I like the writing/progression a lot.

For critique, I would suggest adding delay and/or reverb to the pianos? Also, seeing if you can do something with the velocities on them. They sound very stiff and programmed at the moment, not like they were played by an actual performer.

Now, if that's the vibe you're going for tho (Which could work as well) obviously disregard that last comment.

You´re right and i wish i could. but the file is broken now... arrgh! I hate Music Maker <____<