire city like a watchful guard. Its stern presence reminded everyone of the power it wielded.
There was a knock at the door, followed by a Vulpes servant asking if they were ready. From atop her head, Jason could feel the movement of Glitch's eyebrows as they rose, her eyes looking up at him. Jason affirmed the servants' question, and Glitch relayed the answer. The servant then informed them they were to assemble in the courtyard to begin their journey to the tower.
Glitch raised her open palm to her head, and Jason climbed into it. Carefully she lowered her hand to cup the both of them together before walking over to the table. Laying in its centre was a wooden box with a window cut into the front. Trix had a carpenter in the city construct it for her. It was to be his travel case. Glitch opened the lid and gently lowered Jason inside.
The interior was opulent, with silk lining the walls and floor and miniature cushions for him to sit down. The ever-relaxing presence of the surrexerunt petals eased his fears, along with the bars covering the window. They allowed him a view of the outside world but spaced apart just enough to prevent the giant, furry fingers of even the smallest mammalian from reaching within. Jason settled himself into a pile of cushions and looked up at Glitch, her face framed by the box's open roof.
{Let's go,} he said, and she closed the lid, and he listened with relief as she secured it shut. Then, from his position in the cushion pile, Jason watched as they passed the hallway, stairs and parlour before reaching the courtyard of Trix's villa.
The vulpes in question was already waiting with her entourage, who kept their distance as Glitch approached. She wore a white toga with a long, red sash covering her body's right side. Gold rings adorned her ears and jewels on her fingers, while a pearl collar around her neck completed the ensemble. Mahx stood proudly by Trix's side, decked out in new clothes and a new bronze shoulder guard, much bigger than the previous one. At his sides lay a bronze, short and long sword.
Everyone's fur had been immaculately cleaned and groomed. Even Glitch's fur was fluffier and shone with a brightness he'd never seen before. Then, of course, he'd been provided with his own bath, and Glitch had been polite enough to turn her back when he bathed. So now he too was decked out in a fine suit, provided from Trix's stockpile of sapien items, and cleaned up, ready to stand before every guild on the Middle Continent.
Jason looked upon the assembled vulpes'. {Where's Shique?} he asked.
{Never too far away,} came a cheerful reply before her smiling, gigantic grey face appeared before his window. She gave a small wave and giggled as he reciprocated. With everyone assembled, Mahx handed out hooded, woollen cloaks. It was to protect the identities of both Glitch and Shique. Mahx wasn't taking any chances that the other guilds could've spotted them from the moment they landed until he approached them in the marketplace.
{Now that we are ready, I suggest we leave,} Trix said, glancing up towards the sky. {The assembly is to begin within two hours.} The entire troop formed a protective circle around Glitch as they all marched towards the Villa's front entrance. Despite all the protection, Jason couldn't stop himself from tensing as they passed through the double gates and out into the open street.
It was the first time since Jason arrived in Megalopolis that he had been outside Trix's villa. At the time, he had no idea that the Guilds knew about Glitch, and now, he wondered who knew what. Did someone spy Glitch before they arrived at Trix's home? Were spies watching the compound for any signs of when Glitch would leave? Or was someone lying in wait to ambush the entire party so that they could make a snatch and grab?
Observing the other vulpes, Jason saw they, too, were tense as their eyes and ears roamed over the crowds they passed through. The masses themselves were tight but parted to allow the vulpes through. Interestingly, the lutrinae weren't the dominant species in sight. They only made up one-quarter of the crowd, as the majority were mixed species from the Middle Continent; while scattered here and there, he could see representatives from both the Amber and High Continent.
They didn't walk far, as not long after leaving the villa behind, they reached a canal. Steps led down to a dock, stretching along the sides, with gondolas berthed at little piers. Everyone marched a few piers down from the stairs to a rather fancy-looking gondola containing a wooden roof and curtains. Everyone climbed into the boat and, after drawing the curtains, cast off and began its trek down the canal.
The curtains were of a light fabric that allowed the viewer to see outside while providing some privacy. The smooth ride reminded Jason of when he and Glitch had taken that boat out of Tribus City to the coast. The boat's crew were vulpes, not lutrinae, and observing many of the passing boats, Jason noted they weren't as skilled as lutrinae piloted crafts. Once, they nearly collided with another boat, and despite the vulpes clearly not being at fault, all lutrinae, and even some of their mammalian passengers, shouted obscenities at the vulpes.
As they left that unfortunate incident behind, Jason was aware of distant noise not too far ahead. It sounded like shouting. As they drew closer, he recognised the lutrinae's language. As they rounded a bend in the canal, Jason saw a large open pool, dominated by a pyramid-like stone platform, jutting out of the water. Atop it stood lutrinae in long, flowing robes. Positioned along the various levels of the pyramid, from the very top stood a lone lutrinae in fancy robes who shouted to a congregation of lutrinae, bobbing in the water. The crowd surrounded the platform, looking up at the speaker with reverence.
{That is the *,} Glitch answered when he inquired about it. {You know, where you pay homage to higher beings.}
So, they were worshipping their Gods. Jason scowled at this and turned away, not wishing to know anything more.
At this, Trix spoke up. {That reminds me, there is one thing I've been meaning to ask you; About your culture. I've noted your kind has many similarities in your society to Mammalians, but I've never found anything that could identify as a parallel to religion.} Jason scoffed.
{Sapiens don't have any deities,} he answered. {All forms of ancient Sapien cultures never did. After all, what God would be so cruel as to create us and give us this size?}
{But - what about, Pyh-mush?} Jason tilted his head before his eyes widened with recognition.
"Oh, you mean, Primus." He chuckled. {"Primus" isn't a God; it's a place. All forms of ancient Sapien culture say pretty much the same thing. "Primus" is an astral plane, the afterlife. If you've been good in your life, you return to "Primus."} Trix's ears flicked.
{Return?}
{"Primus" is said to be the birthplace of Sapien kind,} Jason answered. {It is where we came from. Although there are different versions, they all tell the same story. At the beginning of Sapien history, a catastrophe expelled us from "Primus." The earliest records of Sapien history that survived to this day emphasised returning to "Primus." So when you die, your soul goes home.}
{Are there any descriptions of Pyh-mush?}
{From what the old legends say, it's just like Earth, only everything is our size,} Jason answered. {The plants and animals are to us, as they are to you. No giants are trying to eat you; we live on the ground as Mammalians do. It's every Sapien's wish to return there when they die.}
Trix looked conflicted about something. Then slowly, she asked, {what if you haven't been good?}
{Then your soul stays behind on Earth for all eternity.}
{I can't understand how you can live your whole life without believing in a higher being,} Trix said. {All Mammalians believe in a supreme being, someone who created and watched over them.}
{The Neo Visions have *,} Shique said with pride. {The Goddess of invention.} The name sounded like someone sticking their tongue between their teeth and trying to spit. Like, Tith.
{The Oryctolagus worship *, the Goddess of speed,} Glitch chimed in with excitement. The name sounded like someone trying to blow air through closed lips. Like Phatt.
{And we vulpes worship *, the Goddess of cunning,} Trix boasted. The name sounded like someone trying to whistle with their mouth open. Like Wheet.
{I have noticed that all your Gods are female,} Jason said. Everyone in the gondola burst out laughing, even servants.
{Naturally,} Trix said. {Females give birth, and the Gods give birth to all life. How could they not be female?}
{I find it absurd that life can reproduce asexually,} Jason said. {Don't the Gods get lonely? Do they desire male company?}
{The Gods are above such mortal desires,} Trix said without emotion. Jason opened his mouth to ask another question, but Trix preempted him. {You seem hostile towards our religion.} It wasn't a question.
{As a Sapien, I'm uncomfortable with the idea of Gods,} Jason answered. {Where are the Sapien Gods?} His voice took on a harsh tone as he spoke. {Did they abandon us, casting us down onto the Earth? Some Sapien scholars speculate that they were the ones who exiled us from "Primus." If so, why? What did we do? Why has life been so hard for us since day one?} Jason threw his hands up into the air. "Who the hell cries for Sapien kind? No one, that's who!"
{I've noticed you use the word "Hell" quite a lot,} Trix said. Jason raised an eyebrow. During his journey, he'd seen that Mammalians had a tough time pronouncing Sapien words due to the shape of their muzzles. However, the word Hell was easy for them because it was short and didn't require using one's tongue as much.
{It's believed to be a place worse than Earth, but there have never been any mentions of your soul going there} Jason answered. {Our early records indicate as much, but sadly, no one knows anything about it. Hell terrified the first Sapiens so much that they hardly spoke of it, and some scholars theorise that it's not a place but probably an early metaphor for the vulpes'.} Trix didn't look offended. Instead, she appeared to be thinking hard about something.
{I have noticed you use it as a curse,} Trix said, rubbing her chin. {Given your distaste for higher beings, is it possible that "Hell" is the name of the old Sapien God?} Trix suggested. Jason nodded.
{That theory has been speculated. Those who do believe it is our God, curse them willingly,} he spat. {They deserve to be cursed for all eternity for putting us in this position. Any God, who gives their creation such a handicap, doesn't deserve any love. Why would they create us to be preyed upon by beings who are God-like themselves? For Sapiens, there are no Gods on Earth or anywhere.} He folded his arms to show he didn't care what anyone thought of him for saying that. Everyone went silent.
{I was going to invite you to the shrine when I pay my respects to Wheet,} Trix said but didn't finish the rest of her sentence. Instead, she said, {politics and religion are indeed the two things one should never discuss in public.}
{Weren't you the one who is trying to protect me from the other Guilds?} Jason asked. Trix looked confused before shaking her head with a smile.
{Oh, the shrine isn't in the city; it's on my property,} she answered. {Mammalians don't allow any different species to set up their shrines within other species' cities; publicly.} Jason would've turned her down anyway. The thought of being in one room with every vulpes within Trix's compound was enough to send multiple shockwaves of terror down his spine. Still, the pause gave him time to reflect and calm down.
Jason sighed. {Please, Ms Trix,} he said. {I'm not trying to insult you or your beliefs, but as you no doubt can tell from our conversation, we sapiens are hostile to religion.} Trix's tail flicked.
{What about Pyh-mush? And Hell?}
{That's the afterlife, and a curse word,} Jason said. {Nothing religious about that.} Trix tilted her head slightly.
{Really.} Again, that wasn't a question. Jason just gave her a confused stare.
{Umm, hey!} Shique interrupted, her sizeable grey face appearing before his window. {This is getting awkward. How about we move on?}
{Yeah, let's talk about something else,} Glitch agreed.
