From a grammar and spelling standpoint it is fairly well written. The first sentence of the second paragraph does need to be fixed - his mother dressed themselves black cloaks - and switching between first and third person, and back again, was slightly confusing in the middle of a paragraph. The only other thing is that typically when characters speak and respond it is usually seperated by paragraphs. And if its a beginning, I think its a Prologue not an Epilogue.

Other than that, I like the idea and the wording. Great way to start a character, though; nothing like anger, sadness, and abandonment to forge a character.

I can't believe I switched between points of views. Shame on me...

Hopefully, fixed.
And thank you.

Absoutely! The story sounds interesting and I'd like to read more so keep up the good work.

That was really heartbreaking, Kurogetsu shouldn't be treated like that.

It's a great intro to your story. :3

Thank you ^^