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The complete first chapter, please give me feed back.^^
Category Story / All
Species Tiger
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 28.5 kB
The idea is good, and a rare thing seen on FA. Now, a beginning of a story is an important thing. It helps build up work and lets the audience be dragged in. First person is harder to control as well as it must be balanced with reaction with the characters and the environment. Main characterization is best introduced through natural events, the character traits best seen and build throughout a work, instead of broken in addressing the audience by the character. Keep writing and improving. Good luck with rest. I believe the story idea itself is very beautiful and excellent.
Hey, thanks man, yeah, i've been tied up dealing with the winter ball that were about to hold in a couple of days, If u want to know were we are now. Well, I'm on the school council, Daniel is on the soccer team, and Mike is on the boxing team, plus there are other friends I made on the way threw my life, at this point however, I was really closed off and had only these two and I really can't remember how I became friends with them. Sad, huh. ^^
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