Jason was about to reply when he paused. Off to their far left, the canal was blocked. Guards stood atop what was once a double wooden gate that was now permanently sealed. Yet, even from this distance, he could see their scowling faces aimed at the unseen sight on the other side. Curiosity took hold of him, and he asked about it.
{That leads to the Sinking Slums on the city's east coast,} Trix answered. {It's home to the city's destitute, invalids and outcasts. It's the place disgraced lutrinae often go to start a new life.}
One eyebrow rose. {The east coast, right?} When Trix confirmed, Jason asked, {so isn't that the outlet for the central sewer system?}
{Yes, and I wouldn't advise you to go in the water either.} All the vulpes chuckled, and Jason didn't need that answered.
{What's wrong with them?} Jason asked as he eyed the soldiers. {I mean, why is it barricaded from the rest of the city?}
{Aside from the obvious, they represent a massive problem for the city officials. They created the area as a refugee camp over ninety years ago during an economical and natural disaster. They weren't supposed to be a permanent solution, as they were assembled only to be a stop-gap measure to deal with the massive influx of refugees. However, the aftermath of the natural and economic crisis left the city with very little money to spend. So, the refugee camps became permanent homes. Over time, they grew according to need rather than planning, and the area was a mess.}
{If the lutrinae built them, how are they sinking?}
{When constructing in the water, the lutrinae lay foundations before laying down their buildings, which takes time. At the time of the camp's construction, they needed lots of housing fast. No foundations were laid because, at the time, no one believed they would be permanent. With so much weight and no stability, whole sections of the slums are sinking into the sea, as the name implies. Houses that were above water fifty years ago are now submerged. *, it's not uncommon to wake up one day and hear that an entire building collapsed into the water.}
{So how do they deal with it?}
{They just build new structures atop the old ones.} Jason raised an eyebrow at the idea of multi-story shanty towns. While Sapiens did have poverty and unemployment, they lived in government housing complexes. Little more than one-room apartments with the bare necessities kept them off the streets until they could improve their situation.
It amused some sapiens and confirmed to many that mammalians were savages since they didn't look after those who couldn't fend for themselves. He'd seen spies' photographs of mammalian cities' slums and shanty towns. It was a hive of criminal activity and unsanitary conditions filled with junk, broken furniture, and rotting food. So it surprised no one that sapien spies avoided those areas as much as possible.
By now, they had moved past, and while Jason could no longer see the gate, Trix still spoke. {Every passing year, the population of the sinking slums grows. Nowadays, not just lutrinae, but rejects from all over the world call it home.} That grabbed Jason's attention.
{Really? I thought mammalians don't mix.} From outside, Jason heard Glitch's grip tighten on his travel case.
{They don't,} Trix answered. {They have little communities and keep to themselves, but they still buy, sell, and trade. Like in any other city that has foreign nationals living within its walls.} Jason paused as he recalled Glitch's life before they met.
That was the only odd sight Jason saw. About forty-five minutes later, the gondola pilot announced they were entering the Central District. The canal gave way to a purpose-built lake. Where houses and buildings had been on either side, they now sat in the water like exposed rocks. It was a strange sight as they travelled further into the district, giving the illusion that this section of the city had flooded.
What was even stranger were the large stone skyways connecting the buildings, reminding Jason of the skyways that connected tree communities back home. As they drew closer, Jason could see that while the lutrinae lived in the buildings, they had a market and business stalls within those skyways. Even from his travel case, Jason could see they were cramped. The booths lined both sides, leaving just enough room in the middle for the mammalians to pass side by side. The sounds and smells that wafted down reminded him of the marketplace they visited when they first arrived.
Here, the mammalians were all lutrinae and appeared to be working class. The large buildings were apartments, while the traders, merchants and hawkers who resided in the skyways didn't have the quality of merchandise he'd seen back in the open-air marketplace. Beneath the surface, they swam to and fro, exiting and entering buildings through doorways built under the water. At the water line, buildings had doors, and tiny piers, whose purpose was to allow goods in and out of the buildings.
The entire district looked fancy and old but rundown as if maintenance wasn't a priority. According to Trix, these buildings represented the original city of Megalopolis. As the city grew to encompass the surrounding islands, the more affluent residents relocated closer to the economic heart of Megalopolis, leaving the workers and lesser merchants to move in.
Then without warning, the buildings opened up to a large lagoon. A massive island dominated the area, of which Jason could see but a fraction. It climbed high into the sky, high above the buildings of the Central District. Then, atop sat the large, looming structure that was the Tower of Exousía. Once again, Jason heard Glitch's fingers tighten on his travel case.
When they reached the island, they berthed their gondola at the numerous piers that ringed the shoreline. The entire party climbed out of the boat and, again, formed a protective circle around Glitch as they headed to a set of long, wide and very steep stairs. The journey up the stairs took some time, for everyone paused to catch their breath when they finally reached the top. The cumbersome hooded cloaks added to everyone's discomfort. Even then, they still had a long way to walk. The path they took was a paved road, which occasionally held vehicle traffic. However, the carts contained supplies and foodstuffs rather than passengers. It took them twenty-five minutes before, at long last, they stood before the massive double doors of the Tower of Exousía.
It was the largest mammalian building Jason had ever seen. He'd never seen any structure pass three stories in height throughout his journey. The tower easily topped five. The way it was structured reminded Jason of cake towers, each level smaller than the one underneath, while giant columns ringed the outside of each floor. The first floor was the largest, containing two other structures, an east and west wing. Steps led up to the front entrance, which held four massive pillars supporting a frieze larger than the one he'd seen for the Lupus library. Lutrinae guards stood on duty by the doors and opened them for the approaching vulpes'. Jason noted that those who weren't guild members had to present a pass. Much like admittance to Hark's palace, mammalians gave different coloured tokens to the guards, and just like Hark's palace, the guards granted them entrance regardless of their colour.
Beyond the door was a bare-bones parlour. Just benches along the walls, while three tight hallways lay ahead. Different mammalian species waited, while now and then, a pristinely dressed lutrinae would beacon them to follow. If Jason worried about their group looking conspicuous, he needn't worry. There were a group of four mammalians sitting together, their identities hidden by the heavy cloaks they wore. He saw one shift and exposed their hand, which only had two fingers. The rest was a mess of burnt fur and mangled flesh. Jason's group quickly moved past those waiting and took the middle of the three hallways.
As they neared their destination, Jason took the time to go over in his mind everything Trix had taught him about the guilds. As sapiens knew, the guilds had risen to prominence during the Unification Wars due to their autocratic rulers turning to them to develop better technologies, ideas and skills over their opponents. Over time, as each war grew increasingly desperate, more privileges and rights were granted to them, so by the time of the war's conclusion, they had become a power unto themselves. In the years following the peace, the ruling nobility of each species stood down one by one as the guilds took control, as all agreed that a collective of minds, rather than a single one, could best see their people through to a brighter future. How that transition occurred and whether the nobility themselves agreed with it, Trix never revealed.
Their government was a mixed model, combining monarchy in the chairman, aristocracy in the senate, merchant families in the major council, and democracy in the form of allowing the free citizens of the capitol to vote for the chairman. The chairman, when elected, ruled for life, ruling alongside what was called the minor council. Six councillors from the senate who acted as advisors formed the central body of the government. The ruling guild members were an oligarchy of merchants, aristocrats and skilled artisans. The major council served as regional governments, while the free citizens who could vote had to belong to a guild. Different species, slaves, and non-guild members couldn't.
Jason reflected on his time in the Middle Continent and what Tac had told him. The other species had judged the guild's form of ruling based on concepts they understood within their society. Even though the chairman was technically a monarch, they didn't recognise them because they received their position through an election rather than inheritance or taking the position through strength.
It wasn't very long before they emerged into a vast room. It reminded Jason of an amphitheatre cut in half. Semi-circular in layout, with sloping seating. Stone benches with cushions made up the seating in the gallery. At the same time, on the stage below sat five thrones, arranged in a half circle facing the audience. Behind them sat five long wooden benches with cushions, positioned behind their respective thrones, situated before a massive bandshell. Jason also noted those thrones were the only seats in the arena to have desks.
{The assembly is due to start in forty minutes,} Trix announced to the group. {Let us take our seats.} They descended the stairs towards the stage below and walked over to the last throne on the right. Trix sat down on the throne while Mahx took a position just behind her to the left. Everyone else sat down at the bench strategically located behind Trix's throne.
As they settled down, Jason saw that more and more mammalians were arriving. Representatives of every species on the Middle Continent filled the arena. Jason noticed they took up the bottom row as they took their seats. The other seats appeared to be taken up by spectators, assistants, or those wishing to seek an audience with the guilds. Noise was everywhere, and it echoed through the large room as mammalians all spoke among themselves in their native tongues.
More and more, the room started to fill. Some took up residence in the front row, and many more occupied the back seats, while a select few sat down on the thrones. When the room was packed, Jason took stock of everyone. Sitting on the five thrones were the cervidae, the vulpes, the ursidae and the bison, while the lutrinae representative occupied the middle. The rest of the guild representatives sat on the front row benches—the meles, rattus, oryctolagus, procyon, geomyidae, capra, cricetinae, erinaceus, musculus, gulo and mustela.
Jason's gaze turned to the other four thrones. Trix had explained to him that these five species represented the Grand Council. The five most influential mammalians on the Middle Continent. Whenever the assembled mammalians discussed laws or actions of great significance, the Grand Council voted on the matter. For any law or action to pass, it needed a three-fourths majority. It turned out that the lutrinae weren't allowed to vote. Instead, their position was to act as one part arbitrator, one part judge. Only if the vote was tied could they pass one.
It did lead to Jason asking Trix if the other species so despised the vulpes, why were they on the Council? All the wealth they had accumulated during the Unification Wars had given them much-needed clout among the other less powerful mammalians. Trix had also pointed out the hypocrisy of the mammalians wanting their influence and wealth to the vulpes' face while envying and ridiculing it behind their backs.
Jason eyed the other three mammalians. The cervidae, the ursidae and the bison. Trix was already on his side, so he would need to win over at least two of them to kill the motion to exterminate all sapiens successfully. First, he eyed the cervidae representative. He was tall, with caramel fur and white spots. The underside of his muzzle, neck and front of his torso were also white. Two towering antlers reached above his head like a fancy crown. He wore a deep blue gown over two leather straps that crossed his bulky chest. A short dress of sky blue that ended at his knees was held in place by a thick, leather belt with a gold buckle. Leather bracers covered his forearms and legs. His guild did wish to organise trade, so it would be possible to win him over.
