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REPOSTED: (with better coloring)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4982107/
I wanted more practice with muscles, so when in doubt, use Demi as a model. XD
CRITIQUE WANTED, please! ^^
Any comments, constructive criticism, tips, anything is very much appreciated! <3
Art by me.
Demi belongs to
djdarkfox
He can repost
~Enjoy a sexy buff muscle fox! :D (woo hoo! That's my big bro!)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4982107/
I wanted more practice with muscles, so when in doubt, use Demi as a model. XD
CRITIQUE WANTED, please! ^^
Any comments, constructive criticism, tips, anything is very much appreciated! <3
Art by me.
Demi belongs to
djdarkfoxHe can repost
~Enjoy a sexy buff muscle fox! :D (woo hoo! That's my big bro!)
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Muscle
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 1027 x 1186px
File Size 2.07 MB
Ugh, you really make things hard to critique... XD I guess I'll just do what I'm good at... I think, you could probably go over a few spots again with your light shading, as it looks kinda off-put by the yellow light source... ;3 the main problem would probably be the white space that I tend to forget about in the background, but details, right? XDD I'm sure they'll be worked on eventually, so no hurries, kay?
Either way, this pic is really hot, and, extremely hard to find anything that could be worked on, unless you've got that specific eye for it. My eye deals in shading and coloring techniques as my signature in style. It's very good, especially considering that the subject is mostly white fur color. You definitely used the blues and grays for shading, so you got that experienced touch in that category. It's probably my eye in that aspect, but I honestly think more color might be needed... XD
Either way, this pic is really hot, and, extremely hard to find anything that could be worked on, unless you've got that specific eye for it. My eye deals in shading and coloring techniques as my signature in style. It's very good, especially considering that the subject is mostly white fur color. You definitely used the blues and grays for shading, so you got that experienced touch in that category. It's probably my eye in that aspect, but I honestly think more color might be needed... XD
This is just a personal preference, mind you. I think the muscles could be a little less exaggerated. You do EXCELLENT work with them, and they look amazingly real. Just, i think that doing a little toning down/smoothing of one muscle group into another might be nice. Just a personal preference.
And now that you have the bodies down, try putting that much detail into the faces ^^ There are quite a few interesting muscles in faces too :D
but overall - this is the kind of work that i enjoy seeing - incredibly accurate anatomy, great posing, and wonderful color work ^^
Keep up the great artings :D
And now that you have the bodies down, try putting that much detail into the faces ^^ There are quite a few interesting muscles in faces too :D
but overall - this is the kind of work that i enjoy seeing - incredibly accurate anatomy, great posing, and wonderful color work ^^
Keep up the great artings :D
The only critique points I found:
THe veins look odd, especially the one on the flexed arm. It doesn´t follow the bulged of the muscles, it looks more like a thick spiderweb. Especially the vein from the biceps to the downer arm.
The other vein looks too big (for my taste)
Also the flexed arm looks a bit too short.
But the rest of the pic looks great. ^^
THe veins look odd, especially the one on the flexed arm. It doesn´t follow the bulged of the muscles, it looks more like a thick spiderweb. Especially the vein from the biceps to the downer arm.
The other vein looks too big (for my taste)
Also the flexed arm looks a bit too short.
But the rest of the pic looks great. ^^
You shadows are weak and the yellow lighting is to pronounced. Try blending down the yellow a bit to add a nicer fur effect with the lighting. Also the shadows though in the right points don't have the proper contrast levels to be all that noticeable. Demi has white to silvery fur, hence he would have a more extreme level of shading. In this case the shading is to light for this kind of hard lighting; try increasing the darkness about 4-8 shades and you should be good.
^^ many thanks, and please let me know how I did, trying to fix it!
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4982107/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4982107/
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