cool

Awesome. Though to make a critique I'd need to see more. I'd like to see how the story develops.

Agreed. So far it's good, but for an honest critique I'd need to see more.

I understand. But I'm a bit stuck with the translation from spanish to english. Someone is helping me on that because my english in not really perfect, and this dude is a bit slow, he has translated only 3 of the 13 chapters I wrote. So I don't want to publish the story until I have a good ammount of text ready.

What I ask is critique about the graphic quality, style, if black'n'white sucks or whatever you can opine of this image, for now.

Maybe I could help a bit? I speak portuguese, which isn't far from spanish, and I've been to spain some times. I could give it a try even though I've been pretty busy lately (tests, etc. etc.).

That would be amazing! If you really think you can have the time for it, I can lend you some chapters for you to see how goes the story and maybe, if you like it, help with the translation.

Sure :p

(thing is, I'm super lazy :P How big are the chapters?)

Mostly 2 pages in word standard text size. Some sex scenes goes a bit longer tho.

(I've never done anything like this before. I might've just been pretty stupid to offer to work on it. :P)

Besides, my spanish sucks. Anyway, send me a note with one chapter. I'll see if I can at least understand what's there. If I can't, then I'm probably not gonna be able to do much.

It's fine, I understand if you wanted to help but later you realized that may not be able to xD

I'll send you the prologue + the first chapter in a message.

I would really love to see how this comic turns out.

well the art is beautiful , it looks like it'll be a perfect sci-fi type romance , if you ask me there's just a small wording glitch , quite small enough to be acceptable in a comic book such as this type , but if converted into speech (like dubbing if ever a cartoon) , , like for example - the syntax setup I'd've put "ALL OF A SUDDEN" at the top of that panel in it's own rectangular box then at the bottom of the upper panel start it as " I'm possibly " instead of the word probably then in the last panel the word get should be GOTTEN

those are just 2 minor details but even if it's spoken in that type of broken english an accent willl make it o.k. , or not depending there also , , for an example of spoken

a little (foreign) child could pull it off but a brithish college proffesor could not

Thanks for pointing that. I'm not really good at english, but if I decide to go ahead with the comic I'll seek for a helper in the english version to make it well written.

with images like that you relly don't need much words & possibly if you do not make the story anymore complex you will not need any further words at all

The story has lot of questions to answer, the comic also will need a lot of words while they are not having sex

I know you can have romance without sex & sex without romance but you might be right the comic might be hard to publish&sell if one or both/all characters are deaf &or mute

Grandioso principio, espero poder ver el grandioso comic que vas a hacer

Gracias! Lamentablemente solo estaré trabajando en esto una vez termine mi actual trabajo, esto será cerca del 17 de enero. Si todo va bien empezaré a publicar este comic a principios de febrero en español e inglés.