His gaze then fell on the other two. The bisons' size was halfway between the cervidae and the ursidae. He wore a long, flowing dark green robe with long sleeves that hung around the cuffs. A headband adorned with numerous diamond shapes ran around his head, just above his horns. His face was thick and squat, the fur around his muzzle, neck and chest was a dark brown, and the rest was lighter, just like the rest of his body. The fur on his chin created the illusion of a forked beard.
Jason didn't know much about the bison, as their tribe was on the far side of the Middle Continent. Sapiens knew they were similar in culture to the cervidae, so maybe there was something. He'd still have to be careful and play it by ear.
Jason then turned his gaze to the ursidae. She was the biggest mammalian in the room, and her throne barely contained her massive frame. Judging her size, he couldn't tell if a Leo was the taller of the two. Her fur was jet-black, save for her muzzle and her chest, which was white. She wore a bright red headscarf wrapped around her neck and a huge, red cloak over a deep blue slip dress with two thick straps around her shoulders. She also was the first mammalian Jason had seen to sport footwear. They looked like someone had made a compromise between sandals and boots. Made of leather, they had no front, exposing her toes, but they did cover the ankles and halfway to her knees.
She would be the wild card in this game, as they were a closed society. Sapiens did know the ursidae had the largest army on the Middle Continent. While it would be possible to arrange technology trade between sapiens and mammalians, they might want to keep a monopoly on their military prowess. While sapiens might trade technology, they would never sell weapons technology to mammalians, let alone mammalian predators.
The room quietened as the lutrinae on the throne rose to her feet. Jason noted the two circular sound blocks at the end of each armrest. She was a small female with dark brown fur and a strip of light brown running down the middle of her chin. She wore a purple sash around her torso, over a toga of white, with red borders. She carried a baton made of bronze in her right hand. Her whiskers were long and numerous, the most predominant feature of her face. Her fur was light brown, while the underside of her muzzle, down to her chest, was a honey-blond.
{Honoured guild members,} she began. {I need to give no reason for the assembly today, for you all know why we are here.} A low murmur ran through the assembled crowd, but interestingly, not from the gathered guild members, who just sat in stony-faced silence. {We have never taken the sapien threat seriously; until now. We are all aware of the sapiens flying machines, but they have always kept to the planes and forests. They have never dared fly into our towns or cities; thus, we grew complacent.} She paused. When she continued, her voice took on a deep, serious tone. {We have never experienced such destruction, carnage or terror unleashed on the innocent citizens of Baile an Chósta.}
Jason furrowed his brow from within his box but quickly brushed it aside. Now was not the time for blame games. He needed to focus.
{The destructive power the sapiens have demonstrated is too great to ignore. At any given point, they can bypass our strongest forts and largest armies to deliver a crushing blow to the very core of our civilisation.} Again, she paused to sweep her stern gaze around the room. {How do we fight against an enemy like that?}
{No army is invincible,} a rattus called out from her seat. {And neither are the sapiens. The trick of a smaller opponent taking down the larger one is to find their weak spot, then strike with everything you have.}
{And what is their weakness?} Jason couldn't see who asked that.
{Does that question need answering?} The female ursidae rolled a free hand. {We might not know much about sapiens, but we do know that our hearing, eyesight and smell are greater than theirs. They are tiny compared to us. Their only advantage appears to be their ability to create new technologies faster than ours.}
{That doesn't answer the question,} the rattus' tone took on an annoyed edge. {We know their weaknesses but don't know how to exploit them; that's the question.} Her fellow rattus nodded in agreement.
Jason's brow furrowed. Wouldn't the rattus guild know about the secret little project they were running back in Baile an Chósta? Then he rubbed his chin in thought. Considering what happened there and its secrecy, the rattus guild was likely going for plausible deniability. The ursidae, on the other hand, gave an irritated frown, obviously annoyed that the rattus needed the answer spelled out for her.
{Numbers,} she answered. {History has shown that no matter how strong your opponent is, they can not fight everywhere at once.}
{Which is why we are here today,} the lutrinae cut in, rising to her feet. {To propose something that has never been thought possible. For all mammalians to put aside their differences, grudges and ideologies. To band together and end the sapien menace before they do it to us.} Again, another low murmuring ran through the audience.
Someone out of Jason's field of vision asked, {Will the entirety of the Middle Continent be enough to finish off those tiny furless ones?}
{We can ask for help from the great powers of the Amber and High continents,} the lutrinae said. {For when we exterminate the sapiens, their secrets will be ours for the taking.} She paused as her gaze swept the room. No doubt, that was the carrot now dangled before the others. {I highly doubt they would want us to gain all the spoils.}
{Can we be sure of that?} a grevyi called out. He rose as he spoke, folding his arms as he glared down at the lutrinae. {If we are to provide our assistance, what guarantee can you provide that you won't back out of our agreement once the sapiens are gone?}
{That is what we are here to discuss,} the lutrinae answered. {First, we need to agree on an alliance, then work out the finer details.} Sporadic laughter filled the audience. From what little Jason could see, it came from those who weren't natives of the Middle Continent.
{Work out the details later?} the grevyi barked. {No one is going to agree to anything without knowing the details. Especially since the guild chooses not to show any respect to traditions, ideologies and the ruling governments of our lands.}
{That's because you chose your governments through brawn, not brain!} a rattus snapped.
{And what is wrong with that?} a lupus demanded before pointing at the rattus. {The only difference between the guilds and our Prime Alphas is with you, your people vote first and take orders later. With us, we don't waste our time voting.}
{Then why aren't the lupus united under a single Prime Alpha? United we stand, divided you fall.}
{Silence, please!} the lutrinae bellowed and smacked her baton down hard on the sound block to her left. The audience settled down. {Now, since the representatives of both the Amber and High Continents have made their case, we shall work out details regarding their concerns.}
Trix chose that moment to speak. {Before we begin negotiations on the proposed alliance, I want to make an announcement.} She turned and motioned to Glitch. The oryctolagus girl rose on shaky legs and came to Trix's side. {I wish to sponsor a guest for an audience before the Grand Council.}
While everyone's eyes were on Glitch, Jason noted the lutraines' weren't. When she spoke, her words were slow. {Who does the Vulpes Guild wish to sponsor?} Trix motioned to one of her staff, who hastily produced a red cushion. She promptly passed it to Glitch, who tucked it under her arm. She took a few steps forward, gently placed the carry case down and opened the latch.
Jason watched as she carefully reached into the box and closed her fingers around him. Then, she lifted him out and placed him in the centre of the cushion before standing back up. Jason sat cross-legged and looked around.
Bewilderment was the predominant expression that greeted him. Despite all his preparations, he couldn't control the shiver that ran up his spine as every predator species in the room bent forward ever so slightly, their noses twitching. Finally, he swallowed the nervous lump in his throat and spoke.
{Greetings, honoured guest. My name is "Jason Sankowski." I am here today to present myself before the Grand Council as the unofficial representative of the "Confederation of the Sixteen Tribes." That is the official title of the lands ruled by the sapien people.} No one responded.
Jason's gaze swept the gathered assembly. Just then, something caught his eye. Without tilting his head, he cast his eyes towards the ceiling. He stared up there for a few moments before raising his hand to his head and tapping his ear three times. Then, finally, the cervidae spoke.
{You wish to ask us to spare your race.} It wasn't a question.
{Why should we listen to you,} the lutrinae asked. {You said it yourself; you aren't even an official diplomat.} She pointed the baton at him accusingly. {Your government doesn't even know you're here, nor what you are attempting to do.} There was no point lying.
{That is correct,} Jason confessed. {But what I am trying to do has its merits among my people's government. We want peaceful coexistence-} His words were cut off by a roar of noise, and Jason slammed his hands over his ears to cut it out. Throughout the din, he recognised Trix's voice demanding calm. Finally, the lutrinae ended the noise, repeatedly slamming her baton on the sound block until the room was silent.
{Now that we have some order, let's organise the responses to your ludicrous claim.} She pointed the baton into the crowd, and Jason turned to see a heavily built lupus glaring daggers at him. From what he could see, the male wore leather bracers around his wrist and a dark blue vest. His fur was blue-grey, save for the underside of his muzzle, neck and chest, which was white. {The chair recognises * of the Low-Mountains Pack.} His name sounded like she was snarling the word, 'sir' through closed teeth, like Saar.
{You say that after attacking the innocent lupus of Baile an Chósta?} Saar demanded. {They had families who had nothing to do with your quarrels with the mammalians of the Middle Continent. Yet you attacked them.}
{They were unfortunately collateral damage,} Jason said with a heavy heart. {But I ask you, why did we attack Baile an Chósta?} He then pointed at the rattus'. {Because the rattus guild was making a poison that could kill our surrexerunt flowers.}
{Lies!} the leader of the rattus delegation yelled. Jason ignored her.
{They were already planning to wipe us out.} Jason pointed at Saar. {I can tell, sir, that you are a soldier, and any soldier can tell you that the best defence is a good offence.} Without waiting for a reply, Jason swung his finger back to the rattus'. {I know about the rattus, because I was in Baile an Chósta when my people attacked it. Hark, the Prime Alpha, asked me to spy on the rattus guild. That's how I know.}
All around the room, ears and tails twitched, albeit briefly. {Can you prove this?} the lutrinae asked. Jason gritted his teeth. Tac could vouch for him, but he was on the other side of the Middle Continent, and Hark…
{You only have my word,} Jason confessed before turning hopeful eyes to the crowd. {Unless any high-ranking Stone-Claw Pack members are in the hall?} Saar glared at him before folding his arms as he shook his head.
{The Stone-Claw Pack and their allies are preoccupied at the moment, along with a hefty majority of the High Continent,} he said. {Hark's strength kept a lasting peace on the High Continent. With his death, Hark's eldest son is fighting off many of his father's enemies, eager to settle old scores.} Jason's lips tightened at the memory of Hark's son wanting to get Tac and himself out of his lands quickly. Now it made sense. His father was a legend on the High Continent, undefeated in battle. So now that he was gone, it made sense that all his enemies would move quickly to take advantage of the situation. Maybe they even hoped his son wasn't the warrior his father was.
