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Took some time off from x-mas gift makings and finished a page on my comic :3
Still maybe a bit boring, but hang in there! To build up a good story and characters you can't rush the beginning.
Next: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5069926/
previous: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4693582/
FIRST:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4428214/
Still maybe a bit boring, but hang in there! To build up a good story and characters you can't rush the beginning.
Next: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5069926/
previous: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4693582/
FIRST:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4428214/
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 840 x 1169px
File Size 684.8 kB
Yay for air! AND PIE!
Suggestion for the next time. On the second panel: it would more clearly be a panel if you just didn't overlaps the frame. Plus side for that would be the help reader read the speechbubbles i right order for the first time. Sometimes overlapping the frame is okay, but it has to be for a reason. For example huge ass panel where person is reaching their hands in action movement or emotional moment: there the hands could go over the previous panel etc.
But of course, I have to regognize that you use manga influence concidering the last panel. In there one could have done the panel just not so high than the panel were Sedek is.
It s great how big effort you are putting in here. :3 Keep up the good work!
Suggestion for the next time. On the second panel: it would more clearly be a panel if you just didn't overlaps the frame. Plus side for that would be the help reader read the speechbubbles i right order for the first time. Sometimes overlapping the frame is okay, but it has to be for a reason. For example huge ass panel where person is reaching their hands in action movement or emotional moment: there the hands could go over the previous panel etc.
But of course, I have to regognize that you use manga influence concidering the last panel. In there one could have done the panel just not so high than the panel were Sedek is.
It s great how big effort you are putting in here. :3 Keep up the good work!
Yes, air! It worked awesome, thank you so much for the advice! XD
And yes, I can see your point, I thought maybe putting the speech bubble where her boob should be, would be a clever trick but ...yeah XD We learn as we go! Thank you so much for all the interest and advice, I really really appreciate it!^3^
And yes, I can see your point, I thought maybe putting the speech bubble where her boob should be, would be a clever trick but ...yeah XD We learn as we go! Thank you so much for all the interest and advice, I really really appreciate it!^3^
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