Alon's condition rapidly worsens, and the clan gathers to hear him pass on his title and give his final orders to the clan. But not everyone likes what he has to say...

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This is another chapter that could have used a rewrite. Reading back over it, a lot of things seem oversimplified, artificial and a bit heavy-handed; however, I do very much like Alon and Nesleh's brief spiritual discussion, and the spiritual beliefs that dragons have in general (I forget how much more detail about that will be given, later on).

And of course it would be Carnoc, the most temperamental and dangerous of all the dragons, who gets caught by humans. They better hope that he doesn't wake up, they tie him up tight, or both... Enjoy. :3

Comments and critique greatly appreciated.