He knew he'd have to face a multi-front war, so the last thing he wanted to deal with, right in the heart of his empire, would be guilds and sapiens. Saar continued. {And it's not just the Stone-Claw Pack and their allies. With all the major powers of the lupus territories engaged in war, there is no one to keep the rest of the mammalian species in check. Other species are attempting to snatch lands from their neighbours across the High Continent. Lands containing valuable deposits of tin.}
Jason had to fight the urge to sweat with fear. He only hoped that all this fighting would spare Tac and his village. Indeed, tin was valuable to the mammalians as it helped fuel the creation of bronze. It gave Jason pause as he thought over his strategy. If the mammalians were willing to fight over tin, what else would they be eager to fight for, or more importantly, to protect? He could dangle the carrot of trade, but someone would demand technology. And what would that lead to; Iron? What would that do to the economy of the High Continent? Would some advancement in technology threaten the livelihood of some other tribe?
And what would they be willing to do to protect it?
The head of the rattus delegation rose to her feet. {So, you wish to level accusations at the rattus guild, based solely on your word alone?} Jason nodded. {Then the rattus guild denies your claims.}
The lutrinae spoke, drawing Jason's attention. {Is there no evidence you can produce? No witnesses you can call?} Jason shook his head. {Then it is simply your word against theirs.} With that, the lutrinae turned and struck out with her baton, striking the sound block on the right side of her throne. The rattus guild members all smiled. Trix had gone over this procedure with him. When the chairman struck the sound block on the right side of her throne, it meant the conclusion of the discussion.
Any more mention of the rattus guild's accursed poison, and he would have his audience before the Grand Council forfeited. However, Jason's expression remained stone-faced as his eyes scanned the assembly. He'd believed this outcome would occur. His goal was simply to put the story out there. Everyone knew the rattus were insanely secretive. How many in the audience did not trust them? He might be a sapien, but who among the mammalians would be wondering if his words were valid? He'd noticed the distrust the other two continents displayed when the meeting began. If the mammalians were to unite against the sapiens, the fewer species that did, the greater his race's chances of survival were.
Jason hoped it wouldn't come to that, but he'd be a fool not to prepare for the worst.
{Jay-sun? That is how you say your name?} Jason turned to see the cervidae. {If you are here to argue against the extermination of your race, does that mean you're willing to offer something in return?} He stapled his fingers together. {Something that would entice mammalians? For example, a change in your species' foreign policy?}
{Yes,} the bison agreed. {Sapien foreign policy tends to attack first and never ask questions.} One side of Jason's mouth rose. He had hoped someone would raise this subject. He originally planned to do it, should none of the mammalians have offered.
{On that subject, I think we can help each other out,} Jason said. What he had in mind was something he thought could work. {I believe my people would be more than willing to keep their flying machines away from your urban areas if you can arrange to end sapien raids.}
{Actually, I was thinking along the lines of trade,} the cervidae said. {If you were to share some of your technology with mammalians, I'm sure that would go a long way to convincing the other tribes that you are sincere on the concept of peaceful coexistence.}
Before Jason could respond, the lutrinae pointed her baton towards the audience. {The chair recognises the honourable * from the Procyon guild branch in High-Wind city.} The name sounded like someone exaggerating, flicking their tongue out, like Flek. From the front row, a large procyon rose to his feet. He was big for his kind, with a short, pure white muzzle. The rest of his fur was a dark silver, while the black mask around his eyes stood out. His entire body lay obscured beneath a fancy white toga embroidered with gold trimmings.
{When the cervidae guild speaks of trade between sapiens and mammalians, do they mean all mammalians, or will the cervidae receive special privileges?} The cervidae opened his mouth, but Flek cut him off. {You are Jay-sun San-Cow-Key? That was the name of the talking sapien captured in Tribus City. After the riots in Tribus City, an oryctolagus girl avoided a cervidae patrol by producing a medallion. The kind that guilds give to represent them.} He then turned his scrutinising gaze on Glitch.
Jason froze, unsure how to proceed. He did not want to anger the cervidae guild, as he desperately needed their vote. But, on the other hand, if he wanted to avoid a war between sapiens and mammalians, he would have to put aside grudges and grievances.
{I stole that medallion,} Glitch answered before he could speak. {It was the only way I could get out of the city.}
{So, you stole him?}
{May I remind you that the oryctolagus guild doesn't have a chapter, nor any representatives anywhere near Tribus City,} Glitch replied. {So I wasn't under any orders from my guild. I stole him because I wanted more than just a pet I could talk to; I wanted a friend.}
{So!} All heads turned as one of the assistants to the lutrinae approached her, producing parchment of papyrus paper. The lutrinae judge read from the parchment. {Is the vulpes guild willing to accept the cervidae guild's claims that the vulpes were responsible for starting the riots in Tribus City?} All eyes then turned to Trix.
Although she controlled herself professionally, Jason could see the anger seething through her. Behind her, her entourage fumed silently. Jason turned to the cervidae guild member. Although calm and collected, he could see the nervousness in his trembling ears.
{Yes,} Trix said sharply after what felt like an eternity.
{Then you are willing to accept the fines and repro-}
{Yes!} Trix snapped. Jason let out the breath he'd been holding. So, like himself, Trix understood they needed the cervidae vote to kill the motion to exterminate the sapiens. He turned to look at her. What would be the repercussions for the vulpes guild?
The lutrinae didn't seem surprised. Instead, she pointed to the audience. {The chair recognises * of the rattus guild.} The name sounded like someone sucking in the air quickly, like Yehk.
{Our people were present in Tribus city on the day of the riot. And they reported that a large group of children were responsible for pickpocketing the patrons of the marketplace.} She gave Glitch a knowing smile {and indeed saw an oryctolagus girl in their company. After which, the children were escorted out of the city by cervidae guards.} Before anyone could respond, the lutrinae pointed to someone else.
{The chair recognises Flek from the Procyon guild branch in the city of High-Wind.}
{We had our citizens in Tribus City that day,} he said. {They reported the same thing as well.}
The lutrinae then turned to the cervidae. {*,} she said. His name sounded like someone clicking their tongue against their teeth while exhaling, Like Ti-Kah. {The cervidae guild has been under suspicion for starting the riot with the sole intention of stealing the talking sapien so that you can gain access to their technology first.} To his credit, Ti-Kah showed no fear as she kept talking. {These witnesses today prove those suspicions correct.} She pointed her baton at him.
{The cervidae guild has broken the law of trade, and as such, you know the punishment.} Ti-Kah was still for ten seconds before he gave a single nod. {Your vote will be excluded when the Grand Council has its final vote.} Then, she slammed the baton down on the right sound block.
Jason was stunned. The cervidae, the one guild, aside from the vulpes that he could get a yes vote from, was now disqualified from voting. He turned back to the council. That left Trix, the bison and the ursidae, two mammalians' Jason had no idea how they would, and even if he convinced one, who's to say Trix wouldn't lose her vote. Damn it, what were thoes repercussions? If that happened, the vote would be tied, meaning the final vote would fall to the lutrinae judge. And from the hostility she displayed, there was no doubt in Jason's mind that she would vote yes.
"Well… shit," was all Jason said.
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On the one hand, Jason could gain a new ally that would be the cervidae guild, with the commercial part and maybe that also helps an opportunity to coexist with the other guilds. on the other hand it would be that everyone would refuse and attack the sapiens. I could also see that the cervidae did want to trade with the sapiens, I thought it was a deception to later attack them.
finally a new chapter yes! now you leave me with a knot in my stomach of what could happen next and it is something that I like and hate at the same time.
finally a new chapter yes! now you leave me with a knot in my stomach of what could happen next and it is something that I like and hate at the same time.
Well, we shall see how your theories play out.
As for the Cervidae, they are no fools. As mammalian species started to recognise the power of sapiens, the Cervidae wanted to be the first to put their foot in the door. Hence why they had Jason kidnapped in the first place.
Still, I'm glad my stories leave you with a sense of enjoyment. I'd hate to have written all that story only to waste someone's time.
As for the Cervidae, they are no fools. As mammalian species started to recognise the power of sapiens, the Cervidae wanted to be the first to put their foot in the door. Hence why they had Jason kidnapped in the first place.
Still, I'm glad my stories leave you with a sense of enjoyment. I'd hate to have written all that story only to waste someone's time.
Happy to see that you are back~
Goodness, certainly a lot with this chapter. Already an interesting look at the general culture regarding religion between mammalian and sapien, and no doubt the sapien’s perspective being as dismal as it tends to be. And wow, so many mammalians all in one place, as well as new species meeting for the first time! Really can’t wait to get into all these different factions and cultures, not to mention their disposition towards humans. You also do well with the Murphy’s Law, always leaving a good cliffhanger when something goes awry, can only hope that Jason will make for a good defense attorney, heh
Goodness, certainly a lot with this chapter. Already an interesting look at the general culture regarding religion between mammalian and sapien, and no doubt the sapien’s perspective being as dismal as it tends to be. And wow, so many mammalians all in one place, as well as new species meeting for the first time! Really can’t wait to get into all these different factions and cultures, not to mention their disposition towards humans. You also do well with the Murphy’s Law, always leaving a good cliffhanger when something goes awry, can only hope that Jason will make for a good defense attorney, heh
The whole religious angle did come to mind when I thought about how a tiny race, preyed upon by giants, would look at their position and wonder, 'why is our situation so bad?'
Don't worry about the new species, as that is what I'll be exploring in the next chapter.
As for your Murphy's Law comment, that's pretty much this whole story summed up in a nutshell. But, interestingly, when I was planning out this story, I was more or less thinking along the lines of that age-old saying, "Battles are a series of errors, and victory goes to the side that makes the least."
Don't worry about the new species, as that is what I'll be exploring in the next chapter.
As for your Murphy's Law comment, that's pretty much this whole story summed up in a nutshell. But, interestingly, when I was planning out this story, I was more or less thinking along the lines of that age-old saying, "Battles are a series of errors, and victory goes to the side that makes the least."
For sure, it’s always an interesting way to look at a culture and get some extra bits of world-building (and because of what someone else said, I have been indulging in theories on the shared concept of “Primus” between both parties, but will hold my tongue for now)
Good to hear! I was curious what kind of culture the bears would be, but to also get a whole bunch of other unmentioned species to boot? Heh, can’t wait for that~
Absolutely, get to be a new professor? Sapien raid. Might be sold to someone who might not eat you? Get stolen by a rando anthro. One after the other, things not going exactly as planned, adding those challenges and rocky waves always makes a more interesting story. But yes, while Jason is our narrative focus, he has outwitted and slipped through the more abundant mistakes of the other anthros, and I will have to see what comes about this next dilemma…
Good to hear! I was curious what kind of culture the bears would be, but to also get a whole bunch of other unmentioned species to boot? Heh, can’t wait for that~
Absolutely, get to be a new professor? Sapien raid. Might be sold to someone who might not eat you? Get stolen by a rando anthro. One after the other, things not going exactly as planned, adding those challenges and rocky waves always makes a more interesting story. But yes, while Jason is our narrative focus, he has outwitted and slipped through the more abundant mistakes of the other anthros, and I will have to see what comes about this next dilemma…
After only 11 months, happy to see that you're back to writing, you are one of the only guys I am aware of who writes macrofur stories and writes them seriously instead of you-know-what.
