My attempt for this week's Thursday Prompt. I've complained about the last two prompts being difficult but this one was just unfair! "Bold"? Literally the polar opposite of me.
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Had a hard time starting this one but I didn't want to default to using my Severed Roads characters again (they're supposed to be busy dealing with their own mess). However, as I was writing this up, I started to think to myself that this could become a story on its own. Not real sure if I'll act on that, but I had fun with this regardless.
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Thursday_Prompt if you want actually good writing.Had a hard time starting this one but I didn't want to default to using my Severed Roads characters again (they're supposed to be busy dealing with their own mess). However, as I was writing this up, I started to think to myself that this could become a story on its own. Not real sure if I'll act on that, but I had fun with this regardless.
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Thank you for saying so.
As I was writing this one, I remembered you saying you had managed to turn some of your prompts into novels. Not real sure if I could accomplish that, but I've already decided to expand upon this one a bit. That said, thank you for the bit of inspiration.
As I was writing this one, I remembered you saying you had managed to turn some of your prompts into novels. Not real sure if I could accomplish that, but I've already decided to expand upon this one a bit. That said, thank you for the bit of inspiration.
Alluding to Grace's motives without actually answering the question was handled well. The progression of our first impression, her resolution, moving toward a contained desperation revealed within, that was a nice touch. All within the boring confines of an outdated office. Just goes to show that the setting doesn't have to be complex for good storytelling.
It means a lot to hear you think this one went well. I was a bit worried that the outdated office setting might have been a bit cliché and I may have dropped the ball there. To be honest, I was also a bit worried that I might not have pulled off controlled panic Grace experiences throughout the scene; just seems a bit forced when I look back on it.
Regardless, it was fun to write up and I've almost figured out how to start Grace's story properly.
Regardless, it was fun to write up and I've almost figured out how to start Grace's story properly.
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