I thought that there would be another chapter before the assembly because of that line:
"{Three days from now, I will begin to win over your respect,} Trix said. {Until then, no matter what I say, you will not believe me.}"
I thought that's what this chapter was going to be about as it seemed to be a big deal, but I am still happy with what we got.
I wonder how is he going to woo those two military governments into not getting all military with the sapiens, that if he even can.
Maybe he can trade with knowledge on two domains that were previously mentioned in the story:
* Medicine. We all know that the medicine of the old age was not so different than decapitation and voodoo rituals. Pneumonia not meaning death should be a big deal.
* Agriculture. after all, agriculture was the very beginning of our civilization (and theirs maybe), and even the carnivores need to feed the cattle.
I personally think that the assembly is a lost cause and he will have to make allies by negotiating with species individually in secrecy. Then the world becomes divisible in two: the trade species that are almost safe for sapiens, and the warrior species that kill on sight. Obviously, some sapiens will have to relocate.
I also must say that I am a bit curious about the oryctolagus' take. They might side with the ally, glitch, for being an oryctolagus like them, but they are not a true part of the moral dilemma like the lutrinae.
One more thing. They say hell but they say Primus instead of heaven. Primus was actually a spaceship, wasn't it? That would be a funny connection.
I thought that there would be another chapter before the assembly because of that line:
"{Three days from now, I will begin to win over your respect,} Trix said. {Until then, no matter what I say, you will not believe me.}"
I thought that's what this chapter was going to be about as it seemed to be a big deal, but I am still happy with what we got.
I wonder how is he going to woo those two military governments into not getting all military with the sapiens, that if he even can.
Maybe he can trade with knowledge on two domains that were previously mentioned in the story:
* Medicine. We all know that the medicine of the old age was not so different than decapitation and voodoo rituals. Pneumonia not meaning death should be a big deal.
* Agriculture. after all, agriculture was the very beginning of our civilization (and theirs maybe), and even the carnivores need to feed the cattle.
I personally think that the assembly is a lost cause and he will have to make allies by negotiating with species individually in secrecy. Then the world becomes divisible in two: the trade species that are almost safe for sapiens, and the warrior species that kill on sight. Obviously, some sapiens will have to relocate.
I also must say that I am a bit curious about the oryctolagus' take. They might side with the ally, glitch, for being an oryctolagus like them, but they are not a true part of the moral dilemma like the lutrinae.
One more thing. They say hell but they say Primus instead of heaven. Primus was actually a spaceship, wasn't it? That would be a funny connection.
Wow, that's a long time since you put it like that. Almost a freakn' year since I last updated; Ouch.
As for your question about Trix and what you believed the chapter would be about, I can't go into too much detail without spoiling things. Like Jason, I want my audience to wonder what she has up her sleeve. But I can tell you this. Trix has to walk a very fine line. Her actions during the assembly will help gain Jason's trust. She knows this, and what those actions involve has to do with the repercussions the Vulpes Guild will incur because she accepted responsibility for the riots on behalf of her guild. Also, this wasn't her original plan, as she intended to win Jason's trust back in Chapter 15, but Cella's actions torpedoed all chances of that happening, so she switched to Plan B.
As for your theories in regards to what will happen next? You'll have to wait to see if you're right.
As for the whole Primus thing, I'm staying tight-lipped over that one, (and your theories) but I am willing to say this... The word Primus is actually an abbreviation of two words.
As for your question about Trix and what you believed the chapter would be about, I can't go into too much detail without spoiling things. Like Jason, I want my audience to wonder what she has up her sleeve. But I can tell you this. Trix has to walk a very fine line. Her actions during the assembly will help gain Jason's trust. She knows this, and what those actions involve has to do with the repercussions the Vulpes Guild will incur because she accepted responsibility for the riots on behalf of her guild. Also, this wasn't her original plan, as she intended to win Jason's trust back in Chapter 15, but Cella's actions torpedoed all chances of that happening, so she switched to Plan B.
As for your theories in regards to what will happen next? You'll have to wait to see if you're right.
As for the whole Primus thing, I'm staying tight-lipped over that one, (and your theories) but I am willing to say this... The word Primus is actually an abbreviation of two words.
All right, it's back! And you immediately gave us another huge cliffhanger, you sadist! Anyway, great chapter, I was absolutely not expecting the vote from the 'friendly' species to be nullified. Honestly, I'm not even sure if the vote will go in the sapiens' favor at all. This whole chapter had me thinking of a quote from a science fiction novel I read a while back: "It's impossible to wipe out an entire technologically advanced culture. But they'll remember that you tried."
Okay it took me a while to finally get the free time to read this and it was worth the wait. First off love the world building especially the descriptions of areas we won't travel through just enough details for us to imagine what they would look like without being to restrictive. Second so far it is looking like the Rattus are causing the most problems for some reason but I'm keeping my eyes out for any reference to a third party. And finally how can the other races think that uniting to exterminate a technologically superior species will end well for them. The surviving military is out of reach and will devastate every large settlement they can find for revenge especially economic and government hotspots. After which anyone with a surviving number of soldiers will immediately see an opportunity to become a new leader of what is left not to mention the natural interspecies mistrust and backstabbing that happens already.
Don't worry about taking as long as you did to reply; hell, it took me nearly a God damned year to put out another chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed the world-building, as it's a personal enjoyment of mine. I love stories that not only world build but take you on a journey through it. That's the part I find the trickiest. How do you make an exciting world without turning into people standing around and explaining things? When I do that, though, it's usually a setup.
As for your theories - just like everyone else - I will let you wait and see.
As for your theories - just like everyone else - I will let you wait and see.
He's inadvertently shown the Vulpes much of Sapien society through film (oof!). The mammalians don't need spies to see how their technology and appliances are working in the home, now that they can see their culture through romance movies.
They can profit many ways. Both Shique and she desperately want something from Jason when they win his trust. Hmm...
They can profit many ways. Both Shique and she desperately want something from Jason when they win his trust. Hmm...
I never really thought about the movie, Lincoln when planning/writing this moment. But you are right, where compromise, promises, threats and rewards are all at play in order to prevent the worst case scenario from happening. As for your idea's, well, you'll just have to wait and see what happens next.
Sorry for the late reply, but I'm trying to get my life in order at the moment. I have not given up on this story, and the next chapter is crawling along at a snails pace. On the plus side, I haven't been idle. I've also been working on another story. If you've read "The Other Side of the Dawn," you'll know that THIS version of the Odyssey you're reading wasn't the first draft. I've been also polishing up and plan to publish the original version of The Odyssey. (See my comments in The Other Side of the Dawn for what that is like.)
Thank-you. Once I finish Biosyn, I will return to Odyssey.
I can only wonder what it was like to be able to read so much of my story in one go, that I often wonder (when I finish the whole story) what it would be like for someone to read the whole thing from start to finish.
I can only wonder what it was like to be able to read so much of my story in one go, that I often wonder (when I finish the whole story) what it would be like for someone to read the whole thing from start to finish.
It’s interesting to see how the humans of this world dance around the concepts of religion and hell. They have a concept of them as a word, but none of the substance.
I wonder if they are similar to the humans from A Dogs Life. Implied to have been the product of an ancient colony ship that has begun to rebuild a civilization separated from their origins.
I wonder if they are similar to the humans from A Dogs Life. Implied to have been the product of an ancient colony ship that has begun to rebuild a civilization separated from their origins.
Hey there Rookamillion, sorry for the late reply. I'm glad you found the religious aspect of Sapien culture interesting. It was something I thought up as I was creating this world. How would a race that is tiny compared to everyone else see Gods? Especially a race who is preyed upon by everyone else. One idea I toyed with in the beginning involved a Mammalian religion that tied in with their lust for eating Sapiens. You can see the leftover elements of this in the Sapiens hated of Gods.
As for the origin of the Sapiens, I won't spoil anything but it will be revealed in the final chapter. In fact, I wonder if anyone has figured out the meaning behind "Primus" yet?
As for the origin of the Sapiens, I won't spoil anything but it will be revealed in the final chapter. In fact, I wonder if anyone has figured out the meaning behind "Primus" yet?
No worries!
I think it’s pretty safe to assume that Primus is Earth (actual earth) although they seem to be mixing its spiritual aspect with a paradise-esque realm like heaven.
It honestly fits really well with their mythos stating that humanity was cast out from it, being adjacent to the Abrahamic motif of humanity being cast out of Eden, which could be considered a Primus (first) earth.
I think it’s pretty safe to assume that Primus is Earth (actual earth) although they seem to be mixing its spiritual aspect with a paradise-esque realm like heaven.
It honestly fits really well with their mythos stating that humanity was cast out from it, being adjacent to the Abrahamic motif of humanity being cast out of Eden, which could be considered a Primus (first) earth.
Well shit indeed. My thoughts about Jason being the last Sapien alive (until he's hunted down) is starting to look more likely.
I've greatly enjoyed what you've written, first with Biosyn and now with Odyssey! It's had its hopeful and wholesome moments and it had moments the frightened and stressed me the fuck out but I've always been hooked and I look forward to the last few chapters.
Now as a sapian, I need to figure a plan to gtfo!
I've greatly enjoyed what you've written, first with Biosyn and now with Odyssey! It's had its hopeful and wholesome moments and it had moments the frightened and stressed me the fuck out but I've always been hooked and I look forward to the last few chapters.
Now as a sapian, I need to figure a plan to gtfo!
Well, let's pray that Jason doesn't become the last Sapien alive.
Thank-you for your kind words about both this story and Biosyn. I'm glad that it's been a roller coast ride for you, because the last thing I would want is for my readers to feel like they've wasted their time. Now that Biosyn is over, It's back to this story, so watch out!
Thank-you for your kind words about both this story and Biosyn. I'm glad that it's been a roller coast ride for you, because the last thing I would want is for my readers to feel like they've wasted their time. Now that Biosyn is over, It's back to this story, so watch out!
You know that one spiderman meme where he just trying to reach for a ghost just for it to vanish, after which he just screams "NOOOO"? That's me looking at how spaced out each chapter is and realizing the story isn't finished, and its left in such a pivetal moment.
FUCK
Anyhow, I too like seeing long comments on stuff I write, and since I know you also like that, I’m about to do just that. Also yes I read your previous replies to my comment and very much appreciate them. I would first like to congratulate you again. This has been an incredible story and world you have created. You explored the dynamic of this world so wonderfully, showing the differences between all these species and the common factor of them generally being unable to see sapiens as people, but since they too are just people, there are always exceptions. You have made me grip the edge of my seat, be horrified, and straight up left me thinking for hours after I read a chapter with some of the scenes (especially with Ssith and the initial raid). This is a fuckin' terrifying and infuriating scenario for these tiny humans to be in, and you have explored that so well. Of course their culture will be different, and of course they will hate God for what he has done to them. Hell I’ve thought about how I would react to being a human in a scenario like this, and gotten to the same conclusion.
While I know the logical choice is for Jason to not antagonize anyone, I can’t even express just how incredibly satisfying it would be for him to finally make at least one of these damn races truly understand what it’s like to be a Sapien. To show some empathy, to finally put on a pair of Sapien shoes even if just once. To finally coexist, not on a basis of “Yeah sure, we’ll stop kidnapping and murdering you, but so long as we can get more power for ourselves.” but on a true basis of understanding and mutual benefit. Like, Trix, bestie, you want to gain the trust of Jason and while saying you have never eaten a sapien is a good start, how could yo big ass brain think that straight up singing whole ass children’s song about giant Vulpes children kidnapping innocent sapiens from trees and fuckin’ devouring them alive in front of someone who has to live with that reality every single day was a good idea. Let alone, someone who himself was kidnapped and has likely seen or had to comfort countless people who mourned their loved ones because a fate like that awaited them. Then she goes on to describe two captured sapiens who were just huddled in the center of a cage, probably completely broken and being displayed like animals in some zoo and then as a cherry on top reveals attempts being made to deadass farm them like actual cattle and how all of this is just part of their normal culture.
I could keep this comment going for ages, hell I could write an entire essay if I wanted to because of how invested I am in this setting, that’s how good I think your work is. The main self-reflection I’ll make is that as I just described countless times the sheer lack of empathy shown here towards the sapiens ignites a fire of pure hatred and boiling rage within me that actually has a physical effect as I read each chapter. It’s fascinating how a story with fictional injustice and fictional characters can have such a profound impact on me.
So, just to add a few more things. While my initial hatred for what Tac did has diminished after seeing how much of a wreck he is as a person, the consequences I predicted it would have on Glitch after her friend was literally stolen from her never really made me like him. I tolerate him more than anything. I also have to admit that I like how you spread out tiny Chekov’s guns through the story, from what little writing experience I have I know each word should have a purpose. So I immediately went “Oh shit” when you mentioned a bunch of ships being near Megalopolis, since I immediately knew what was going on. And similarly, when you mentioned sapiens killing tree loggers sometimes when they approached their territory, now I can’t help but wonder about the 4 mammalian figures one of which had the fucked up and burnt fingers in this chapter, really feel like those are gonna be there as victims of the leviathan’s rampage or other sapiens shenanigans. I assume that the sapiens, having spies, the knowledge from the girls on the rattus lab, and airships, already may have an idea about what is going on, and may already be preparing for an all-out war. Jason right now is the only thing standing between entire empires burning, the genocide of multiple species, the death of countless sapiens and mammalians from the spark of coexistence and peace. Like after all of this shit, I just wanna see sapiens and the other species finally becoming allies, friends or even family, with appropriate punishment being delivered for those who act otherwise. After all I know damn well a black market for sapiens would emerge much like it did in real life for alcohol when prohibition happened, but as fucked up as this would be it could genuinely be a business opportunity from sapiens developing artificial sapiens smells like the rattus did or even meat to sell to the others.
Also damn could you imagine being a Vulpes child or teen with a sapiens friend in the far future and having to read about all of this shit? Like, the whole children's song, kidnappings and all? That would be so fucked up.
I can’t wait to see how this story continues, I can’t wait to see if someone will finally show some empathy towards the sapiens. I shall be waiting very eagerly to see where you take this.
FUCK
Anyhow, I too like seeing long comments on stuff I write, and since I know you also like that, I’m about to do just that. Also yes I read your previous replies to my comment and very much appreciate them. I would first like to congratulate you again. This has been an incredible story and world you have created. You explored the dynamic of this world so wonderfully, showing the differences between all these species and the common factor of them generally being unable to see sapiens as people, but since they too are just people, there are always exceptions. You have made me grip the edge of my seat, be horrified, and straight up left me thinking for hours after I read a chapter with some of the scenes (especially with Ssith and the initial raid). This is a fuckin' terrifying and infuriating scenario for these tiny humans to be in, and you have explored that so well. Of course their culture will be different, and of course they will hate God for what he has done to them. Hell I’ve thought about how I would react to being a human in a scenario like this, and gotten to the same conclusion.
While I know the logical choice is for Jason to not antagonize anyone, I can’t even express just how incredibly satisfying it would be for him to finally make at least one of these damn races truly understand what it’s like to be a Sapien. To show some empathy, to finally put on a pair of Sapien shoes even if just once. To finally coexist, not on a basis of “Yeah sure, we’ll stop kidnapping and murdering you, but so long as we can get more power for ourselves.” but on a true basis of understanding and mutual benefit. Like, Trix, bestie, you want to gain the trust of Jason and while saying you have never eaten a sapien is a good start, how could yo big ass brain think that straight up singing whole ass children’s song about giant Vulpes children kidnapping innocent sapiens from trees and fuckin’ devouring them alive in front of someone who has to live with that reality every single day was a good idea. Let alone, someone who himself was kidnapped and has likely seen or had to comfort countless people who mourned their loved ones because a fate like that awaited them. Then she goes on to describe two captured sapiens who were just huddled in the center of a cage, probably completely broken and being displayed like animals in some zoo and then as a cherry on top reveals attempts being made to deadass farm them like actual cattle and how all of this is just part of their normal culture.
I could keep this comment going for ages, hell I could write an entire essay if I wanted to because of how invested I am in this setting, that’s how good I think your work is. The main self-reflection I’ll make is that as I just described countless times the sheer lack of empathy shown here towards the sapiens ignites a fire of pure hatred and boiling rage within me that actually has a physical effect as I read each chapter. It’s fascinating how a story with fictional injustice and fictional characters can have such a profound impact on me.
So, just to add a few more things. While my initial hatred for what Tac did has diminished after seeing how much of a wreck he is as a person, the consequences I predicted it would have on Glitch after her friend was literally stolen from her never really made me like him. I tolerate him more than anything. I also have to admit that I like how you spread out tiny Chekov’s guns through the story, from what little writing experience I have I know each word should have a purpose. So I immediately went “Oh shit” when you mentioned a bunch of ships being near Megalopolis, since I immediately knew what was going on. And similarly, when you mentioned sapiens killing tree loggers sometimes when they approached their territory, now I can’t help but wonder about the 4 mammalian figures one of which had the fucked up and burnt fingers in this chapter, really feel like those are gonna be there as victims of the leviathan’s rampage or other sapiens shenanigans. I assume that the sapiens, having spies, the knowledge from the girls on the rattus lab, and airships, already may have an idea about what is going on, and may already be preparing for an all-out war. Jason right now is the only thing standing between entire empires burning, the genocide of multiple species, the death of countless sapiens and mammalians from the spark of coexistence and peace. Like after all of this shit, I just wanna see sapiens and the other species finally becoming allies, friends or even family, with appropriate punishment being delivered for those who act otherwise. After all I know damn well a black market for sapiens would emerge much like it did in real life for alcohol when prohibition happened, but as fucked up as this would be it could genuinely be a business opportunity from sapiens developing artificial sapiens smells like the rattus did or even meat to sell to the others.
Also damn could you imagine being a Vulpes child or teen with a sapiens friend in the far future and having to read about all of this shit? Like, the whole children's song, kidnappings and all? That would be so fucked up.
I can’t wait to see how this story continues, I can’t wait to see if someone will finally show some empathy towards the sapiens. I shall be waiting very eagerly to see where you take this.
Hello again, Carlos_A_M. And wow, what a reply. First, I apologise for making you wait for the next chapter with bated breath. I found I just couldn't write, so I managed to write the mini-series "The Secret of Biosyn" to help get me back into writing, and I'm glad to say it's worked, although I'm not proceeding as fast as I would like to. It makes me happy to hear you've been so heavily invested in my story that it reminds me of a comment someone made back in chapter 9. They couldn't decide if they were upset at not following this when it first came out or consider themselves lucky they were able to read so much of it at once. I am curious to hear your thoughts on my other stories, especially my most popular, "It's a Dog's Life."
It's fun seeing how different people react to situations in my stories. For example, you're the only person I've met who felt sorry for Ssith and didn't like Tac. (Though I understand why.) Glitch is everyone's favourite character in the series, and I'm not surprised your feelings for Tac mirror hers. Most people could forgive him, and they even felt sorrow when he left the story. Hark was another character people liked, and they were sad to see him die. I remember one person understood his rage, but he wasn't too upset. As he put it, "Fuck you, dude, you've eaten people." Hell, I have one person who felt sorry for Cella. I also like your analysis of the Vulpes and Trix. Many people feel sorry for the Vulpes because of how the other Mammalians treat them, but their history with Sapiens freaks you the hell out. (Again, I don't blame you; I'm pretty sure your reaction was identical to Jason's as you read those scenes.) As for why Trix sang that song, well, she was caught up in a nostalgic moment. You can see her realising her mistake after Jason asks her not to sing any more songs. As for why she would tell him about the Sapiens farms, she knows he would find out the truth eventually, so what would you do? Would you tell someone the truth now and deal with the repercussions, or try to hide it from them only for them to discover it later and not trust you? Trix is playing a delicate game, which Cella made even more challenging. What's her end game? Well, you'll have to find out.
The Zoo Sapiens were something that I figured would've happened in the world. Sapiens get kidnapped constantly, so naturally, they would have some Sapiens in a zoo. Someone once asked me if the herbivores would have kept them as pets. The answer is no because Sapiens are just too valuable to be sold to predators rather than to be kept as one lone Mammalian's amusement. As were the Sapien farms. Again, with so many Sapiens getting kidnapped, it was inevitable that they would try to raise them like cattle. Part of Trix's goal was to emphasise to Jason that the Vulpes no longer try that. Remember, the other species spread nasty rumours about the Vulpes, so would it surprise you if they told Jason, "Oh hey, did you know them red dudes farm your people like cattle?"
I can't wait to see what else you've predicted. I'm glad you noticed the Chekov's gun moments I scattered throughout the story. I like to plant little seeds of future plot points so it doesn't feel like I pulled them out of thin air. You're the only person I've seen comment on them. Other people could see and correctly guess things, like all those ships in the harbour. I'm impressed you could see Jason's story about the loggers as a future plot point, as when I wrote that, I disguised it as world-building, so kudos to you for being so vigilant. I still haven't forgotten you predicted what a Zeppelin raid would be like in chapter 7. I am curious if you could see Hark's death coming or if it took you by surprise.
I'm glad you want to see Mammalians and Sapiens come together as friends. I feared that you might not see them as people, but it seems that, just like Jason, you've come to see them in a whole different light, even the Vulpes, as I found your final comment about a Vulpes kid being friends with Sapiens, horrified to learn his ancient past.
Hopefully, you won't have to wait too long for the next chapter, as having in-depth discussions about my stories and the worlds they inhabit, with people like you spur me on.
It's fun seeing how different people react to situations in my stories. For example, you're the only person I've met who felt sorry for Ssith and didn't like Tac. (Though I understand why.) Glitch is everyone's favourite character in the series, and I'm not surprised your feelings for Tac mirror hers. Most people could forgive him, and they even felt sorrow when he left the story. Hark was another character people liked, and they were sad to see him die. I remember one person understood his rage, but he wasn't too upset. As he put it, "Fuck you, dude, you've eaten people." Hell, I have one person who felt sorry for Cella. I also like your analysis of the Vulpes and Trix. Many people feel sorry for the Vulpes because of how the other Mammalians treat them, but their history with Sapiens freaks you the hell out. (Again, I don't blame you; I'm pretty sure your reaction was identical to Jason's as you read those scenes.) As for why Trix sang that song, well, she was caught up in a nostalgic moment. You can see her realising her mistake after Jason asks her not to sing any more songs. As for why she would tell him about the Sapiens farms, she knows he would find out the truth eventually, so what would you do? Would you tell someone the truth now and deal with the repercussions, or try to hide it from them only for them to discover it later and not trust you? Trix is playing a delicate game, which Cella made even more challenging. What's her end game? Well, you'll have to find out.
The Zoo Sapiens were something that I figured would've happened in the world. Sapiens get kidnapped constantly, so naturally, they would have some Sapiens in a zoo. Someone once asked me if the herbivores would have kept them as pets. The answer is no because Sapiens are just too valuable to be sold to predators rather than to be kept as one lone Mammalian's amusement. As were the Sapien farms. Again, with so many Sapiens getting kidnapped, it was inevitable that they would try to raise them like cattle. Part of Trix's goal was to emphasise to Jason that the Vulpes no longer try that. Remember, the other species spread nasty rumours about the Vulpes, so would it surprise you if they told Jason, "Oh hey, did you know them red dudes farm your people like cattle?"
I can't wait to see what else you've predicted. I'm glad you noticed the Chekov's gun moments I scattered throughout the story. I like to plant little seeds of future plot points so it doesn't feel like I pulled them out of thin air. You're the only person I've seen comment on them. Other people could see and correctly guess things, like all those ships in the harbour. I'm impressed you could see Jason's story about the loggers as a future plot point, as when I wrote that, I disguised it as world-building, so kudos to you for being so vigilant. I still haven't forgotten you predicted what a Zeppelin raid would be like in chapter 7. I am curious if you could see Hark's death coming or if it took you by surprise.
I'm glad you want to see Mammalians and Sapiens come together as friends. I feared that you might not see them as people, but it seems that, just like Jason, you've come to see them in a whole different light, even the Vulpes, as I found your final comment about a Vulpes kid being friends with Sapiens, horrified to learn his ancient past.
Hopefully, you won't have to wait too long for the next chapter, as having in-depth discussions about my stories and the worlds they inhabit, with people like you spur me on.
Oh hell yeah, if I can add a grain of rice to the pile of motivation, i'll gladly do that!
GET MOTIVATED MAN FR THO YOU COOK REAL GOOD (and I’ll likely read some more of your stuff soon enough.)
I too really enjoy going down to the comments and seeing how each person reacts to the story. When it comes to Hark I really didn't care about him, nor like him at all. The instant he said "Oh yeah i've eaten sapiens" along with allowing captured sapiens to be experimented on by the Rattus I immediately lost all respect for him. It's like if you are talking to someone and then they suddenly say "Yup, I will gladly find kidnapped people just like you so I can eat them or profit off them by using them as lab rats. But you helped out of my friend so I won't do that, even if I would otherwise, are we cool?” Like no worstie of course we are not cool lmao those people had families and children just like you (or god forbid, were children themselves). I’ve known people like this in real life (uh, obviously without the eating kidnapped people part lol), and to such a person there is no greater threat than someone that can challenge their ego. The zepellin raid was such a blow to his ego, being reduced from a legendary warrior to a helpless fat guy watching his library and troops get 1915’d, that he immediately threw out all logic and was willing to do a suicide attack against the Sapiens because no longer were they just objects, they were an active threat to his ego. Thankfully his son realized this and once it was done kindly told Tac and Jason to get the fuck out of there. He now knew that any sort of shenanigans with sapiens or his father’s friend could eventually make the leviathan (or something worse) come back for Round 2. Glitch is so far my favorite character and definitely the one I’d prefer to be in the same room with, were I to be somehow shrunk down to Sapien size. She genuinely cares for Jason, understands him, and even if her initial intentions were unsurprisingly to get some money out of him, she actually got something even greater which she treasures far more. A friend who understands and cares for her. (God that felt kinda corny to type out lmao).
Regarding Trix, that is a fair point with she revealing the whole farming thing before Jason found out, the thing that annoys me is that she once again shows a lack of empathy or awareness of the impact of what she says. When she talked about how the two Sapiens in the cage were terrified of her, she didn’t add an extra comment to say anything about her feeling bad about them, or when she talked about the Sapiens farms, she never took a moment to tell Jason that she felt sorry that his people had to go through that, she instead literally shrugged it off. Still, she does take measures to protect Jason, she genuinely has an interest in Sapien culture, and unlike Hark, she has never eaten a Sapien (or at least, according to her she hasn’t, you never know what could’ve happened in the past). I am interested in her intentions. I feel like she ultimately wants to restore respect for the Vulpes’ or even make peace with the Sapiens, but I feel like there is a greater existential reason. While Jason said that the Sapiens never had intentions of wiping anyone out, it wouldn’t surprise me if she already suspected or even knew otherwise. We now know the sapiens can in fact genocide the Vulpes if they wanted, and that they have plans for that. During an all-out war they would likely be the first to go as a starting “Fuck you” from the Sapiens. Especially now that they know from the lab girls that the Rattus were planning to use the Vulpes as a weapon to kill them preemptively, painting an even bigger target on them since now the Sapiens now that. If war started, her people would be the first ones to receive fire and fury from the heavens, and even if the Sapiens ultimately lose, they would make sure to take their life-long enemies with them. I think she is smart enough to realize that.
Also, think this setting truly is perfect for exploring the “outliers” among mammalians. Think of people with the Sapien fascination of Trix and the empathy of Glitch, straight up risking their lives to save captured Sapiens and return them to their settlements. Like, consider some Sapien settlement in which some mammalian, maybe even a predator, slowly wins them over by returning their people and just kinda becomes their local guardian. The amount of possibilities here are insane, some big scary predator showing up every few often to casually chat with Sapiens, watching their airships come and go, letting them get close to them or even allowing them to safely explore the ground by acting as a living barrier between them and any predators (Can you tell that gentle macro interactions like this are a drug to me already?). Anywho, this whole setting and especially the whole Zepellin air raid scene reignited my fascination for airships funny enough. While I already am ultra-autistic for anything aerospace, I’ve come to realize that I’ve never actually drawn an airship. There truly is a deep-seated primal fascination for seeing some big ass thing that really looks like it shouldn’t fly gracefully hovering in the sky. The point is, I shall consider the possibility of making fanart of this story, specifically that big ass explosion in the library with the airship hovering above, I think it would look really cool. I’m not sure when I’d do that tho, but if you don’t mind I could eventually ask you in discord for some details regarding how the scene would look.
GET MOTIVATED MAN FR THO YOU COOK REAL GOOD (and I’ll likely read some more of your stuff soon enough.)
I too really enjoy going down to the comments and seeing how each person reacts to the story. When it comes to Hark I really didn't care about him, nor like him at all. The instant he said "Oh yeah i've eaten sapiens" along with allowing captured sapiens to be experimented on by the Rattus I immediately lost all respect for him. It's like if you are talking to someone and then they suddenly say "Yup, I will gladly find kidnapped people just like you so I can eat them or profit off them by using them as lab rats. But you helped out of my friend so I won't do that, even if I would otherwise, are we cool?” Like no worstie of course we are not cool lmao those people had families and children just like you (or god forbid, were children themselves). I’ve known people like this in real life (uh, obviously without the eating kidnapped people part lol), and to such a person there is no greater threat than someone that can challenge their ego. The zepellin raid was such a blow to his ego, being reduced from a legendary warrior to a helpless fat guy watching his library and troops get 1915’d, that he immediately threw out all logic and was willing to do a suicide attack against the Sapiens because no longer were they just objects, they were an active threat to his ego. Thankfully his son realized this and once it was done kindly told Tac and Jason to get the fuck out of there. He now knew that any sort of shenanigans with sapiens or his father’s friend could eventually make the leviathan (or something worse) come back for Round 2. Glitch is so far my favorite character and definitely the one I’d prefer to be in the same room with, were I to be somehow shrunk down to Sapien size. She genuinely cares for Jason, understands him, and even if her initial intentions were unsurprisingly to get some money out of him, she actually got something even greater which she treasures far more. A friend who understands and cares for her. (God that felt kinda corny to type out lmao).
Regarding Trix, that is a fair point with she revealing the whole farming thing before Jason found out, the thing that annoys me is that she once again shows a lack of empathy or awareness of the impact of what she says. When she talked about how the two Sapiens in the cage were terrified of her, she didn’t add an extra comment to say anything about her feeling bad about them, or when she talked about the Sapiens farms, she never took a moment to tell Jason that she felt sorry that his people had to go through that, she instead literally shrugged it off. Still, she does take measures to protect Jason, she genuinely has an interest in Sapien culture, and unlike Hark, she has never eaten a Sapien (or at least, according to her she hasn’t, you never know what could’ve happened in the past). I am interested in her intentions. I feel like she ultimately wants to restore respect for the Vulpes’ or even make peace with the Sapiens, but I feel like there is a greater existential reason. While Jason said that the Sapiens never had intentions of wiping anyone out, it wouldn’t surprise me if she already suspected or even knew otherwise. We now know the sapiens can in fact genocide the Vulpes if they wanted, and that they have plans for that. During an all-out war they would likely be the first to go as a starting “Fuck you” from the Sapiens. Especially now that they know from the lab girls that the Rattus were planning to use the Vulpes as a weapon to kill them preemptively, painting an even bigger target on them since now the Sapiens now that. If war started, her people would be the first ones to receive fire and fury from the heavens, and even if the Sapiens ultimately lose, they would make sure to take their life-long enemies with them. I think she is smart enough to realize that.
Also, think this setting truly is perfect for exploring the “outliers” among mammalians. Think of people with the Sapien fascination of Trix and the empathy of Glitch, straight up risking their lives to save captured Sapiens and return them to their settlements. Like, consider some Sapien settlement in which some mammalian, maybe even a predator, slowly wins them over by returning their people and just kinda becomes their local guardian. The amount of possibilities here are insane, some big scary predator showing up every few often to casually chat with Sapiens, watching their airships come and go, letting them get close to them or even allowing them to safely explore the ground by acting as a living barrier between them and any predators (Can you tell that gentle macro interactions like this are a drug to me already?). Anywho, this whole setting and especially the whole Zepellin air raid scene reignited my fascination for airships funny enough. While I already am ultra-autistic for anything aerospace, I’ve come to realize that I’ve never actually drawn an airship. There truly is a deep-seated primal fascination for seeing some big ass thing that really looks like it shouldn’t fly gracefully hovering in the sky. The point is, I shall consider the possibility of making fanart of this story, specifically that big ass explosion in the library with the airship hovering above, I think it would look really cool. I’m not sure when I’d do that tho, but if you don’t mind I could eventually ask you in discord for some details regarding how the scene would look.
Welll, i suppose now i have to wait idk how much. One of the best macro stories so far. Funny how Carlos recommeneded me this story when i told him that i had a similar idea to this but everyone were furry and the macros were actually the opressed ones and now find it funny how many coincidences it has with some of my ideas, like they literally come out of my mind. Like the idea of total trust, the otters being some kind of great britain. And micros culture of survival.
Little detail of this chapter that i find it funny is that this is actually a way better organization than our real life counterpart of the ONU lol. If this was ONU like. The vulpines could just veto indefinetely even if everyone agrrees lol. And the biggest power acting as a judge instead of participating in it. That is actually quite a gamble because that means you cannot impulse your own interests, which is the point of course so others trust the system.
I hope that you find the energies to continue this until the end. I will give an opportunity to you other stories.
Little detail of this chapter that i find it funny is that this is actually a way better organization than our real life counterpart of the ONU lol. If this was ONU like. The vulpines could just veto indefinetely even if everyone agrrees lol. And the biggest power acting as a judge instead of participating in it. That is actually quite a gamble because that means you cannot impulse your own interests, which is the point of course so others trust the system.
I hope that you find the energies to continue this until the end. I will give an opportunity to you other stories.
Hey Catminino. First off, I meant to ask you - back in your comment on chapter 3 - who recommended my story to you. Secondly, don't feel discouraged that your story is similar to mine in concept and ideas. In fact, I hope you publish it, not just because I would like to read something you've written, but because you've made me curious to see the world you've created. I love how some of our idea's mixed, as total trust and micro culture of survival are general aspects of any Macro/Micro interaction story. As for the Otters being some kind of Great Britain, well, I based my Otters on two people, the "Mycenaean Greeks" and the "Republic of Venice."
The Lutrinae being judges was something I felt would naturally occur. They would want to remain neutral while encouraging trust in the "Laws of Trade." I kind of based the Council on the ONU, IE five major heads. But unlike the ONU, one party can not veto by themselves, and require a three-fourth's majority. That way, no one tribe can hold sway over the rest. It would encourage negotiations and lessen the chance of war, lest the others all gang up on them, or suffer economic isolation. That's one of the tricky parts of world building. Creating a system that the reader can look at and say, "Oh yeah, that can work."
I hope you find my other stories just as entertaining. If you enjoy them, let me know, and if you have any constructive criticism, please, don't hesitate to tell me: like you did with the Death of Hark back in chapter 13. I really, REALLY appreciate people telling me these things.
The Lutrinae being judges was something I felt would naturally occur. They would want to remain neutral while encouraging trust in the "Laws of Trade." I kind of based the Council on the ONU, IE five major heads. But unlike the ONU, one party can not veto by themselves, and require a three-fourth's majority. That way, no one tribe can hold sway over the rest. It would encourage negotiations and lessen the chance of war, lest the others all gang up on them, or suffer economic isolation. That's one of the tricky parts of world building. Creating a system that the reader can look at and say, "Oh yeah, that can work."
I hope you find my other stories just as entertaining. If you enjoy them, let me know, and if you have any constructive criticism, please, don't hesitate to tell me: like you did with the Death of Hark back in chapter 13. I really, REALLY appreciate people telling me these things.
I keep returning to The Odyssey and rereading your saga. And my love for the series hasn't waned over time, but intensified. To many here, it's one of the best macrofur stories with diplomacy and economics in it not seen since Spice and Wolf. The worldbuilding has me excited for what comes next.
Another reason why it's so captivating for rereads is, if you follow the breadcrumbs, each chapter has hints for what awaits the main characters in the next. You have dropped titbits in earlier chapters that there is a precarious balance of power in this world. That Lutrinae judge hates Jason, and wants no trade or peace, but wants him destroyed; he is a threat to their very way of life, as many Mammalians want flying machines/technology instead of outdated boats. What's hilarious in real-life is, approximately 90% of all goods are transported by sea. Sapiens wouldn't remove shipping, but improve it. Imagine Jason declaring his love of the ocean to her, and make her seething contempt briefly falter. He would make it hard for her to hate him.
Shique is no doubt Jason's backup plan to escape should negotiations go sour, and he's placing a lot of trust in her to not run off with him and abandon Glitch to an angry mob. While I believe she's hiding her true motives, I think the neovision is child-like, almost pure-hearted in her intents. But like Trix she's a jealous woman, and can Jason really be pulled in three different directions? As you've said before: All mammalians want something from sapiens.
On this note, I'm most excited for Flek. I hope the bigger than average Procyon becomes a recurring character like Tac was. The Lutrinae judge is practically gift-wrapping Jason for him to eat and remove his threat to her way of life. But he'd be a fool to throw away the keys to the future. Flek may outsmart Jason's plan to escape but also betray the Judge. He's going to want Jason for himself, the law of trade is on the Procyons side. Jason's worth is immeasurable and he's the key to the future for all Mammalians.
I hope this because its poetic that Jason's journey across the world may end where it started, with the Procyons. Perhaps Flek's inclusion is their races atonement in this saga, and like the Vulpes, Jason will see them in a sympathetic light - they are struggling and mostly poor. They have the cunning and intelligence of the Vulpes and Rattus combined, yet have nothing to show for it, always left out of trade deals and having little power or influence.
If Flek is smart, he will demand Jason remain with mammalians... as their ambassador. Specifically, his ambassador. Power and trade will be shared, but the Procyons will finally get their fair cut and improve their situation.
Its an offer Jason can't refuse, he has a terrible weakness Flek can easily exploit: Glitch. They are the perfect couple, and he adores that Oryctolagus girl and she adores him (romance chapter when? lol). It's not hard to make Jason stay put and not return to Sapien civilization, especially if Glitch's safety and liberty cannot be guaranteed otherwise.
What I'm also looking forward to, is what other Sapiens have to say when they discover Jason is negotiating peace with Mammalians and their sworn enemies the Vulpes - they'll think he's gone absolutely mad. Oh, and his best friend (wife and lover, lol) is an Oryctolagus girl - yep they'll probably accuse him of treason.
Don't be afraid to brainstorm with us on Discord, looking forward to what you're cooking.
Another reason why it's so captivating for rereads is, if you follow the breadcrumbs, each chapter has hints for what awaits the main characters in the next. You have dropped titbits in earlier chapters that there is a precarious balance of power in this world. That Lutrinae judge hates Jason, and wants no trade or peace, but wants him destroyed; he is a threat to their very way of life, as many Mammalians want flying machines/technology instead of outdated boats. What's hilarious in real-life is, approximately 90% of all goods are transported by sea. Sapiens wouldn't remove shipping, but improve it. Imagine Jason declaring his love of the ocean to her, and make her seething contempt briefly falter. He would make it hard for her to hate him.
Shique is no doubt Jason's backup plan to escape should negotiations go sour, and he's placing a lot of trust in her to not run off with him and abandon Glitch to an angry mob. While I believe she's hiding her true motives, I think the neovision is child-like, almost pure-hearted in her intents. But like Trix she's a jealous woman, and can Jason really be pulled in three different directions? As you've said before: All mammalians want something from sapiens.
On this note, I'm most excited for Flek. I hope the bigger than average Procyon becomes a recurring character like Tac was. The Lutrinae judge is practically gift-wrapping Jason for him to eat and remove his threat to her way of life. But he'd be a fool to throw away the keys to the future. Flek may outsmart Jason's plan to escape but also betray the Judge. He's going to want Jason for himself, the law of trade is on the Procyons side. Jason's worth is immeasurable and he's the key to the future for all Mammalians.
I hope this because its poetic that Jason's journey across the world may end where it started, with the Procyons. Perhaps Flek's inclusion is their races atonement in this saga, and like the Vulpes, Jason will see them in a sympathetic light - they are struggling and mostly poor. They have the cunning and intelligence of the Vulpes and Rattus combined, yet have nothing to show for it, always left out of trade deals and having little power or influence.
If Flek is smart, he will demand Jason remain with mammalians... as their ambassador. Specifically, his ambassador. Power and trade will be shared, but the Procyons will finally get their fair cut and improve their situation.
Its an offer Jason can't refuse, he has a terrible weakness Flek can easily exploit: Glitch. They are the perfect couple, and he adores that Oryctolagus girl and she adores him (romance chapter when? lol). It's not hard to make Jason stay put and not return to Sapien civilization, especially if Glitch's safety and liberty cannot be guaranteed otherwise.
What I'm also looking forward to, is what other Sapiens have to say when they discover Jason is negotiating peace with Mammalians and their sworn enemies the Vulpes - they'll think he's gone absolutely mad. Oh, and his best friend (wife and lover, lol) is an Oryctolagus girl - yep they'll probably accuse him of treason.
Don't be afraid to brainstorm with us on Discord, looking forward to what you're cooking.
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